u/bruhson1

hey writers im looking for advice

im currently writing a show with my friend, now i layout the basic format, he fixes stuff, continuity, stuff like that, but how do i write scenes in detail? like for example
Character a and b are having an arguement, heres the raw scene/paragraph example
(a tells b that they ran out of cheese, b beats the shit out of a for finishing the cheese, then a sattelite crashes ontop of them and kills them.) how do i turn this into a script so we can act it out in a scene (its a puppet show series thing) and im having trouble getting ideas and making it funny, any advice for writing a show in the first place and how to turn these paragraphs into text and actions?

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u/bruhson1 — 3 days ago
▲ 17 r/puppets

Deshawn

Soon to be finished after I make his legs and clothes

u/bruhson1 — 4 days ago
▲ 27 r/puppets

Goofy lil guy

Is this character a funny looking one? I made him very hastily with felt a sock and tape, not to mention a fake beard costume mask thing

I want to use him as like a imaginary friend in my channel soon, he's my first puppet so im not sure what to do with him or what purpose he would serve, but im proud of it he serves his purpose of being butt ugly and goofy

u/bruhson1 — 7 days ago

recently i wanted to start making puppets and make videos with said puppets, however, i do not know how to design the puppets themselves, as in personality and clothing, how to make a unique character with unique features, and this type of things

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u/bruhson1 — 25 days ago