Looking for advice and critics
Hi everyone, first time for me to post on Reddit I hope I do things right:)
I’ve been working on this project for a few months. The idea to talk about the homo Neanderthals who’s our closest cousin. 400.000 years of evolutions separate them from us, they had a different biology, culture, way of living, evolving, etc, but they were as smart as us ! It’s a very different kind of humanity that I want to tell, to question our own humanity (who, has we know, is leading us very quickly to our end). I think that thinking of an other way of being human can tell so much about us, about how we can live on this planet and our role.
Kind of a philosophical subject but Im still to working on the scenario, Im trying to make a nice fiction:)
So this is a beginning, I haven’t write the whole story yet.
It’s the first time of my life I show my work, please be honest (but nice:), tell me everything that goes through your head when you read these comic strips
Ps : the front cover is just here to put the title, it’s not definitive
English isn’t my first language so im sorry if the explanation isnt perfect:(