I just finished editing chapter 4 so here it is. I definitely had a lot to edit with this chapter as it was probably one of my weakest before editing. now I can confidently say that it is very strong.
enjoy!
I just Finished editing chapter 3 so here it is! this chapter is one of my most favorite and introduces a character of my own creation. This chapter always makes me laugh and her character serves as comedic relief in this dreadful story. let me know how you like it and definitely read the previous chapters if you haven't yet. I will include links to them in the comment section.
thanks to everyone that reads these and gives me feedback.
Enjoy!
Chapter 2 is done! Thanks again to everyone that took interest in chapter 1 and all that helpful feedback. Ask questions and let me know how you like it. this was an especially hard chapter to write for me because it has Hoid in it. If you haven't read chapter 1, I would definitely recommend starting from that.
Feel free to repost and share with whomever you want, and even print it off if you would like. My editing process is really unrefined and I am having to learn a lot along the way but if you would like the full unedited document I am absolutely willing to send you a copy for free. The editing process will just clean up words and sentences, but nothing in the actual story will change.
My ultimate goal with this is pretty lofty but I would really love to attract Brandon's attention with this and maybe work for him in the future. I have so many more ideas for his worlds and even some original stories I would love to see and will probably write. Brandon has stated many times that he doesn't have the time to write everything he would want to, so maybe I could do some of that.
Either way, all input is really appreciated (including a more efficient way to post pages or formatted text). I really would love to hear everything you have to say, even the bad stuff. I have learned through this project that I want to be an author so I want to learn as much as possible from you all and get helpful feedback.
Enjoy!
(sorry to anyone who has seen this twice now. I had some trouble posting it the first time and the second time.)
Hello! This is my first time posting here, but I have recently finished a fan fiction book based off of Reen. He was a character that I was always fascinated with so I wrote his story. The entire book is about 300 pages long and I promise this isn't your average fan-fiction. This is supposed to be a full blown novel about Reen. I want to share it with as many people as possible so I have included photos of chapter 1 and I intend to continue posting chapters as I finish editing it.
Feel free to repost and share with whomever you want, and even print it off if you would like. My editing process is really unrefined and I am having to learn a lot along the way but if you would like the full unedited document I am absolutely willing to send you a copy for free. The editing process will just clean up words and sentences, but nothing in the actual story will change.
My ultimate goal with this is pretty lofty but I would really love to attract Brandon's attention with this and maybe work for him in the future. I have so many more ideas for his worlds and even some original stories I would love to see and will probably write. Brandon has stated many times that he doesn't have the time to write everything he would want to, so maybe I could do some of that.
Either way, all input is really appreciated (including a more efficient way to post pages or formatted text). I really would love to hear everything you have to say, even the bad stuff. I have learned through this project that I want to be an author so I want to learn as much as possible from you all and get helpful feedback.
Enjoy!