Help with a custom Origin/Trait for Peter Parkedcar (Spider-Mobile)
Hey everyone! I’ve been lurking for a while, and I’m really impressed by all the creativity in building profiles here! I’ve got a bunch that I’m working on myself, including Spider-Mobile (Peter Parkedcar) from the Spider-Verse comics and movies, and wanted to get some feedback on a custom origin and trait idea for him.
Origin: Sentient Car
The character is a resident of Earth-53931, a reality populated by living cars instead of humans, or a similar reality.
Examples: Aunt-T, J. Jonah Jalopy, Mr. Reo Speedbuggy, Spider-Mobile (Peter Parkedcar)
Tags: Extreme Appearance
Traits: Big, Vehicle
Powers: Illumination, Speed Run 1, Sturdy 1
Limitation: Unless the character has another origin, they cannot choose other powers.
Trait:
Vehicle: This character can act as a vehicle for other characters they are carrying. You block line of sight to any characters you are carrying. You may voluntarily give control of your movement to an operator, or a character can forcibly take control on their turn with successful check of their Agility vs. your Ego. You can take back control from an operator on your turn with a successful check of your Ego vs. the target’s Agility. An operator uses their own agility for movement checks instead of your agility. If you are being driven/piloted by an operator, you lose your Movement Action on your turn, and your operator can use their Movement Action to move you on their turn.
Is this balanced? Agility is usually used for driving/piloting, but should the checks for control against a driver be vs. Melee, like the driver is forcefully using strength to take control, or an option for either?