u/demboy19xx

Ashes of the Zone: DE - Chapter 4

Borrowed Peace

"Some places in the Zone don't leave scars on your body. They leave them somewhere deeper."


May 12th, 17:46 - Yantar Ecologist Bunker

The heavy steel gate groaned shut behind them.

For the first time since leaving Cordon, the sound felt reassuring.

Inside the perimeter, the atmosphere changed immediately. Men in bright orange environmental suits hurried between prefabricated buildings carrying crates filled with measuring equipment instead of ammunition. Radios crackled with strings of scientific jargon Mantis couldn't hope to understand. Somebody argued over radiation readings. Another cursed at a malfunctioning detector while a technician calmly dismantled it on the hood of an old UAZ.

The place was busy.

Not with soldiers preparing for battle, but with researchers trying to understand a world that refused to make sense.

Ferimov finally allowed himself to relax.

His shoulders, tense since they'd entered Garbage that morning, lowered ever so slightly.

"We made good time."

Orlov smiled.

"I told you Mantis would keep up."

"I said he probably would."

"You said fifty-fifty."

"I was being optimistic."

The younger scientist rolled his eyes.

"You have a strange definition of optimism."

Ferimov ignored him.

"I've got paperwork to finish before somebody starts asking where I've been."

He adjusted the straps on his backpack before pointing toward a long building near the center of the compound where smoke drifted lazily from a metal chimney.

"And I've been thinking about proper food since Agroprom."

"The kitchen?" Orlov asked.

"The kitchen."

"You've been thinking about food since Garbage."

"I've been alive long enough to know priorities."

Without another word, Ferimov peeled away from the group and disappeared toward the cooking quarters, already removing his gloves as he walked.

Orlov watched him go before shrugging.

"He'll be there for at least half an hour."

"He eats that slowly?"

"No, he complains that slowly."

Mantis almost let out a chuckle.

"So..."

Orlov adjusted his glasses.

"Come on."

"I'll introduce you to Professor Sakharov."


They crossed the compound at an easy pace.

Up close, Yantar looked even stranger than it had from outside the walls.

One scientist carefully lowered a glowing blue artifact into a thick lead container while another recorded measurements on a PDA without ever looking away from the object.

Nearby, two stalkers unloaded mutant carcasses from the back of a military truck.

A pseudodog, several blind dogs and something wrapped beneath a bloodstained tarp that Mantis couldn't identify.

Nobody paid them much attention.

People nodded politely as Orlov passed, some greeted him by name, while others simply continued working.

"They all know you."

Orlov smiled sheepishly.

"I've been stationed here almost a year."

"A whole year?"

"Almost."

"And you're still excited about everything."

"I hope I never stop."

He looked around the compound with obvious affection.

"Most people think the Zone is something to fear."

"I think it's something to understand."

Mantis looked toward the researchers carefully transporting another sealed container.

"Is that's what all of you think?"

"Mostly."

They walked around an armored truck parked beside one of the laboratories.

"We're Ecologists."

Orlov spread his arms slightly.

"We don't really have enemies."

Mantis raised an eyebrow.

"Really?"

"We try not to."

He thought for a moment.

"We've got agreements with Mercenaries, Freedom, most Loner groups, even Duty leave us alone most of the time."

"And the Bandits?"

Orlov laughed quietly.

"No."

"They'd steal the wheels off our trucks if we stood still long enough."

"So you pay people like me."

"Exactly."

The young scientist's expression softened.

"We study the Zone. You guys make sure we survive long enough to do it."


Professor Sakharov's office occupied one corner of the largest laboratory building.

The door stood open.

Mantis expected an office. Instead it looked more like controlled chaos.

Books covered every available surface. Handwritten notes were pinned to corkboards alongside anomaly photographs and radiation maps. Half-disassembled detectors lay scattered across workbenches beside microscopes, oscilloscopes and electronics that hummed quietly to themselves.

At the center of it all stood an elderly man in an orange environmental suit.

He wasn't looking at the door. He was staring through a microscope.

"Professor?" Orlov knocked gently against the frame.

No answer.

"Professor."

Still nothing.

Orlov cleared his throat.

"Oh, come on... PROFESSOR!"

The older man jumped so violently he nearly knocked the microscope off the table.

"What?"

He blinked several times before noticing them.

"Oh. You made it back."

"We did."

Sakharov's eyes immediately shifted past Orlov.

"And this must be our escort."

Mantis stepped forward.

"Mantis."

The professor offered a surprisingly firm handshake.

"Excellent. You still have all your limbs."

"So far."

"Wonderful."

He released Mantis's hand before immediately asking,

"Tell me. What happened on the road?"

No greeting, no congratulations. Just curiosity.

Mantis briefly described the journey.

The Bloodsucker, the Whirligig, the artifact hunters, the abandoned military installations, the strange silence around Agroprom.

Sakharov never interrupted.

He simply listened, occasionally scribbling something into a small notebook that had appeared from somewhere inside his suit.

When Mantis finished...

The professor remained quiet for several seconds. Then he looked up.

"What did you learn?"

The question caught him off guard.

"I..."

He thought carefully.

"The Zone isn't trying to kill everyone."

Sakharov smiled.

"A common misconception. It kills people, but that isn't the same thing."

Professor paced slowly around the laboratory.

"What else?"

Mantis searched for the answer.

"The anomalies aren't random."

"They aren't."

"The mutants behave like animals."

"Mostly."

"The people are the unpredictable part."

Sakharov stopped walking. For the first time he looked genuinely pleased.

"Interesting."

Orlov smiled proudly.

"See? He notices things."

"I can see that."

The professor's eyes returned to Mantis.

"They usually come here asking what the Zone is. You didn't. You simply described what it did."

He nodded slowly to himself.

"I like that."

Something in the old man's expression unsettled Mantis.

Not because it was hostile. Because it wasn't.

It was fascination.

Pure, relentless fascination.

Like a man who had devoted every waking hour of his life to a single impossible question and refused to accept that it might never be answered.

The Zone wasn't merely Sakharov's profession. It had become his obsession.

He noticed Mantis studying him and smiled.

"Don't worry. I won't make you write reports today."

He waved one hand dismissively.

"You've been walking since dawn. Go get something to eat, talk to the people, sleep."

His smile widened.

"Tomorrow... the Zone can start educating you again."

---

Outside the laboratory, Orlov stretched lazily.

"See? I told you he was different."

"Different."

Mantis looked back toward the office.

"That's one word for it."

"He forgets to sleep. He forgets to eat. Once he accidentally worked for thirty-six hours because somebody showed him an unusual artifact."

Mantis blinked.

"Seriously?"

"He only stopped because he fainted."

"...Right."

Halfway toward the barracks, a sharp metallic clang echoed from inside a small workshop.

Someone swore loudly.

"...Who designs screws this small?"

Orlov laughed.

"That's Peregrine."

The workshop looked as cluttered as Sakharov's office, though in an entirely different way.

Weapon parts covered one bench, circuit boards another.

Half-disassembled detectors hung from hooks beside welding masks, soldering irons and enough tools to rebuild a truck from memory.

A broad-shouldered man in grease-stained work clothes sat behind the central table, tightening a screw inside an opened detector with the concentration of a surgeon.

Without looking up, he spoke.

"If you're bringing me another broken scanner... get lost. Bring it tomorrow."

Orlov leaned against the doorway.

"We brought a new stalker."

That finally earned a glance.

Peregrine looked Mantis over from boots to shoulders.

"Still alive."

"Barely."

"Good. Means you're using him correctly."

His eyes settled on the Beretta resting in Mantis's holster.

"Hm."

He held out one hand.

"Let me see."

Mantis hesitated. Then handed over the pistol.

Peregrine worked the slide twice, checked the barrel, removed the magazine and looked down the sights.

"Hell."

"What?"

"This poor thing has seen some miles."

"It still shoots."

"So does my grandmother. Doesn't mean she enjoys it."

He rotated the pistol beneath the workshop lights.

"The springs are tired, the feed ramp's worn, the finish is practically gone."

He looked back at Mantis.

"I can fix most of that."

Mantis frowned.

"How much?"

Peregrine snorted.

"Nothing. You escorted Orlov and Ferimov home. That saves me repairing two scientists."

He laid the Beretta on the workbench.

"Leave it here. I'll have it looking respectable by tomorrow."

Mantis instinctively reached for the pistol again.

"I don't like being unarmed."

Peregrine nodded.

"Neither do I."

He pointed toward the secured compound outside.

"But unless the mutants suddenly learn to open gates..."

After a long pause... Mantis nodded.

"Take care of it."

Peregrine smiled.

"I always do."


The barracks were quieter than the rest of the compound.

Rows of metal bunks lined the walls, each accompanied by a dented locker and little else. Somebody snored softly from the far corner. Another stalker quietly cleaned a rifle beneath the glow of a small reading lamp.

Mantis found the empty bunk with his name hastily written on a strip of masking tape.

Simple and functional. Enough.

He dropped his backpack onto the mattress before opening one of Sidorovich's canned meat tins with a pocket knife.

The food tasted average. After the day's walk, average was good enough.

He washed at an old sink outside the barracks, the cold water carrying away sweat, dust and dried blood from Garbage.

Not all of it... Some stains never seemed to disappear completely.

By the time darkness settled over Yantar, exhaustion had finally caught him.

He climbed into the narrow bunk, and for the first time in two days...

He wasn't sleeping beneath open skies.

Outside, distant generators hummed steadily beyond the walls.

Somewhere farther away something howled across the marshes.

Nobody in the barracks reacted.

Apparently that was normal here.

Mantis closed his eyes.

Tomorrow the Zone would begin asking new questions.

---

May 13th, 05:13 - Yantar, Ecologist Bunker

Mantis woke before the alarm.

For a few seconds he simply lay there, staring at the ceiling of the barracks while the previous day slowly returned to him.

Cordon. Garbage. The Bloodsucker. Yantar.

The bunk beside his remained empty. Most of the other stalkers still slept, scattered throughout the room beneath worn blankets, their quiet breathing mixing with the constant hum of generators outside. Someone snored loudly near the far wall. Another muttered something unintelligible in his sleep before rolling over.

It almost felt peaceful.

Almost.

He climbed out of bed as quietly as he could, pulled on his boots and stepped outside.

The morning air carried a sharp chill that hadn't been there the previous evening. Mist drifted lazily across the swamp beyond the perimeter fence, swallowing the lower half of the watchtowers. Somewhere in the distance a crow called once before falling silent again.

Mantis walked to the water pump near the barracks and splashed the icy water across his face.

The cold chased away whatever sleep remained.

He lit a Lucky Strike and leaned against the wooden railing outside the building.

The first drag burned pleasantly. For a minute the Zone seemed almost ordinary.

Then someone screamed.

"...YOU MISERABLE SOVIET PIECE OF SHIT!"

The shout echoed across the compound.

Metal clanged. Something heavy hit a workbench.

Another stream of profanity followed, colorful enough that even Mantis found himself raising an eyebrow.

The mechanic's workshop.

He smiled to himself before pushing away from the railing.


Peregrine's workshop was already alive despite the early hour.

The mechanic stood over a cluttered workbench surrounded by springs, screws, tiny metal components and tools scattered in every direction. His sleeves were rolled to his elbows, grease stained both hands, and a welding lamp illuminated whatever disaster occupied the center of the table.

Without looking up he growled,

"If you're here to ask whether it's finished..."

He hit something metallic with a hammer.

"...give me another thirty seconds."

Mantis stepped inside.

"I wasn't."

That made Peregrine glance over his shoulder.

"Oh. It's you."

He looked back at the pistol in front of him.

"Perfect timing."

Mantis frowned.

"Did you even sleep?"

The mechanic actually laughed.

"Maybe."

"You don't sound very convincing."

"I stopped trying sometime around three."

He picked up a tiny screwdriver.

"I found something."

"What?"

Peregrine reached beneath the workbench and produced an old olive-green metal box coated in faded military markings.

He placed it onto the table with obvious satisfaction.

"Forgotten upgrade kit."

Mantis looked at the rusted lettering.

"It says Beretta."

"It does."

"It's older than I am."

"It is."

"So why are you smiling?"

"Because old military engineers occasionally had brilliant ideas."

He pointed toward several pieces still lying inside the box.

"Laser module, flashlight, tritium night sights... and a suppressor."

Mantis's eyebrows rose.

"...Seriously?"

"Oh, absolutely."

Peregrine's smile disappeared.

"The problem..."

He held up a tiny steel bracket.

"...is that this damned thing was designed for Beretta ninety-twos from almost forty years ago."

He pointed accusingly at the pistol.

"Your 92X is newer."

"So nothing fit."

"Nothing fit."

He sighed dramatically.

"I've spent the last four hours arguing with Italian engineering and Soviet engineering at the same time."

Mantis looked at the scattered metal filings.

"Who won?"

Peregrine grinned.

"I did."

He reached beneath the lamp before turning around.

"There."

He handed the pistol over.

For a moment...

Mantis simply stared.

It was still his Beretta.

The worn finish remained.

The familiar scratches along the slide were still there.

But it looked...

Sharper.

A compact suppressor extended the barrel without making the pistol feel bulky. Beneath it sat a combined flashlight and laser module mounted neatly to the frame. The original iron sights had been replaced with glowing tritium inserts that remained clearly visible even beneath the dim workshop lights.

He instinctively brought the pistol up. The sights aligned perfectly. The laser painted a tiny crimson dot across the opposite wall.

"...Damn."

Peregrine folded his arms proudly.

"I know."

Mantis worked the slide. Smooth. Far smoother than before.

"It feels different."

"I polished the feed ramp, replaced the recoil spring and adjusted the trigger. I also cleaned every part that looked older than the Soviet Union."

He shrugged.

"...Which was most of it."

Mantis couldn't hide the smile spreading across his face.

"This is incredible."

Peregrine waved dismissively.

"It's still just a Beretta. Don't get cocky. A good pistol won't save a bad stalker."

He paused.

"But it'll certainly help."

Mantis holstered the weapon, feeling the slightly increased weight settle comfortably against his thigh.

"Thank you."

The mechanic simply nodded.

"Bring it back if you survive."

The man grinned again.

"I'll make it even better."


Professor Sakharov was already awake.

That fact surprised nobody.

When Mantis entered the laboratory he found the elderly scientist exactly where he'd been the previous evening, surrounded by stacks of notes, humming quietly to himself while studying several photographs pinned across an enormous corkboard.

Without turning around he spoke.

"Good morning Mantis."

Mantis blinked.

"You knew I was here?"

"I recognized your footsteps."

"...Seriously?"

"No."

He finally turned around with a faint smile.

"I guessed."

Mantis relaxed.

"I should've known."

"You'll learn."

Sakharov removed his glasses before rubbing tired eyes that suggested he hadn't slept much either.

"I trust Peregrine returned your pistol."

"He improved it."

"He usually does."

The professor wandered toward a large map mounted across one wall.

Pins covered almost every inch. Red, blue and yellow.

Some were connected by handwritten notes, while others simply ended with question marks.

He tapped one location near the center of Yantar.

"I have a job for you."

Mantis stepped closer.

"This?"

"A data collection station. It stopped transmitting during the night."

"What happened?"

"We don't know."

The professor smiled.

"That's why we're sending someone."

His finger drifted toward another marking nearby.

"The station sits not far from the Miracle Machine."

Mantis frowned.

"I've heard the name."

"But not the story. The Miracle Machine wasn't a machine."

Sakharov's tone became noticeably quieter.

"It was an experimental psi-emitter hidden beneath an old industrial complex."

"It projected powerful psychic emissions across much of Yantar."

"What did it do?"

"It destroyed minds."

The answer came without emotion.

"Anyone exposed for too long suffered hallucinations, memory loss, madness..."

He paused.

"In severe cases... zombiefication."

Mantis swallowed loudly and looked back at the map.

"...And it's gone?"

"A team of Free Stalkers disabled it several years ago."

Sakharov nodded.

"The machinery no longer functions."

He smiled faintly.

"The area, however... hasn't entirely forgiven us."

Silence lingered between them.

Eventually the professor folded his hands behind his back.

"Ferimov and Orlov will accompany you. They know the terrain, and they know the anomalies. And if something has changed overnight..."

His expression became thoughtful.

"...I'd rather have experienced eyes nearby."

Mantis nodded once.

"When do we leave?"

Sakharov checked his watch.

"As soon as they've finished breakfast."


Orlov was already waiting near the front gate.

A steaming mug balanced carefully in one hand while the other adjusted the straps of his backpack for what had to be the fifth time.

"You slept?"

"Barely."

"Good."

Ferimov approached moments later carrying his rifle over one shoulder.

He looked exactly the same as yesterday. As though sleep simply wasn't something he required anymore.

His eyes settled briefly on Mantis's pistol.

"Peregrine found another toy."

Mantis smiled.

"A few."

Ferimov nodded approvingly.

"He likes fixing things, but hates admitting when something can't be fixed."

The heavy gate slowly opened.

Beyond it...

Morning mist still clung stubbornly to the marshes.

Yantar waited.

Ferimov adjusted the sling on his rifle before stepping through the gate first.

"Stay close."

"We're heading toward the center."

"The Zone has a habit of changing overnight."

Without another word the three of them disappeared into the fog.


The morning mist clung stubbornly to the marshes as the three of them moved deeper into Yantar.

The bunker disappeared behind the reeds until even the watchtowers were swallowed by the fog.

For a while...

Nothing happened.

Ferimov walked in front with the confidence of someone who had memorized every tree and every patch of unstable ground years ago. Every now and then he altered their course by only a few steps, avoiding places that looked no different from the rest of the swamp.

Mantis had stopped asking why.

If Ferimov stepped around something... So did Mantis.

Orlov walked between them, PDA in one hand, occasionally stopping to record radiation levels or photograph unusual vegetation growing beside stagnant pools.

"You know..."

Orlov looked up from the screen.

"When I first came here, I expected Yantar to be loud."

"Loud?" Mantis asked.

"The Miracle Machine."

He gestured vaguely toward the mist ahead.

"I imagined constant noise. Sirens. Electricity."

He smiled awkwardly.

"In reality..."

He looked around.

"...it's almost peaceful."

Ferimov didn't look back.

"That's what worries me."


May 13th, 6:41 - Yantar, near the industrial complex

The old industrial complex slowly emerged from the fog.

Concrete buildings leaned beneath decades of neglect, their walls stained black by rain and moss. Broken windows stared blankly across the marshes.

A massive steel antenna rose above the rooftops like the skeleton of some forgotten machine.

"The Miracle Machine?" Mantis asked.

Ferimov nodded.

"Beneath it."

The older scientist didn't elaborate. He never did unless someone insisted.

The data collection station sat only fifty meters away.

A small weatherproof metal cabinet mounted beside a rusted floodlight, cables disappearing underground toward the old laboratory complex.

No damage. No bullet holes. No scorch marks.

Nothing.

Orlov frowned.

"It looks intact."

"It is."

Ferimov crouched beside the cabinet before opening it.

A small monitor inside displayed nothing but a blinking cursor.

"It simply stopped transmitting."

He reached into one of his pockets and produced a small black USB drive.

"Mantis."

He handed it over.

"Plug this into the control computer and download everything. Then restart the station."

Mantis nodded.

"That's it?"

"That's it."

"...Feels too easy."

Ferimov looked toward the surrounding fog.

"Never say that out loud."


The cabinet smelled faintly of damp electronics.

Mantis plugged the drive into the computer.

The screen flickered.

TRANSFER INITIATED

17%

The machine hummed quietly.

Outside...

Nothing.

No birds. No insects. Only wind moving through dead reeds.

31%.

Then...

"...help..."

Mantis frowned.

His fingers stopped moving.

Someone had whispered.

He turned.

Ferimov stood exactly where he'd been, studying the tree line.

Orlov busied himself checking another instrument.

Neither had spoken.

He looked back at the screen.

48%.

"...don't..."

The whisper came again, barely audible. Like hearing somebody through several concrete walls.

He slowly looked around the empty marsh.

Nobody. Only fog.

63%.

Another voice. Too quiet to understand.

Then another. Different.

Several people speaking at once. Not loudly. Just enough that he couldn't quite make out the words.

His pulse quickened.

"...Hello?"

Nothing answered.

The whispers continued. Not growing louder. Growing...

Closer.

"Mantis?"

He blinked. Orlov stood beside him now.

"You alright?"

"What?"

"You've been staring at the monitor."

Mantis looked down.

TRANSFER COMPLETE

He hadn't even noticed.

"...Yeah."

"You sure?"

He unplugged the drive.

"I..."

He hesitated.

"...Thought I heard something."

Orlov looked toward the fog.

"I didn't hear anything."

Ferimov closed the cabinet.

"We're done."

Mantis handed him the USB drive.

The older scientist slipped it into a sealed pouch before studying him for a second longer than necessary.

Then he quietly asked,

"How many?"

Mantis frowned.

"...What?"

"The voices."

Silence.

"...How did you know?"

Ferimov adjusted the sling on his rifle.

"One? Several?"

"...Or just whispers?"

Mantis felt his stomach tighten.

"...Whispers."

Ferimov nodded once.

"As I thought."

"What was that?"

The older scientist started walking.

"Because everyone hears them their first time."

He offered nothing more.

No explanation. No reassurance. Only another lesson.

Mantis wasn't sure he liked this one.


The return journey began in silence.

Nobody seemed interested in conversation anymore.

The fog had grown thicker. Every dead tree resembled a figure standing just beyond recognition.

Mantis found himself looking over his shoulder more often than he cared to admit.

The whispers never returned. But the memory of them stayed.

Then...

Leaves rustled.

Not from the wind.

Mantis stopped instantly. His fist rose into the air.

Ferimov and Orlov dropped into a crouch without a word.

"Movement ahead. Between the trees. Three... No. Five figures. Walking slowly through the mist."

Orlov looked once.

His face immediately drained of color.

"...Oh no."

Mantis narrowed his eyes.

"They're stalkers."

Before anyone could say anything more...

One of the figures stopped and its head turned sharply toward them.

Then another.

All five stared directly into the bushes.

"How-"

Gunfire erupted.

Bullets snapped through branches far above their heads.

One struck a tree nearly five meters away. Another buried itself harmlessly into the mud.

"They can't shoot!"

Mantis whispered.

"They're not aiming!"

He pushed forward just enough to see them clearly.

And immediately wished he hadn't.

They wore ordinary stalker gear; sunrise suits, leather jackets, one still carried a detector hanging from his belt, another wore a faded Loner patch.

Human.

Almost.

Their movements were wrong. Stiff. Jerking.

Their eyes... White.

Not blind. Empty.

Foam dribbled from cracked lips.

One dragged his rifle behind him without seeming to notice. Another kept firing long after the magazine had emptied.

Then...

One of them spoke.

"...Don't w..."

His jaw twitched violently.

"...worry..."

He smiled.

Or tried to.

"...Katalynka..."

His voice cracked into a wet gargle.

"...dada's..."

Another step.

"...home..."

Mantis couldn't move.

He lowered the Beretta. His chest tightened.

"They're..."

Ferimov shouted.

"MANTIS!"

No response.

"WHY AREN'T YOU SHOOTING?"

Another burst tore through the trees.

A bullet ricocheted off a rock beside Orlov.

Mantis blinked.

Reality returned all at once.

These weren't people anymore. Not really.

He raised the Beretta and its suppressor coughed softly.

The father collapsed where he stood.

Another zombie turned toward the sound.

Ferimov's rifle thundered.

The body folded backward.

Orlov fired next, his hands shaking, missing twice before finally landing a shot.

The last two continued shambling forward.

Not seeking cover. Not afraid.

Just...

Walking.

Mantis ended it.

One careful shot. Then another.

Silence.

The swamp swallowed the echoes.

Nobody moved.

Orlov lowered his rifle first. His voice barely escaped him.

"...He was already dead."

Mantis stared at the man he'd shot.

"...No."

A long pause.

"...He was still talking."

Ferimov looked at the bodies scattered among the reeds.

"That's the cruelest thing about psi damage."

He slowly reloaded his rifle.

"It leaves just enough of the person behind..."

His eyes lingered on the dead father.

"...to fool you."

Nobody spoke.

Eventually Orlov knelt beside one of the corpses.

"They were stalkers."

His voice sounded hollow.

"Wrong place, wrong time."

He swallowed.

"The Miracle Machine did this for years. And Controllers can do the same."

Mantis frowned.

"...Controllers?"

Orlov looked up.

"You don't want to know."

Ferimov answered for him.

"No."

He turned toward the distant bunker.

"...Not yet."

Mantis looked at the bodies one last time. He hadn't recognized any of them, but he couldn't stop thinking about the name.

Katalynka.

Somewhere, someone had probably spent years wondering why her father never came home.

He turned away.

The Zone had taught him something else.

Sometimes...

Death wasn't the worst thing waiting for a stalker.

reddit.com
u/demboy19xx — 4 days ago

Ashes of the Zone: DE - Chapter 3

The Living Zone

"The Zone doesn't teach through words. It teaches through survivors."


May 12th, 8:32 - Garbage, near the Trash Heaps

The growl rolled across the scrapyard once more.

Closer.

Lower.

It didn't sound like an animal... it sounded wet.

Every instinct Mantis possessed screamed at him to find the source, but no matter where he looked he saw nothing except rusting scrap heaps, waist-high grass swaying gently in the morning breeze, and the endless maze of abandoned machinery stretching toward the horizon.

His Beretta cleared the holster in one smooth motion.

"I still don't see it."

"Neither do I," Orlov admitted, his voice noticeably higher than before.

Ferimov never took his eyes off the grass.

"That's because you're looking for a body."

Another slow breath drifted through the air.

Not theirs.

Something exhaled only thirty meters away. The grass moved. Not by much, but just enough to suggest that something heavy had brushed against it.

Then... nothing.

Silence returned. Even the crows had stopped calling.

Ferimov slowly raised one hand.

"Nobody moves."

Orlov swallowed hard.

"What is it?"

The older scientist answered without taking his eyes off the field.

"A Bloodsucker."

Mantis frowned.

"...A what?"

"You'll understand if it decides we're food."

Another ripple passed through the grass.

This one much faster.

It moved from left to right in a wide arc around them before disappearing again.

Orlov instinctively stepped backward.

"I still can't-"

"I know."

Ferimov cut him off.

"You aren't supposed to."

Mantis narrowed his eyes.

The detector on his belt remained silent.

His ears strained.

There... heavy breathing.

Slow. Deliberate.

Like something pacing around livestock before deciding which one to kill first.

His finger tightened against the trigger.

"Should I shoot if I see movement?"

"No."

Ferimov's answer came instantly.

"Not unless it comes for us."

"You just said it might."

"I said it might."

The older scientist slowly reached into one of the pouches on his suit and removed a rusted steel bolt.

Without warning he tossed it several meters ahead.

The bolt landed with a dull metallic clink.

Nothing happened.

Ferimov nodded almost to himself.

"Good."

"What was that for?" Orlov whispered.

"Sometimes Bloodsuckers avoid anomalies... sometimes they don't."

Mantis kept watching the grass.

Just then, one of the boars rooting through an old pile of tires suddenly froze.

Its ears twitched. It lifted its massive head.

The animal stared directly toward an empty patch of grass.

For several long seconds... nothing happened.

Then the boar squealed.

Not aggressively. It was terrified.

It bolted. It never made it three steps.

The air itself seemed to bend.

For the briefest fraction of a second, something impossible shimmered into existence. A distortion like heat rising from asphalt. Broad shoulders. Long arms ending in hooked claws. A face hidden behind writhing tendrils that opened like the petals of some carnivorous flower.

The creature struck with terrifying speed.

Its claws buried themselves into the boar's side.

The animal screamed.

The sound echoed across Garbage before ending almost instantly.

The Bloodsucker vanished again.

Only the boar remained visible, dragged sideways through the grass as though pulled by invisible cables.

The reeds flattened beneath an enormous weight.

Blood splashed across discarded washing machines and rusted car doors.

Then the movement disappeared into the scrapyard.

Silence returned. Nobody spoke.

Even Orlov seemed incapable of finding words.

Mantis slowly lowered the Beretta.

"...That's a mutant?"

Ferimov finally allowed himself to breathe again.

"One of the worst."

"It ignored us."

"Yes."

"Why?"

The older scientist watched the trail of crushed grass where the invisible predator had disappeared.

"Because today..."

He adjusted the straps on his backpack.

"...it wasn't hunting us."

Orlov finally found his voice.

"So... we just keep walking?"

Ferimov nodded.

"The Zone isn't a battlefield."

He looked at Mantis.

"Remember this."

"Everything here can kill you."

He glanced toward the blood-soaked grass.

"But not everything wants to."

He started walking again as though nothing extraordinary had happened.

"Come on."

Mantis stood still for another second, staring toward the place where the Bloodsucker had vanished.

For the first time he truly understood what Wolf had meant.

People were predictable. The Zone wasn't.

He holstered the Beretta and silently followed the two scientists deeper into Garbage.


The deeper they ventured into Garbage, the less it resembled a place and the more it felt like the remains of an entire civilization dumped into one enormous grave.

The road disappeared beneath fractured concrete and crushed metal, forcing them to weave between rusted trucks, overturned buses and mountains of twisted scrap that rose like cliffs on either side of the path. Every surface bore the same orange-brown scars left by decades of corrosion. Rainwater collected inside broken engines. Tires lay scattered like black skeletons beneath weeds that somehow managed to grow through steel.

The Geiger counter hanging from Ferimov's chest clicked steadily.

Click...

Click...

Click-click...

Without saying a word, the older scientist altered course by several meters.

Mantis noticed immediately.

"Radiation?"

Ferimov nodded.

"A pocket."

"I don't see anything."

"You won't."

They continued walking.

The clicking gradually slowed until it settled back into a lazy rhythm.

Orlov smiled behind his visor.

"The radiation here isn't evenly distributed. Some places are perfectly safe, others will cook your organs without you realizing you've stepped into them."

Ferimov glanced sideways.

"And by the time you realize..."

"...it's already too late," Orlov finished quietly.

The young scientist sighed.

"You always make it sound depressing."

"I make it sound accurate."

They pressed onward.

Not fifty meters later Ferimov stopped again, but this time he didn't look at the Geiger counter.

Instead, his eyes remained fixed on the road ahead.

Without warning he reached into one of the pouches on his belt and tossed something toward Mantis.

He caught it instinctively.

A worn canvas pouch that clinked softly in his hands. Mantis opened it and inside rested twenty rusted steel bolts. He frowned.

"What's this?"

Ferimov continued staring ahead.

"A stalker's best friend. Bolts."

"They're cheaper than funerals."

Orlov chuckled.

"You use them to find anomalies."

"I thought that's what the detector was for."

"The detector finds artifacts," Ferimov corrected.

"The bolts help you stay alive long enough to reach them."

He pointed toward the open ground ahead.

"Walk."

Mantis obeyed. Five careful steps.

"Stop."

The older scientist nodded toward the empty stretch of cracked asphalt.

"Throw one."

Mantis flicked a bolt forward. It skipped harmlessly across the road before disappearing into the weeds.

Nothing happened.

"Again."

A second bolt. Nothing.

A third.

The bolt struck the ground-

-and suddenly lurched sideways.

The air twisted. Dust erupted from the road. Leaves, gravel and scraps of paper lifted from the ground as though caught inside an invisible tornado.

The whirlpool of debris spun faster and faster. The sound rose into a deafening metallic howl. The center collapsed inward for the briefest instant—

BOOM!

Everything exploded outward.

The bolt shot back through the air like a rifle round, screaming past Mantis' ear before burying itself deep inside the side of a rusted delivery truck with a violent clang.

Silence.

Only drifting dust remained.

Mantis stared.

"...What the hell was that?"

Orlov's eyes practically shone.

"A Whirligig! One of the most fascinating gravitational anomalies we've ever documented. It creates an unstable localized distortion capable of trapping almost anything that enters its field before violently releasing accumulated kinetic energy—"

"It turns people into soup."

Ferimov's interruption came so naturally that Orlov barely reacted.

"...That's technically also true."

The older scientist looked at Mantis.

"Again."

"You want me to trigger another one?"

"I want you to find the next one."

For the next several minutes they advanced one careful step at a time.

Bolt.

Walk.

Bolt.

Walk.

Eventually another piece of metal vanished sideways before touching the ground.

Mantis immediately raised a hand.

"There."

Ferimov nodded once.

"Good."

Another bolt.

Another invisible vortex briefly awakened before collapsing again.

This time Mantis didn't flinch. Instead he began studying the pattern: the disturbed dust, the way loose grass leaned inward, the unnatural silence surrounding the anomaly itself.

By the time they reached the far side of the field, he'd only used eleven bolts.

Ferimov looked genuinely satisfied.

"You learn quickly."

"It's because I like breathing."

"Good answer."

Orlov smiled.

"Most people panic the first time."

"I almost did." Mantis added.

"But you didn't."

For the first time that morning Mantis felt like he'd actually earned something.

Not confidence. Understanding.

Only a little, but enough to keep walking.


Half an hour of walking later they spotted movement between two rusting buses.

Two loners.

One crouched low, detector held carefully in front of him while the other advanced several meters ahead, lazily tossing bolts across an open field littered with warped concrete slabs.

Orlov stopped immediately.

"Oh..."

His voice almost became pleading.

"Please."

Ferimov kept walking.

"No."

"Just five minutes."

"No."

"I've never actually watched professionals work this close."

Ferimov sighed.

"You've written two papers about artifact retrieval."

"I observed archived footage. It's just not the same."

The older scientist finally stopped. He looked toward the two stalkers. Then toward the sun.

"...Ten minutes."

Orlov grinned like a child.

"I knew you had a heart."

"I don't."

They approached carefully.

The two stalkers acknowledged them with brief nods before returning to work.

Neither spoke. Neither rushed.

The man with the detector moved slowly, watching the screen with absolute concentration. Every few seconds his partner tossed another bolt into the field ahead.

One landed harmlessly.

Another suddenly disappeared in a shower of sparks before an invisible Electro anomaly burst into life, brilliant blue arcs of electricity dancing between abandoned car wrecks before fading just as quickly.

Mantis watched every movement.

"They always move this slowly?"

Orlov nodded enthusiastically.

"They have to. Artifact hunting is patience. The detector only tells you something valuable is nearby."

He pointed toward the stalker with the bolts.

"The real work is finding a path that doesn't kill you first."

One of the loners suddenly raised his detector. A rapid series of electronic beeps echoed through the scrapyard.

"There."

The second stalker carefully stepped between two anomalies before kneeling beside what looked like nothing more than a patch of cracked earth.

He reached down.

A moment later he lifted a small, translucent object shimmering faintly beneath the sunlight.

It looked like a ball of liquid electricity.

"A Moonlight," Orlov whispered excitedly. "Incredible..."

"What does it do?" Mantis asked.

"It augments the endurance of the person carrying it and sells for several thousand rubles."

Ferimov folded his arms.

"If you survive long enough to sell it."

Mantis kept watching.

"They risk all this..."

He gestured toward the anomaly field.

"...for one artifact?"

Orlov nodded.

"Some artifacts can change a man's life."

Ferimov corrected him.

"Or end it."

The younger scientist ignored him.

"The Zone creates things that simply shouldn't exist."

Ferimov nodded.

"And it kills people trying to understand them."

Mantis watched the two stalkers disappear into the scrapyard with their prize.

"They make it look easy."

"They've probably been doing it for years," Orlov replied.

Ferimov adjusted his backpack.

"They also buried a lot of friends getting that good."

He looked toward the road stretching deeper into Garbage.

"Break's over."

Without another word the trio continued west.


The farther north they traveled, the more Garbage disappeared behind them.

The mountains of scrap slowly gave way to open fields broken only by abandoned warehouses and skeletal factory buildings whose windows had long since surrendered to time. Rust stained every wall. Trees forced their way through cracked foundations. Nature and industry had stopped fighting years ago. Now they simply existed together.

The afternoon sun climbed steadily overhead.

Nobody spoke much.

There was too much to watch.

Every few hundred meters Ferimov would quietly alter their course for reasons Mantis couldn't immediately understand. Sometimes the Geiger counter clicked faster. Sometimes he spotted the faint shimmer of heat where there should have been none. Once they crossed an open stretch of concrete where dozens of bolts still lay scattered from previous stalkers.

"Why didn't they pick them back up?" Mantis asked.

Ferimov glanced at the rusted metal littering the road.

"Because someone decided saving a handful of bolts was worth risking another trip through the anomaly field."

"And?"

"They're still there."

That was answer enough.


The border between Garbage and Agroprom wasn't marked by fences or signs.

The land simply...

Changed.

The scrapyards disappeared behind them, replaced by broad fields stretching toward enormous Soviet industrial buildings that dominated the horizon.

Concrete, steel and silence.

The Agroprom Research Institute rose in the distance like an abandoned fortress, its broken windows staring across the countryside.

Mantis slowed.

"People worked there?"

"Tens of thousands," Ferimov replied.

"Before?"

"Before."

He never explained what before meant. Not because he couldn't, but because everyone in the Zone understood.

Before the disaster. Before the first Exclusion Zone. Before everything changed.

Orlov pointed toward the distant factory complex.

"They developed agricultural technology there."

"Officially."

Ferimov added.

Mantis looked sideways.

"Unofficially?"

The older scientist shrugged.

"Nobody really knows."

"They say there are underground laboratories beneath Agroprom."

Orlov immediately nodded.

"There are!"

Ferimov sighed.

"We think there are."

"The military sealed most of them."

"We think they did."

Orlov frowned behind his visor.

"You always ruin every mystery."

"I've spent twenty years watching mysteries eat people."

That ended the conversation.


Agroprom felt...

Wrong.

Not dangerous. Just wrong.

The wind carried no birdsong. No insects buzzed through the tall grass. Even the trees seemed reluctant to move.

Mantis noticed it before anyone spoke.

"It's quiet."

Ferimov nodded.

"Too quiet."

"Mutants?"

"Sometimes."

"Bandits?"

"Sometimes."

"What is it now?"

The older scientist looked across the empty fields.

"I don't know. And that's what worries me."

They continued.

Halfway across one of the fields, Ferimov suddenly stopped and raised a fist.

All three froze.

Mantis instinctively reached for another bolt.

"No."

Ferimov whispered.

"Listen." And they did.

Nothing.

Then...

A faint metallic clatter echoed somewhere beneath the earth.

Almost like a hatch closing.

Mantis looked around.

"There."

He pointed toward a concrete structure half-hidden beneath bushes.

Only the corner of a heavy bunker door remained visible.

"Military?"

Ferimov nodded.

"One of many."

Orlov looked almost disappointed.

"I wish we had time to explore."

Ferimov looked at him.

"So do the snorks."

"...Right."

They kept walking.


The afternoon passed beneath an endless procession of abandoned checkpoints, collapsed barracks and forgotten military vehicles slowly being reclaimed by vines.

For the first time since entering the Zone, Mantis began noticing something strange.

Nothing here had been destroyed.

It had simply stopped.

Coffee mugs still rested on windowsills, children's bicycles leaned against apartment walls, laundry lines still stretched between houses.

As though the people had stepped outside one morning...

And never returned.

He couldn't stop looking.

Orlov noticed.

"It's eerie."

"It feels..."

Mantis searched for the right word.

"...unfinished."

Ferimov quietly nodded.

"That's exactly what the Zone is."

---

Late afternoon.

The ground slowly became wetter beneath their boots.

The air changed again.

Cooler.

Heavier.

The smell reached them first.

Wet earth.

Standing water.

Rotting reeds.

Then came the radiation.

Click...

Click...

Click-click-click...

The Geiger counter never stopped now.

Only changed its rhythm.

"We're close," Ferimov said.

"To Yantar?"

"To its problems."

Mist drifted lazily across the marshes ahead.

Dead trees rose from shallow pools like skeletal fingers clawing toward the grey sky.

The silence returned.

Not the silence of Cordon, Not the silence of Agroprom.

Something else.

Almost...

Oppressive.

Orlov unconsciously moved closer to the older scientist.

"I always forget this place feels like..."

Ferimov finished the sentence.

"...the world holding its breath."


May 12th, 17:38 - Yantar Outskirts

Eventually the reeds opened.

Mantis stopped walking.

Ahead stood a collection of prefabricated research buildings surrounded by high fences reinforced with sandbags, concrete barriers and rusting watchtowers.

Floodlights pointed outward despite the afternoon sun.

Men in orange environmental suits hurried between buildings carrying crates of equipment.

Stalkers cleaned rifles atop the walls.

Several armed guards watched the surrounding marshes with binoculars rather than each other.

This wasn't a camp, it was a fortress.

Orlov smiled for the first time in hours.

"Home."

Ferimov didn't return the smile.

"It wasn't always built like this."

Mantis noticed fresh bullet holes peppering one of the outer walls.

"Something attacks often?"

The older scientist followed his gaze.

"Often enough."

One of the guards atop the barricade spotted them and waved.

"Ecologists returning!"

The heavy steel gate slowly began to open.

Relief spread through Orlov's shoulders.

"We made it."

Ferimov remained silent.

Something about his expression hadn't changed.

As the three stepped toward the entrance, a distant gunshot echoed somewhere beyond the swamps.

Then another.

The guards immediately stopped smiling. One of them reached for the radio clipped to his vest. Another chambered a round.

Nobody looked surprised.

Only... resigned.

Mantis frowned.

"What's happening?"

Ferimov looked toward the marshes instead of the gate.

"In Yantar..."

His tired eyes remained fixed on the reeds.

"...something is always happening."

The gates closed behind them with a heavy metallic thud.

reddit.com
u/demboy19xx — 9 days ago

Ashes of the Zone: DE - Chapter 2

Road to Hell

"Every stalker leaves Cordon believing he understands the Zone. The lucky ones live long enough to realize they never did."


May 11th, 2025 - 21:14, Rookie Village, Cordon

The campfire was still burning when they returned.

Its orange glow danced across weathered faces as conversations slowly died one after another. Somebody was halfway through telling a story when Wolf emerged from the darkness with Mantis beside him.

Behind them...

Tima. Limping and dirty, but very much alive.

For a heartbeat the entire village simply stared.

Then someone shouted,

"Tima!"

The rookie barely had time to react before two other stalkers rushed over and nearly knocked him back onto the dirt.

"You dumb bastard!"

"We thought you were dead!"

"I almost was." Tima said with an exhausted laugh.

The words came with an exhausted laugh.

Wolf shook his head.

"You still might be if you don't sit down."

That earned a round of relieved laughter. The tension broke almost instantly.

Life returned to the village.

Someone shoved a bottle of vodka into Tima's hands. Another handed Wolf a cigarette. Nobody offered Mantis anything.

Mostly because they didn't quite know what to make of him yet.

Tima noticed.

He limped over before Mantis could quietly disappear into the background.

"Come on."

"I'm fine."

"No."

The young stalker grabbed his sleeve.

"You're eating with us."

"I'm not..."

"You saved my life."

That ended the discussion.


A few minutes later Mantis found himself sitting around the largest campfire in the village.

Somebody had produced several thick slabs of something resembling bacon, skewered on sharpened sticks above the flames.

It smelled...

Different.

Smoky. Earthy, but not unpleasant.

Mantis frowned.

"What animal?"

Three rookies exchanged amused looks.

Tima grinned.

"...You don't wanna know."

One of them burst out laughing.

"It's boar."

Another immediately shook his head.

"No it isn't."

"It was."

"Before the second Emission maybe."

The entire circle laughed.

Even Wolf, sitting slightly outside the firelight while cleaning his rifle.

Mantis looked back at the meat.

"...I'll pretend I believe you."

"You should. It's easier." Said one of the rookies.

The bacon hissed over the flames, fat dripping into the fire with quiet pops that sent sparks drifting into the warm spring night. Somewhere farther across the village somebody had finally managed to tune the old guitar.

The first clumsy chords echoed between the houses.

For a little while...

It almost felt normal.


"So..."

One of the rookies finally looked toward Tima.

"What happened?"

The younger stalker's smile disappeared.

"I got lost."

Someone snorted.

"We figured that much."

"I thought the tunnel was empty."

"It never is."

"I know that now."

The laughter faded.

Tima stared into the flames for several seconds before continuing.

"I heard growling."

His hands tightened around the tin cup he was holding.

"I panicked."

Nobody interrupted.

"I dropped my flashlight and my rifle jammed."

"It didn't jam."

Wolf finally looked up.

"The safety was still on."

Silence. Tima's face slowly turned red.

"...Right."

Another rookie burst out laughing.

"You almost got eaten because you forgot the safety?"

Tima buried his face in one hand.

"I know, I know!"

More laughter rolled around the fire.

Even Mantis couldn't stop the corner of his mouth from twitching upward.

Eventually the laughter settled again.

Tima looked toward him.

"Then they came."

His voice became quieter.

"Wolf..."

"...and Mantis."

The campfire fell silent.

"They didn't have to go in after me."

"But they did anyway."

"I heard the shots."

"I thought..."

Tima swallowed.

"...I thought I was already dead."

His eyes met Mantis's.

"If they hadn't shown up when they did..."

He looked down into the flames.

"...there wouldn't have been enough left to bury."

Nobody spoke.

The fire cracked softly between them.

Finally Tima stood. Not completely steadily.

He faced Mantis.

"I owe you my life."

"You don't."

"I do."

"No."

Mantis calmly broke a piece off the strange bacon.

"You would've done the same."

One of the older rookies shook his head.

"No."

Mantis looked at him.

"We wouldn't."

That caught him off guard.

The rookie shrugged awkwardly.

"Not because we wouldn't want to..."

He looked toward the tunnel road disappearing into darkness.

"...because we'd be too scared."

Nobody argued. Tima slowly nodded.

"Still."

He extended his hand.

"I won't forget."

Mantis looked at it for a second before shaking it.

"It was just a job."

Wolf finally spoke from the edge of the fire.

"No."

Everyone turned toward him.

"It wasn't."

He slid a round into the SKS magazine.

"It was your first."


The conversation drifted elsewhere after that.

The stories became lighter.

Somebody insisted he'd once seen a Flesh climb a tree, but nobody believed him.

Another swore blind dogs could smell fear from a kilometer away.

Wolf simply muttered,

"They can."

The campfire collectively became quieter.

Mantis mostly listened.

For the first time since arriving... he wasn't thinking about Ljubljana.

Or the people he'd left behind, or why he'd come here.

He simply listened to strangers arguing over mutant meat beneath a sky filled with unfamiliar stars.

Perhaps...

That was enough for one night.


"Mantis."

Wolf's voice came from behind him.

The conversation continued without missing a beat.

Mantis stood.

"What is it?"

"Sidorovich wants you."

"Did he figure out how to charge me for saving Tima?"

Wolf actually laughed.

"Probably."


The bunker smelled exactly the same as before.

Grease, electronics, cigarettes.

And profit.

Sidorovich barely looked up.

"There you are."

"I heard you didn't die."

"You sound disappointed."

"I'm disappointed you damaged one of my detectors."

"It still works."

"Barely."

The trader sighed dramatically.

"I loan people equipment and look what happens."

"You said it was an investment."

"It's still not free."

He pointed toward the chair.

This time Mantis sat.

"Congratulations."

The word sounded almost painful coming from Sidorovich.

"You survived your first contract."

"I've survived one evening."

"Exactly."

The trader nodded.

"That's already above average."

He shuffled through several papers before pulling one from the bottom of the pile.

"I've got another job."

"What kind?"

"The kind nobody wants."

"Why?"

"Because it involves scientists."

Mantis waited.

Sidorovich continued.

"Two Ecologists need an escort back to Yantar. Simple delivery. They've been working in Cordon for a week, and now they want to go home."

"So hire someone."

"I tried."

"What happened?"

"They laughed."

Another page.

"I offered more money."

"They laughed harder."

Mantis folded his arms.

"So why me?"

Sidorovich smiled.

"Because you're cheap."

The answer came so quickly Mantis almost laughed.

"That's it?"

"Mostly."

The trader leaned back.

"But also because..."

His tone changed.

"...you've only seen Cordon."

"So?"

"So Cordon isn't the Zone."

He pointed north of the Cordon on the map.

"Garbage."

His finger moved left.

"Agroprom."

Then...

"Yantar."

"You'll see anomalies. Real ones. You'll see radiation. You'll see what happens to stalkers who stop paying attention."

He looked directly at Mantis.

"You came here looking for answers."

His finger tapped the route once more.

"The road to Yantar asks better questions."

Silence settled between them.

"When do we leave?" Mantis asked.

Sidorovich smiled.

"First light."


May 12th, 2025 - 05:42, Rookie Village, Cordon

Morning came quietly.

Mist rolled across the fields surrounding Cordon, turning abandoned farmhouses into pale silhouettes against the rising sun. Dew clung to tall grass. Smoke rose lazily from the first campfires as sleepy stalkers crawled from sleeping bags and makeshift shelters.

The village was only beginning to wake.

Mantis already stood near the northern road. His backpack rested comfortably across his shoulders now. The borrowed detector hung from his belt. The battered PDA rested inside one of his vest pockets.

Everything he owned fit on his body.

Tima jogged toward him, still limping.

"You really leaving already?"

Mantis nodded.

"Looks like it."

The younger stalker scratched the back of his neck.

"I was kinda hoping..."

He looked embarrassed.

"...I'd get to know you better."

"You will."

"How?"

Mantis glanced north.

"If we both survive."

Tima laughed despite himself.

"Fair enough."

One by one the other rookies wandered over.

Someone offered him canned meat.

Another handed him fresh bandages.

One quietly wished him luck.

It wasn't much.

But in the Zone...

It meant something.

Wolf arrived last.

He carried the SKS over one shoulder, coffee steaming gently inside an old enamel mug.

"You ready?"

"I think so."

Wolf looked toward the road leading north.

"No."

Mantis frowned.

"No?"

"You'll never be."

He took another sip.

"The trick... is learning to walk anyway."

Mantis nodded.

Wolf stepped closer.

"When you're scared... slow down. When you stop hearing birds... start looking. When something feels wrong... it usually is."

He paused.

"And remember this."

He rested one hand on Mantis's shoulder.

"The Zone doesn't reward courage. It rewards caution."

Mantis quietly committed every word to memory.

Behind them the bunker hatch suddenly slammed open. Old Sidor leaned halfway outside.

"MANTIS!"

Every stalker in the village looked over.

"If you die..."

The trader pointed an accusing finger toward the detector hanging from Mantis's belt.

"...bring my detector back!"

Silence.

Then the entire rookie village burst into laughter. Even Wolf. Even Tima.

Mantis shook his head and almost smiled.

"I'll do my best."

Satisfied, Sidorovich disappeared back underground and slammed the hatch shut.

Wolf smiled faintly.

"See?"

"What?"

"Now you're a real stalker."

Mantis looked north.

Beyond Cordon. Beyond the safety of campfires. Beyond the only place in the Zone where people still called themselves rookies.

Somewhere out there...

The real Zone waited.

And this time...

It wasn't sending anyone to save him.


The northern road out of Cordon stretched ahead beneath a pale spring sky, disappearing between rusting fences and abandoned fields that had once fed entire villages.

Now only weeds grew here.

Mantis walked alone, his boots crunching softly over broken asphalt still damp from the morning dew. Behind him, the rookie village slowly disappeared beneath a curtain of mist. The distant laughter, the crackling campfires, even Sidorovich's constant complaints faded until they became nothing more than memories carried away by the wind.

For the first time since entering the Zone...

There was nobody to hide behind. Just him.

The detector hanging from his belt bumped rhythmically against his thigh with every step. Every now and then he glanced toward it, half expecting it to begin screaming simply because he'd crossed some invisible line.

It remained silent.

"So far..." he muttered.

The grain elevator appeared almost an hour later.

It towered above the surrounding fields like the skeleton of an ancient beast, its massive concrete silos stained black by decades of rain and neglect. Rusted conveyor belts stretched between the buildings, hanging motionless beneath a cloudless morning sky. Crows occupied the highest beams, their harsh calls echoing across the empty farmland.

Two figures waited beneath the shadow of the largest silo. And even from a distance they were unmistakable.

Bright orange environmental suits.

Ecologists.

One immediately stepped forward as Mantis approached.

He looked young. Mid-twenties perhaps. Round glasses sat crooked beneath the transparent visor of his suit, and despite carrying an expensive scientific backpack almost as large as himself, he couldn't stop looking around with open fascination.

"So you're Mantis?"

His voice carried genuine excitement.

"I've heard about you."

Mantis raised an eyebrow.

"I've been here less than a day."

"Exactly!" the young scientist replied. "You survived your first mission."

"...That's impressive?"

"In Cordon?" He nodded enthusiastically. "Statistically speaking..."

The second scientist sighed.

"Orlov."

The younger man immediately stopped talking.

The older ecologist removed one glove before extending his hand toward Mantis.

"Doctor Alexei Ferimov."

His grip was firm.

Unlike Orlov, there was nothing enthusiastic about him.

His suit had been patched countless times. Several burn marks covered one sleeve. The transparent visor was scratched so heavily it almost looked frosted. Even through the glass Mantis could see deep wrinkles around tired eyes that had clearly witnessed far too much.

"You'll be escorting us to Yantar."

Mantis nodded.

"That's the plan."

Ferimov looked him over quietly.

"Pistol."

"For now."

"I've heard that before."

Unlike Wolf... he didn't smile.

Instead he crouched beside an old crate and unfolded a weathered military map across its surface.

"Our route is simple."

One gloved finger tapped on the map.

"Cordon."

Then north.

"Garbage."

Then west.

"Agroprom."

Finally...

"Yantar. No detours. No sightseeing. And no heroics."

Orlov raised one finger.

"I was hoping to stop near the Garbage vehicle graveyard."

Ferimov didn't even look at him.

"No."

"There are several documented pyro anomalies there that-"

"No."

"...just fifteen minutes?"

"No."

The younger scientist sighed dramatically.

"You always ruin the fun."

"I intend to continue doing so." Ferimov replied flatly.

Mantis found himself almost smiling.

Ferimov rolled the map back up before standing.

"We move at my pace."

He looked between both younger men.

"If I tell you to stop..."

He looked at Mantis.

"...you stop."

Then at Orlov.

"If I tell you to run..."

"...I run."

"If I tell you to get down..."

"...I get down."

Ferimov nodded once.

"Good."

He adjusted the straps on his backpack.

"Let's go."


The road north wound gently through open fields where nature had slowly reclaimed everything humanity had abandoned.

Rusting tractors rested beneath young birch trees.

Collapsed barns leaned into one another like exhausted old men.

Telephone wires hung loose between weather-beaten poles, humming softly whenever the breeze found them.

For almost half an hour...

Nobody spoke.

Orlov was the first to break the silence.

"So... you really used to be a police officer?"

Mantis glanced sideways.

"For a while."

"What made you come here?"

"The bus."

Orlov blinked.

"I meant-"

"I know."

Mantis looked ahead again.

"I needed somewhere nobody knew my name."

The younger scientist nodded slowly.

"...Fair enough."

Ferimov never looked back.

"The Zone is full of people running away."

Another few steps.

"Very few realize what they're running toward."


The broken railway bridge appeared above them shortly afterward.

Its massive concrete supports stretched across the road like the ribs of some enormous fossil. Sections of rusted rail still clung to the top, twisted and broken where explosions decades earlier had torn the bridge apart.

Mantis looked up instinctively.

"You can still see the firing positions."

Ferimov followed his gaze.

"Military."

He pointed toward several shattered concrete alcoves overlooking the road.

"Before the second disaster they kept sniper teams up there almost every day."

"They shot stalkers?" Mantis asked.

"They shot anyone."

Orlov frowned.

"How did people get north?"

"They didn't."

Ferimov's voice remained flat.

"Not unless they were willing to pay."

"Pay who?"

"The military."

"And if they couldn't?"

The older scientist shrugged.

"Then they stayed in Cordon."

They walked beneath the bridge in silence.

The massive structure cast a cool shadow over the road despite the warmth of the morning sun.

Mantis couldn't shake the feeling that somebody still watched from above.

Old habits...

Or perhaps not so old.


The ruined farmstead came into view shortly afterward.

Once it had probably been beautiful.

Now only blackened walls remained standing around a collapsed farmhouse whose roof had long since surrendered to time. Rusted farming equipment lay scattered across the fields, half-swallowed by waist-high grass.

Mantis slowed.

His pace dropped almost unconsciously.

Ferimov noticed immediately.

"What is it?"

Mantis scanned the shattered windows.

"I don't know."

He rested one hand against the Beretta.

"...Feels like someone's watching us."

Orlov instinctively looked around.

"I don't see anyone."

"You usually don't."

Ferimov kept walking.

"Bandits."

"You know they're here?"

"They usually are."

He nodded toward the ruined farmhouse.

"They've used that place as a camp for years."

Mantis kept watching the empty windows.

"They aren't attacking."

"No."

Ferimov sounded almost disappointed.

"Not anymore."

Orlov adjusted the straps on his backpack.

"What changed?"

"Sultan."

"The bandit leader?"

"The one."

Ferimov stepped over a fallen fence.

"When he died..."

He shrugged.

"...everything fell apart."

"No supply routes."

"No organized raids."

"No decent equipment."

"They're still dangerous," Mantis observed.

"Of course."

Ferimov nodded.

"Any desperate man with a rifle is dangerous."

He looked toward the farmhouse one last time.

"But nowadays they mostly prey on rookie loners."

"They steal whatever they can."

"A shotgun."

"A backpack."

"A detector."

Orlov quietly added,

"Sometimes boots."

Ferimov nodded.

"Sometimes boots."

Nobody laughed.

They continued walking.

The ruined farmhouse disappeared behind them without a single shot being fired.

Mantis still couldn't shake the feeling that somebody had indeed been watching.

And had simply decided... not today.


Almost an hour later...

The world changed.

Not suddenly, but gradually.

The green fields began giving way to cracked earth.

The smell reached them first.

Burning plastic. Rotting vegetation. Old engine oil. Wet rust.

Smoke drifted lazily across the horizon despite there being no visible fire.

Then Mantis climbed the final rise.

And stopped.

"...Holy..."

The word escaped before he could stop it.

Garbage.

The name suddenly made perfect sense.

Mountains of crushed vehicles stretched across the landscape like rusting cliffs. Excavators the size of apartment buildings stood frozen where they had died decades ago, their massive buckets hanging motionless above endless seas of scrap metal.

Broken cranes pierced the sky.

Shipping containers lay scattered like children's toys.

Black crows circled overhead in their hundreds, filling the air with constant, rasping cries.

And everywhere...

Life.

Movement caught his eye almost immediately.

A group of massive tusked animals rooted through piles of discarded tires several hundred meters away.

"They're huge."

Orlov smiled.

"Boars."

"They're mutated?"

"Everything here is."

Ferimov answered before Orlov could begin lecturing.

"Those used to be wild boars."

Another movement.

Several bloated pink creatures grazed lazily between abandoned refrigerators, occasionally nudging one another with oversized heads.

"And those?"

"Fleshes."

Orlov practically beamed.

"Remarkable creatures, actually."

"They're surprisingly docile unless threatened."

"They still weigh nearly four hundred kilograms," Ferimov added.

"So don't pet one."

Mantis nodded slowly.

Farther away a familiar shape crossed between two rusting buses.

Blind dogs.

This time an entire pack. More than he'd seen in the tunnel.

They weren't hunting. They weren't attacking.

They simply wandered through the scrapyard as naturally as wolves through a forest.

The realization unsettled him more than the tunnel ever had.

They belonged here.

This...

Was their home.

The Zone wasn't merely filled with monsters.

It was alive. Completely and utterly alive.

Mantis finally understood what Sidorovich had meant.

Cordon hadn't shown him the Zone.

It had shown him its front porch.

A low, guttural growl rolled somewhere ahead.

All three of them froze.

Another followed.

Longer, closer.

Mantis slowly drew the Beretta.

"I don't see anything."

Neither did Orlov.

Ferimov's expression changed instantly.

All color drained from his face. His eyes locked onto the waist-high grass rippling several dozen meters ahead.

He didn't hesitate. He screamed.

"WATCH FOR MOVEMENT IN THE GRASS!"

reddit.com
u/demboy19xx — 16 days ago

Ashes of the Zone: Definitive Edition - Prologue

First of all, I want to thank everyone who read Ashes of the Zone over the past year. Every comment, every bit of feedback, and everyone who patiently waited for new chapters genuinely meant a lot to me.

I also owe you all an apology.

The original version has been on hold for quite a while, and after writing Ch.27, I've made the difficult decision to start over.

At first that probably sounds disappointing, but there's a reason for it.

Over the last two years I've grown a lot as a writer. Looking back at the original story, I realized I could tell it much better than I did when I first started. Rather than patching and rewriting individual chapters, I decided to rebuild Ashes of the Zone from the ground up.

The Definitive Edition isn't just a rewrite, it's a complete reimagining of the story. The worldbuilding is deeper, the pacing is stronger, the characters have been expanded, and the long-term plot has grown into something much larger than I ever imagined when I wrote the original Chapter 1.

The heart of the story is still the same.

It's still Mantis. It's still the Zone.

Just... told the way I always wanted it to be.

To everyone who's been here since the beginning, thank you for sticking with me. I hope you'll give this new journey a chance.

Welcome back to the Zone.

---

Ashes of the Zone: DE, Chapter 1 - Where the Road Ends

"Every stalker remembers the day they entered the Zone.

Most spend the rest of their lives trying to understand why."

---

May 11th, 18:43: Cordon Outskirts

The road ended without ceremony.

No gate.

No warning sign.

No checkpoint declaring that civilization stopped here.

Just cracked asphalt disappearing beneath tall grass, rust slowly swallowing abandoned guardrails, and a silence that felt older than the forest surrounding it.

Mantis stopped walking.

For several seconds he simply stood there, one hand gripping the strap of the duffel bag hanging over his shoulder, listening.

Nothing.

No birds.

No distant engines.

No wind.

Only silence.

Not the peaceful kind.

The kind that waited.

Behind him, the old bus that had brought him this far disappeared into the evening fog, its tired diesel engine fading until it became impossible to tell whether it had driven away...

...or never existed at all.

He didn't look back.

There wasn't much left to return to anyway.

The cigarette between his fingers had burned almost to the filter before he noticed. He took one last drag and flicked it onto the cracked road.

The ember glowed for a moment.

Then disappeared beneath the weeds.

"That's that."

No one answered.

The duffel bag felt heavier than it should have.

A patched ballistic vest, a worn Beretta M9, three loaded magazines, half a pack of Lucky Strikes, and a weathered leather notebook bought from a man in a Ljubljana parking garage who refused to give his name.

Most of its pages were filled with crude hand-drawn maps, circles around places simply labeled "Don't Go", and frantic notes written by several different people.

Never trust clear roads.

If the birds stop singing, stop walking.

Artifacts lie.

One sentence had been underlined so many times the paper had almost torn.

The Zone always knows you're here before you know you're inside it.

Mantis closed the notebook. He wasn't sure he believed any of it.

The first border post appeared several hundred meters ahead, little more than a crooked wooden barrier and two armed men sitting beside a rusting barrel.

One smoked.

The other cleaned an old SKS with the slow confidence of someone who had done it thousands of times.

Neither seemed surprised to see him.

The smoker looked him up and down before exhaling toward the darkening sky.

"Another one."

Not a question. Just an observation.

Mantis walked closer.

"Name's Mantis."

The man shrugged.

"Out here..."

He flicked ash into the dirt.

"...your old name doesn't matter much anyway."

The man beside him finally looked up from the rifle.

His face was older than Mantis expected. Not old in years. Old in the way people became after surviving too many things they couldn't explain.

Deep lines cut across sunburned skin. His beard had more gray than black. His hands moved with practiced ease as he slid the bolt back into the SKS, checked the chamber one final time, then rested the rifle across his knees.

"You armed?"

Mantis nodded.

"Beretta."

The older stalker raised an eyebrow.

"A pistol?"

"For now."

A dry chuckle escaped him.

"You're either brave or stupid."

The smoker answered before Mantis could.

"Usually both."

For the first time since leaving Ljubljana, Mantis almost smiled.

Almost.

The older stalker reached behind the barrel and produced a battered notebook, its pages stained with oil and rain.

"Name."

"Mantis."

"Real name."

Mantis didn't answer.

The pen hovered above the paper for several seconds.

Eventually the man shrugged.

"Fair enough."

He simply wrote:

MANTIS

Nothing else.

No questions.

He closed the notebook with a dull thud.

"The Zone doesn't care where you came from."

His eyes lifted to meet Mantis's.

"It only cares whether you'll still be here tomorrow."

Silence settled again.

Somewhere deeper inside the forest...

Metal creaked. Not loudly. Just enough for all three men to hear it.

Nobody reacted. Not even the smoker.

Mantis noticed.

"You aren't going to check?"

The smoker finally crushed the cigarette beneath his boot.

"If it's coming for us..."

He reached for the AK leaning against the barrel.

"...we'll know soon enough."

Nothing came.

Only silence.

The older stalker stood and walked toward the crooked wooden barrier stretched across the road.

It looked ridiculous.

A few warped planks nailed together decades ago. As if something like that could keep anyone out.

Or in.

He lifted it with one hand.

"Welcome to Cordon."

Mantis stepped forward.

The moment his boot crossed beneath the barrier, the air changed. It wasn't colder or warmer.

It just... changed.

Like walking into a room where somebody had stopped speaking the instant you opened the door.

His ears popped softly. The hairs along the back of his neck stood up.

The forest looked exactly the same as it had ten seconds earlier.

Yet somehow it wasn't.

He stopped without realizing.

"You felt it."

It wasn't a question.

The older stalker lowered the barrier behind him.

"They all do."

"What was it?"

The man considered the question for a long moment.

Then slowly shook his head.

"If you stay here long enough..."

His gaze drifted toward the endless trees beyond the road.

"...you'll stop asking."

They walked together for several minutes.

The road narrowed, cracked asphalt giving way to dirt and patches of stubborn grass growing through decades of neglect.

Rusted military vehicles rested where they had died.

Telephone poles leaned drunkenly toward one another, their wires hanging loose like cobwebs.

Everything looked abandoned. Nothing looked dead. The silence was interrupted by laughter.

Real laughter.

Mantis rounded the final bend and saw the rookie village.

Old wooden houses leaned against each other beneath sagging roofs patched with sheet metal and plastic tarps. Thin trails of smoke climbed from crooked chimneys. Several stalkers sat around a fire built inside the rusted frame of a tractor wheel, arguing loudly over cards while somebody stirred a pot hanging above the flames. A mechanic hammered away at an engine block. Someone cursed after dropping a wrench. A dog barked lazily somewhere behind one of the houses.

Life. Not normal life. But life nonetheless.

For reasons he couldn't explain... seeing it unsettled him more than the silence had.

The smoker noticed him looking.

"Expected something different?"

"I don't know what I expected."

"Most people don't."

He gestured toward the village.

"They think the Zone is monsters."

He shook his head.

"The monsters are easy."

Mantis looked at him.

"The people..."

The stalker lit another cigarette.

"...those take longer to understand."

The smell reached him before the buildings did.

Burning wood, cheap vodka engine oil, wet timber, and boiled sausage.

The scent of men surviving one more day because tomorrow wasn't guaranteed.

As they entered the village, conversations slowed.

Eyes followed him. Some curious. Some suspicious. Some completely indifferent.

Mantis kept walking.

Ahead, half-hidden beneath layers of corrugated steel and camouflage netting, a heavy metal hatch disappeared beneath the ground.

Painted across the concrete beside it were faded white letters.

SIDOROVICH

The older stalker stopped beside the entrance.

"That's your first lesson."

Mantis looked toward the bunker.

"What's that?"

The man smiled for the first time.

"No matter how much money you think you've got..."

He knocked twice against the hatch.

"...it's never enough for old Sidorovich."

The hatch swung open with a metallic groan.

Warm air rolled out of the bunker, carrying the unmistakable smell of cigarette smoke, old electronics, machine oil and something frying that had probably stopped being edible years ago.

"Close the damn door!" an irritated voice barked from below.

"You're letting all my profits escape."

The older stalker smirked.

"Told you."

A narrow staircase disappeared into the earth, illuminated by naked light bulbs hanging from frayed electrical wires. Mantis descended slowly, his boots echoing against rusted steel steps. The farther down he went, the more the world above disappeared.

By the time he reached the bottom...

The Zone felt very far away.

The bunker was cramped, every wall hidden behind shelves overflowing with ammunition crates, military rations, gas masks, artifacts sealed inside lead containers, stacks of ammunition, vodka bottles and electronics that looked older than he was.

Yet somehow... everything seemed organized.

Only one man could possibly understand how.

Sidorovich barely looked up.

He sat behind an old wooden desk cluttered with PDAs, papers and dismantled radios, lazily scrolling through a cracked tablet while chewing on a piece of sausage.

"So."

He finally glanced over the screen.

"You're the Slovenian."

Mantis stopped.

"I didn't tell anyone where I'm from."

"You didn't have to."

Sidorovich shrugged.

"Word travels."

He pointed toward the chair opposite his desk.

"Sit."

Mantis remained standing.

"I prefer standing."

"So did the last fellow."

The trader reached into a drawer, produced a folded photograph and placed it on the table.

"He isn't standing anymore."

Mantis looked at the photograph.

Three stalkers.

One smiling. Two dead.

He pushed it back across the desk.

"I didn't come here for stories."

"No."

Sidorovich leaned back in his chair.

"You came because somebody promised the Zone would solve your problems."

Mantis didn't answer.

The trader smiled knowingly.

"They always do."

He lit a cigarette.

"They arrive thinking they'll find money... or answers."

Smoke drifted lazily toward the bunker ceiling.

"Sometimes revenge."

His eyes settled on Mantis.

"And every single one of them discovers they were asking the wrong questions."

For the first time since entering the bunker Mantis spoke without thinking.

"What questions should I be asking?"

Sidorovich laughed.

A genuine laugh.

"Oh..."

He pointed toward the ceiling.

"If anyone knew that we wouldn't be here."

The old trader finally stood, surprisingly nimble for a man of his size.

He walked around the desk, stopping in front of a large wall map covered in colored pins and handwritten notes.

Cordon.

Garbage.

Agroprom.

Yantar.

Rostok.

Radar.

Pripyat.

Some names Mantis recognized only from the notebook now stretched before him like pieces of a puzzle.

Sidorovich tapped one finger against Cordon.

"This..."

He moved north.

"...is where boys become stalkers."

His finger continued.

"...Garbage is where stalkers become scavengers... Yantar decides whether you're brave... or just lucky."

He stepped back from the map.

"You survive long enough... and eventually the Zone starts surviving you."

Mantis looked closely at the map.

Dead City.

Red Forest.

The CNPP.

Places people in the notebook had crossed out completely instead of describing.

Outside, somewhere above the bunker, laughter drifted faintly through the hatch.

Normal. Human.

Almost comforting.

Then...

Three sharp rifle shots echoed somewhere in the distance.

Nobody inside the bunker reacted.

Mantis looked toward the ceiling.

Sidorovich continued sorting paperwork.

"Shouldn't somebody-"

"No."

The answer came immediately.

"If they're still shooting..."

He stamped a document without looking up.

"...they're still alive."

Another burst followed.

Then silence.

Sidorovich finally looked back at him.

"You'll get used to that too."

Mantis wasn't sure he wanted to.

The trader reached beneath his desk and tossed something across the room.

Mantis caught it instinctively.

A battered PDA.

Old and acratched, but functional.

"Batteries are dying."

Sidorovich shrugged.

"So don't waste them."

He tossed another object.

A small handheld detector.

"Echo detector."

"Not exactly state of the art."

"No, but it'll tell you where some of those sweet artifacts are hiding."

Mantis turned it over in his hands.

The casing was chipped.

One corner had clearly melted at some point.

Still...

It worked.

"Nothing here is free," Sidorovich said.

"I assumed as much."

"Oh, this is free."

That caught Mantis off guard.

Sidorovich smiled.

"My investment."

He sat back down.

"You look like somebody who's either going to die tomorrow, or make me a great deal of money."

Another pause.

"I'm hoping for the second one."

A knock echoed through the bunker hatch. Three slow knocks.

Sidorovich rolled his eyes.

"Speak of expensive problems."

The hatch opened.

A tall man stepped into the bunker wearing a weathered brown trench coat over an aging sunrise suit. A rifle hung casually across his back, boots muddy from the road.

Wolf.

He nodded once toward Sidorovich before looking at Mantis.

His eyes lingered on the pistol holstered at Mantis's hip.

"So.. you're the newcomer."

Mantis nodded.

Wolf studied him for several seconds.

Finally he folded his arms.

"Can you shoot?"

"I was a police officer."

Wolf shrugged.

"That's not what I asked."

The room fell quiet.

Mantis thought about it, then answered honestly.

"I guess we'll find out."

For the first time... Wolf smiled.

"Good."

He turned toward the bunker exit.

"Come with me."

"Where?"

Wolf opened the hatch.

The evening sun poured down the staircase, golden light spilling into the bunker.

"A rookie went scavenging near the railway tunnel this afternoon."

He looked back.

"He should've been back an hour ago."

Mantis picked up his duffel bag.

Wolf's expression hardened.

"Welcome to the Zone."

"You get your first lesson immediately."

They climbed back into the evening light.

The warmth that had settled over Cordon while they were underground was already beginning to fade. Long shadows stretched between the abandoned houses, and the campfire in the center of the rookie village burned brighter than it had only a few minutes earlier. Somewhere nearby, somebody was tuning an old guitar. Another stalker cursed as an engine refused to start. The village carried on as though this was just another evening, another newcomer, another job that would either end with a handshake or another name quietly disappearing from the campfire conversations.

Wolf walked without looking back, apparently expecting Mantis to follow. He did.

"You've never been inside the Zone before."

It wasn't really a question.

"No."

"You ever shoot anything that shot back?"

Mantis thought about it.

"Yes."

"I don't mean people."

That earned a small shake of the head.

"No."

Wolf nodded once, as if confirming something to himself.

"People are predictable. Animals too, most of the time. The things out here..." His gaze wandered toward the tree line beyond the village. "...don't always care about the rules."

They left the camp behind, passing rusted tractors half-consumed by weeds and old wooden fences leaning under the weight of time. The sounds of the rookie village slowly dissolved behind them until all that remained were distant voices carried by the wind. Ahead, the road bent toward an overgrown railway embankment disappearing into dense woodland.

The Zone seemed different away from people.

Less abandoned.

More... occupied.

Not by movement, but by presence.

Mantis couldn't explain it. The trees stood perfectly still, yet they somehow gave the impression they were watching him. Every shadow looked just deep enough to hide something. Every patch of tall grass seemed capable of producing teeth.

His hand rested unconsciously on the grip of the Beretta.

Wolf noticed.

"Good."

"What?"

"You don't feel safe anymore."

"I never did."

"You thought you did."

That was harder to argue with.

The dirt road narrowed until old railway tracks appeared beside them, disappearing beneath bushes and young birch trees. Telegraph poles lined the route like exhausted sentries, most of them leaning at impossible angles, their wires hanging broken between the cracked insulators.

Wolf slowed.

"The tunnel's another three hundred meters."

"You think he's alive?"

"I think rookies panic."

He stepped over a rusted rail.

"Sometimes panic gets them killed."

A few more steps passed before he continued.

"Sometimes it keeps them alive."

The evening breeze carried the smell of damp concrete, old metal, and something rotten.

Mantis noticed fresh footprints in the mud. Several pairs.

Some belonged to heavy military boots, while others were lighter.

One trail wandered erratically before stopping altogether near the edge of the embankment.

He crouched instinctively.

Wolf watched him without speaking.

"The ground's disturbed."

Mantis brushed loose dirt aside with two fingers. Deep claw marks scored the mud beside one of the footprints.

"Not human."

Wolf smiled faintly.

"Detective?"

Mantis nodded.

"Homicide."

"I can tell. You notice details."

Wolf looked toward the tunnel entrance barely visible through the trees.

"Out here..."

His expression hardened.

"...details are usually what separates survivors from bodies."

The tunnel emerged from the forest like the mouth of something asleep.

Concrete blackened by decades of rain disappeared into darkness so complete it looked almost solid. Rusted freight cars sat abandoned nearby, their wheels buried beneath grass and moss. Water dripped steadily somewhere inside, each drop echoing back a fraction of a second too late.

Neither man spoke.

The Zone had gone quiet again.

Not peaceful, but listening.

Wolf raised one hand, signaling Mantis to stop.

He knelt beside something lying on the tracks.

A backpack, old and cheap. One strap had been torn clean through.

Nearby lay a flashlight, its lens cracked, still casting a weak beam toward the tunnel ceiling.

Wolf picked up the bag and immediately recognized it.

"Tima."

Mantis looked into the darkness ahead.

"You think he went inside?"

Wolf didn't answer immediately.

Instead, he reached down and touched one of the fresh stains darkening the gravel between the rails.

When he lifted his fingers...

They came away red.

"Not willingly."

Wolf wiped the blood onto his trousers and unslung the rifle from his shoulder.

"Stay behind me."

Mantis didn't move.

"If he's still alive, every second matters."

Wolf glanced at him.

"If whatever left this blood is still inside, every second matters just as much."

Neither of them argued after that.

They stepped into the tunnel.

Darkness swallowed them almost immediately. The evening sun vanished behind stained concrete, replaced by the weak beam of the broken flashlight still lying on the tracks. Water dripped steadily from cracked support beams overhead, gathering in shallow puddles that reflected their lights like fragments of shattered glass. The air was damp and strangely warm, carrying the smell of rust, wet concrete and something far less pleasant.

Blood.

Fresh enough that it hadn't fully darkened.

The tunnel stretched farther than it should have, disappearing into blackness where the flashlight could no longer reach. Every footstep echoed back a little differently, as though the tunnel couldn't quite decide how large it wanted to be.

Wolf crouched beside another stain.

"Dragged."

Mantis followed the trail with his eyes. Smears crossed the sleepers between the rails before disappearing toward a collapsed maintenance platform built into the tunnel wall.

"Not carried."

Wolf nodded.

"Good."

"You call that good?"

"If something wanted him dead..."

He stood again.

"...there'd be less blood."

They moved deeper.

The silence inside the tunnel was different from the silence outside. Outside, the forest had listened.

Here...

The tunnel remembered.

Old freight wagons rested where they had derailed years ago, their rusted frames swallowed by darkness. One had collapsed onto its side, spilling rotten crates across the tracks. Another stood with both loading doors hanging open, revealing nothing except blackness inside.

Mantis swept his flashlight through one of them.

Empty. But still...

He couldn't shake the feeling that something had looked back.

A low growl rolled somewhere ahead. So quiet he almost mistook it for the tunnel settling.

Wolf stopped instantly.

"You hear that?"

Mantis nodded.

"Dog."

"No."

Wolf's voice barely rose above a whisper.

"Dogs."

The growl came again.

Then another answered from somewhere off to the left.

Mantis slowly drew the Beretta from its holster. The familiar weight settled comfortably into his hand, the routine almost automatic after years of carrying a sidearm. On the streets of Ljubljana that motion had usually ended arguments before they began.

But here...

It felt painfully inadequate.

Wolf noticed the pistol and smiled without humor.

"Still think that's enough?"

"It'll have to be."

"I admire optimism."

Something scraped across concrete.

Both flashlight beams snapped toward the sound.

Nothing.

Only broken rails, water and darkness.

Then came the whimper.

Human.

Weak.

From somewhere beyond the overturned freight car.

"...help..."

Barely louder than breathing.

Mantis looked at Wolf.

"Tima."

Wolf didn't answer immediately.

Instead, he slowly lowered himself into a crouch, studying the ground between them and the sound.

Fresh paw prints. Large.

Four of them.

Circling.

Waiting.

"They're about to feed."

The words landed like cold iron.

Mantis tightened his grip around the Beretta.

"We're too late?"

Wolf's eyes remained fixed ahead.

"No."

He chambered a round with a sharp metallic click that echoed through the tunnel.

"But we're almost too late."

The growl returned. Closer this time.

Low, hungry.

Two pairs of pale yellow eyes appeared in the darkness beyond the fallen freight wagon.

Then two more.

Waiting for someone to make the first move.

Wolf exhaled slowly.

"Blind dogs."

Mantis counted four sets of eyes.

Then a fifth appeared farther back.

Smaller.

Moving nervously.

The pack wasn't hunting anymore.

It was guarding its meal.

The smallest of the dogs crept forward first.

Its head hung low, nose sweeping across the gravel as it searched for scent instead of sight. Its eyes were white as snow, but still reflecting light, pale skin stretched tight across a skull that looked almost too narrow to belong to anything alive.

The others spread out behind it.

Not charging.

Waiting.

Wolf lowered his voice until it was barely audible.

"When they move..."

His finger tightened around the trigger.

"...don't think."

The lead dog barked.

Everything exploded into motion.

The Beretta cracked first.

The flash briefly illuminated the tunnel as Mantis' shot caught the charging blind dog square between the eyes. The mutant collapsed before momentum carried it several more meters across the tracks.

The second reached Wolf.

His SKS roared, the rifle's report deafening inside the confined tunnel. The heavy round punched through the animal's shoulder, spinning it sideways into the rusted wheels of a freight wagon.

The remaining dogs hesitated.

Only for a heartbeat.

Then all three attacked together.

One vaulted onto the overturned railcar, claws screeching across rusted steel as it tried to reach them from above. Another darted low through the darkness toward Mantis' legs while the largest charged straight down the center of the tunnel.

"Left!" Wolf shouted.

Mantis pivoted instinctively.

The Beretta barked twice.

The first shot shattered concrete, the second found flesh.

The dog yelped, stumbled, then kept coming.

Too close.

He dropped the pistol before it could be knocked from his hand anyway and drove his shoulder into the mutant as they collided. They hit the gravel together, teeth snapping inches from his face.

The smell hit him first.

Rotting meat mixed with wet fur and blood.

The dog's jaws clamped onto his forearm, teeth scraping against the ballistic sleeve instead of flesh. Pain shot through his arm anyway.

His knife was already in his other hand.

One thrust, then another.

The blade disappeared beneath the animal's jaw. Its body convulsed violently before collapsing across his chest.

Silence never came.

Wolf's rifle thundered again.

Another dog cried out somewhere behind him.

Then... nothing.

Only dripping water.

Only heavy breathing.

Mantis shoved the dead animal aside and climbed back to his feet, chest heaving. The tunnel smelled of gunpowder now, mixing with blood and wet concrete.

Wolf worked the bolt of the SKS, ejecting another smoking casing.

"The alpha ran."

"You let it."

Wolf looked toward the darkness where the largest tracks disappeared.

"It'll remember."

"I thought that was a bad thing."

"It is."

The old stalker managed the faintest smile.

"But next time it'll remember we're dangerous too."

He slung the rifle over his shoulder.

The weak whimper came again.

This time there was no mistaking where it came from.

Mantis hurried around the overturned freight wagon.

The beam of his flashlight settled on a young stalker pinned beneath a slab of broken concrete. He couldn't have been older than sixteen. His face was pale beneath the dirt, sweat clung to his forehead, and one leg disappeared beneath the fallen chunk of ceiling at an angle that made Mantis's stomach tighten immediately.

The boy blinked against the light.

"I..." His voice cracked. "...I thought nobody was coming."

"You picked a terrible place to wait," Mantis said, kneeling beside him.

The rookie actually managed a weak laugh before wincing in pain.

"My rifle..."

Mantis spotted it several meters away.

Full magazine. Safety still on.

Wolf sighed. "Rookies."

He crouched beside the concrete slab and tested its weight.

"We'll have to lift together."

Mantis holstered the knife and positioned himself opposite to Wolf.

"On three."

The old stalker nodded.

"One."

They braced themselves.

"Two."

Muscles tightened.

"Three."

The slab shifted just enough.

Tima cried out as Mantis pulled him free, dragging him backward before the concrete crashed back onto the tracks with a deafening boom.

For several seconds the boy simply lay there gasping, unable to believe he was still alive.

Then he looked up at Mantis.

"You came for me."

Mantis helped him sit upright, draping the boy's arm over his shoulder.

"Someone had to."

Together, the three of them turned toward the faint circle of evening light waiting at the end of the tunnel.

Outside, the last rays of the setting sun painted the entrance gold.

Behind them, the darkness swallowed the bodies of the blind dogs as though they had never been there at all.

Mantis glanced back only once.

For the briefest moment he could have sworn something deeper inside the tunnel was watching them leave.

Then he turned away.

The Zone had given him his first lesson.

And somehow he knew it wouldn't be the last.

reddit.com
u/demboy19xx — 18 days ago

Suspected HS on chest

Hi everyone, I'm a 27-year-old male from Slovenia, and I've been dealing with this for over 4 years.

For years I was told it was just acne or that I should change my shower gel. I was even told to "just live with it." My GP recently came back from maternity leave, examined me properly, and said she suspects hidradenitis suppurativa, although she wants the dermatologist to make the final diagnosis.

These are my symptoms:

Deep, painful lumps under the skin that feel like hard nodules at first.

They gradually become soft in the center, almost like a water balloon.

The skin gets thinner until it eventually ruptures on its own.

Large amounts of pus drain out, sometimes soaking through my shirts.

Even after draining, they never seem to completely heal and often refill or new ones appear nearby.

During bad flares the pain is constant. Sometimes I can't even cross my arms because the pressure is so painful.

This has been happening repeatedly for more than 4 years.

My chest seems to be the main area affected, while it also look like I have cystic acne at the same time. I also have what feels like HS bumps on my neck and right in the hairline above my neck and recently started getting deeper bumps on my face as well.

My GP started me on antibiotics for the current flare and signed me off work because the pain is affecting my movement. I also finally received a referral to a dermatologist, although the waiting time here is unfortunately very long.

My questions:

Does this sound like HS to those of you who have been diagnosed?

Is it common for HS to mainly affect the chest?

Has anyone here had both HS and severe cystic acne?

What treatments ended up helping you the most?

Any advice or shared experiences would be greatly appreciated. Thank you.

u/demboy19xx — 26 days ago

Ashes of the Zone, Chapter 27 - The Weight of Summer

"The Zone is not always cruel. Sometimes it smiles. And somehow, that is even harder to trust."


July 7th, 16:38 - Between Lab-X23 and Zaton

The sun was warm.

Not the weak, sickly warmth that sometimes filtered through radioactive clouds, nor the pale imitation of summer that stalkers had learned to distrust.

Real warmth.

Golden light poured through the treetops, painting long bands across the cracked asphalt as the squad moved west. Leaves shimmered beneath a gentle breeze. Tall grass rolled in waves around rusting vehicles abandoned decades ago, their metal frames now claimed by vines and moss. Somewhere overhead, birds sang without fear, their melodies carrying across the wetlands as though the Zone had forgotten what it was.

For a few impossible moments...

It looked beautiful. Too beautiful.

The kind of beauty that made experienced stalkers tighten their grip on their rifles instead of lowering them.

The Zone had always been at its most dangerous when it looked peaceful.


Ribbon walked several meters ahead of the others, every step accompanied by the metallic scrape of his ruined exosuit. Most of its systems had died inside Lab-X23. The armored shell no longer enhanced his strength; it merely hung from him like the carcass of some great beast that refused to let its host go.

He hadn't spoken in nearly twenty minutes.

His eyes remained fixed ahead, but they weren't seeing the road anymore.

Duty.

The word echoed through his thoughts.

Everything he had devoted his life to had always been built upon certainty. The Zone was a threat. Humanity had a duty to contain it. Artifacts were dangerous. Mutants were abominations. Duty stood between civilization and annihilation.

Simple, clear and understandable.

Then Lab-X23 had happened.

He had watched reality fold around a single man.

He had watched knives carve flesh that healed before blood could fall.

He had watched the Overlord, someone who should have been untouchable, look afraid.

Afraid of a merc that was apparently chosen by the Zone.

Ribbon's jaw tightened.

What doctrine existed for that?

What chapter in Duty's manuals explained a man whose eyes became light itself?

None.

For the first time since joining Duty decades ago, Colonel Red Ribbon didn't know what he believed anymore.


Behind him, Widow adjusted Mantis' weight across her shoulders. He was helping now.

Not consciously.

His feet found the ground more often than before. Every so often he managed a step of his own before drifting again, leaving Widow and Reverb to catch him before he collapsed.

It was progress.

She kept telling herself that. Progress. Not dying.

Those words repeated inside her mind like a prayer.

She reached up and brushed damp hair away from his forehead.

Still warm.

Still breathing.

Still here.

But every few minutes his breathing changed.

Sometimes shallow... Sometimes perfectly steady... Sometimes so slow she found herself leaning closer just to make sure his chest still moved.

Each time panic wrapped cold fingers around her heart.

She had seen people die before. Too many.

She knew the signs. She knew how quickly hope became memory inside the Zone, and she wasn't ready to add Mantis to that list.

Not after everything.

Not now.

Her thumb unconsciously brushed across the back of his hand.

His skin almost seemed... alive.

Not warm.

Luminous.

The sensation vanished as quickly as it came.

She pretended she hadn't noticed.


Red limped several paces behind them.

The battered Duty SEVA creaked softly with each step. Acid marks covered one shoulder where the beast had struck her. Entire sections of the armor looked as though they had survived a fire.

She barely noticed.

Her anger hurt more. She replayed the throne chamber over and over.

Different decisions, angles, shots.

If she had moved sooner...

If she had seen the Overlord's opening...

If she had ignored her own injuries...

Maybe Mantis would never have needed to become... Whatever he had become.

Her fist tightened around the sling of her AN-94.

"I should've done more," she muttered.

Nobody answered immediately.

Eventually Reverb glanced sideways.

"You also stopped a mutant from chewing my face off."

She didn't look at him.

"It wasn't enough."

"It usually isn't."

Silence settled again.

Then, after another few steps, Reverb quietly bumped his shoulder against hers.

"But... thanks."

Red finally looked at him.

His smile was tired. Forced, but genuine.

For the first time since leaving the laboratory...

The corner of her mouth twitched upward.

Barely.

It was enough.


Octane dragged himself onward at the rear.

Every step hurt.

His abdomen felt as though someone had replaced flesh with broken glass.

The bleeding had slowed considerably, little more than a constant seep now beneath blood-soaked bandages, but every movement reminded him exactly where the sniper round had entered.

He had no idea why he was still alive, and neither did anyone else.

He glanced toward Mantis.

"Guess we're both too stubborn."

His voice came out rough.

Nobody laughed. He hadn't really expected them to.

Still... It felt good to say something.

To hear another human voice besides his own thoughts.


Reverb couldn't stand the silence anymore.

It wasn't natural.

The Zone was supposed to be loud.

Mutants.

Arguments.

Campfires.

Radio chatter.

Somebody complaining.

Something.

Instead...

Only wind.

Only birds.

Only footsteps.

He lit another cigarette.

Immediately regretted it when Widow shot him a look.

"What?"

"You've had six since we left."

"So?"

"So your lungs are going to kill you before the Zone does."

Reverb nodded thoughtfully.

"Honestly? At this point I'm rooting for the lungs."

Nothing. Not even a smile.

"...Tough crowd."

He tried again several minutes later.

"You know..."

Nobody responded.

"If Mantis wakes up glowing again, does that mean we stop paying for flashlights?"

Still nothing.

Reverb sighed dramatically.

"I refuse to believe that wasn't at least a little funny."

Red shook her head.

"It would've been yesterday."

"...Yeah."

That single word carried more weight than any joke ever could.

He looked down at the cigarette between his fingers. It had gone out.

He didn't bother relighting it.


Mantis floated somewhere between dreams and sunlight.

Voices reached him more clearly now.

Not all of them. Pieces. Fragments.

"...water..."

"...careful..."

"...still breathing..."

The warmth of the sun settled across his face.

He remembered another warmth.

A balcony.

Rain.

Ljubljana.

His grandmother placing a mug of tea on the kitchen table.

The memory slipped away before he could hold onto it.

Something else replaced it.

Grass, wind, the smell of summer.

His eyelids fluttered.

The world remained blurry, but no longer impossible.

He could distinguish shapes now.

Ribbon.

Red.

Widow.

Reverb.

Octane.

Alive... All of them.

A quiet relief spread through him before he even understood why.

His lips parted, but no sound came out.

Widow immediately noticed.

"Mantis?"

His eyes opened slightly farther this time.

Blue sky. White clouds drifting lazily overhead.

Not the endless darkness of Lab-X23.

Not Hollow.Not the Overlord.

Just...

Sky.

He blinked once. Twice.

The effort exhausted him.

His eyes closed again.

But this time...

Sleep felt different.

Not like drowning, but more like resting.


The wetlands of Zaton stretched endlessly before them, emerald green beneath the late afternoon sun.

Dragonflies skimmed over the reeds. Frogs croaked somewhere beneath the waterlogged earth.

In the distance, an old windmill turned lazily in the breeze despite having no reason to still function.

The Zone breathed.

Not as a predator.

Not today.

Today...

It simply watched six broken stalkers walk slowly across its endless summer, carrying wounds no bandage could ever truly heal.


The walk west from Bonemarsh felt... wrong.

Not because something hunted them.

Because nothing did.

The reeds of Zaton swayed lazily beneath the afternoon sun. Birds drifted overhead in slow circles, undisturbed by the six figures limping across the marsh.

No gunfire.

No distant howls.

No snapping branches announcing a mutant's charge.Not once did they catch the scent of blood. Not once did a Geiger counter rise above its familiar lazy rhythm.

The Zone had gone quiet.

Not empty. Quiet. Almost... respectful.

Reverb noticed it first.

"...You realize we haven't seen a single mutant?"

Nobody answered.

He looked around again.

Usually by now there would've been at least a pack of blind dogs. Maybe snorks hidden beneath an overturned truck. A flesh grazing somewhere in the reeds.

Nothing. Even the wind seemed careful.

Red broke the silence.

"They're watching."

Ribbon glanced toward her.

"You saw something?"

"No."

"Then how do you know?"

She looked across the endless wetlands.

"Because the Zone never gives you this much peace without a reason."

Nobody argued.

Deep down...

They all felt it too.

It wasn't that the Zone had become safe, it had simply chosen not to interfere.

For reasons none of them understood.


Mantis surfaced again.

The sunlight felt warmer now.

The voices around him no longer drifted in broken fragments. He could distinguish them.

Reverb.

Widow.

Ribbon.

Someone coughed.

Octane.

His eyelids fluttered.

But this time... they stayed open.

Everything was blurred, as though someone had smeared wet paint across the world, but shapes slowly sharpened.

Blue sky. Green reeds.

The rusting skeleton of the Shevchenko appearing in the distance.

Shevchenko... home.

Not truly. But close enough.

He tried moving his own feet. One step, then another. His legs still refused to fully cooperate, but they were no longer dead weight.

Widow immediately noticed.

"You walked."

He frowned slightly.

"...Did I?"

It was little more than a whisper.

Her heart nearly stopped.

"Mantis?"

He looked at her.

Actually looked at her this time. His eyes were green again. Not white.

Just tired.

"...Hey..."

One word. That was all.

Then exhaustion washed over him again, his weight settling back against Widow's shoulder.

But he didn't lose consciousness.

Not completely. Not anymore.


July 7th, 20:12 - Zaton, vicinity of Shevchenko

The Shevchenko came into full view as the afternoon sun settled lower across Zaton.

Its rusted hull rose above the reeds like the corpse of some forgotten ship refusing to sink completely beneath time. Wooden walkways creaked softly beneath the boots of passing stalkers. Smoke drifted lazily from improvised chimneys. Somewhere inside, someone laughed.

Life... normal life.

The first civilized place they'd seen since entering Lab-X23.

As the squad climbed onto the deck... conversation stopped.

Not gradually, instantly.

A mechanic lowered his wrench. Two ecologists paused halfway through unpacking a crate of instruments. Three rookie stalkers slowly stood from a card game without realizing they'd done so. Even a pair of mercenaries sitting near the railing turned to look.

Nobody spoke.

Their eyes moved from one battered figure to the next.

Colonel Ribbon.

The legendary Duty officer whose exosuit now hung from him in broken pieces.

Red.

Her ginger hair streaked with soot and dried blood, her battered SEVA bearing scars that looked almost impossible to survive.

Reverb.

The mercenary everyone knew for impossible stories and terrible jokes. His shotgun still hung across his shoulder.

But the grin... was gone.

Octane.

Freedom's fastest scout north of Jupiter.

Now barely able to remain standing, every step leaving tiny crimson drops across the weathered deck despite fresh bandages.

And finally...

Black Widow.

Almost a legend herself.

One of the most capable female stalkers the Zone had ever produced. Now walking with slow, trembling steps, carrying another person's weight because her own strength no longer mattered.

And against her shoulder...

Mantis.

The squad leader.

The man whose name had begun spreading across the Zone weeks ago. He barely looked alive.

No one asked what had happened.

No one dared.

Because whatever answer existed...

They weren't sure they wanted to hear it.

The silence followed them all the way across the deck.


"Bring them here."

The voice finally broke the spell.

Beard.

He stepped from the doorway of the medical quarters, his weathered face unusually serious.

He looked each of them over once. That was enough.

"...Inside."

No one argued.

The medical room quickly became crowded.

Bandages.

Antiseptic.

Morphine.

Fresh water.

The familiar smell of alcohol and old medicine filled the cramped compartment as Beard moved from one patient to another with practiced efficiency.

Red protested when he cleaned the burns across her shoulder.

Ribbon didn't react at all while sections of twisted armor were cut away from his body.

Octane nearly blacked out when Beard changed the dressings around the hole in his abdomen.

"You should be dead," Beard muttered.

Octane managed the faintest grin.

"I've been told."

Beard wasn't smiling.

"...They're right."

Finally... he reached Mantis.

The room grew strangely quiet.

Beard checked his pulse. Then again.

Then his pupils.

Then placed a hand against his forehead. He frowned.

"...This doesn't make any sense."

Widow looked up immediately.

"What is it?"

"I don't know."

He rarely admitted that.

"I've treated men after emissions."

He checked Mantis' pulse again. Slower this time.

"I've treated psi exposure."

Another pause.

"I've treated stalkers who survived anomalies that should've turned them into red mist."

His eyes remained fixed on Mantis.

"I've never seen this."

Reverb shifted uneasily.

"...Neither have we."

Beard finally looked away.

"So..."

His voice remained calm.

"...Start from the beginning."

The room fell silent.

Who was supposed to explain Lab-X23?

How did anyone explain a woman who bent bullets with artifacts?

A mutant obeying thoughts instead of instinct?

A man called Hollow who walked through minds as easily as hallways?

Reality folding around knife strikes?

Mantis rising into the air wrapped in white light?

No one spoke for several long seconds.

Eventually Ribbon exhaled.

"We found Lab-X23."

He stopped.

His shoulders sagged.

"...Everything after that stopped making sense."

One by one they added what they could.

Widow spoke of the throne chamber. Red described the Overlord's artifacts. Reverb admitted he had no explanation for anything after Mantis stood back up. Octane simply shook his head.

"I remember light."

Silence settled over the room once more. Beard listened without interrupting.

When they finished, he remained quiet for a very long time.

Finally he sighed.

"I don't know what happened down there."

Nobody expected him to.

"But I know this."

He looked at each of them in turn.

"None of you are walking anywhere today."

Ribbon immediately opened his mouth.

"We need to get him to Hermann."

"And you will."

Beard nodded.

"Tomorrow."

He gestured around the room.

"You've lost blood."

He pointed toward Ribbon.

"Your ribs are cracked."

Toward Red.

"You're running on adrenaline."

Toward Octane.

"You should still be unconscious."

Finally...

Toward Widow.

"And you've been carrying everyone else."

She blinked.

Only then realizing how badly her own arms were shaking.

"You'll stay."

Nobody argued. Not because Beard outranked them, but because, for the first time in what felt like days...

Someone else had made the decision.


That evening, the Shevchenko slowly returned to life.

Conversations remained quieter than usual. Stories were whispered.People occasionally glanced toward the medical quarters before looking away again.

The squad rested in separate bunks.

Red fell asleep almost immediately.

Ribbon remained awake, staring silently at the ceiling.

Octane slept through sheer exhaustion.

Reverb sat outside for a while, smoking without saying a word.

Widow refused to leave Mantis' bedside.

Sometime after sunset...

Mantis opened his eyes once more.

The ceiling above him was unfamiliar. The gentle creaking of the old ship echoed softly around the room.

He turned his head.

Widow had fallen asleep sitting beside him, one hand still resting loosely over his.

For the first time since Lab-X23...

He felt something that wasn't fear.

He squeezed her hand.

Only slightly.

She stirred, but didn't wake.

Mantis closed his eyes again.

Outside, the summer wind drifted gently through the rusted hull of the Shevchenko.

And for one quiet night...

The Zone allowed its survivors to rest.

reddit.com
u/demboy19xx — 2 months ago

Ash Chronicles #3 - Home Improvement

"Every stalker dreams of having a safe place in the Zone. The Zone considers this an invitation."


After the Great Swamps, Reverb had reached a conclusion.

He deserved a break.

Not a long one. Just... maybe half an hour where nothing actively attempted to remove his internal organs.

Garbage felt almost peaceful compared to the swamp. Again.

The Flea Market had slowly become home. Well... "home" by Zone standards. Rusted sheet metal, half-collapsed walls and enough holes in the roof to identify constellations while lying in bed.

Luxury.

He dumped his backpack beside the stash with a satisfied grunt. The Freedom crate had finally been delivered, the Chimera claws had been sold, and the radioactive lion meat had somehow become dinner. Life was improving.

Reverb had even decided to invest in the future.

He spent the better part of an hour assembling a proper workbench from scrap metal, bolts and parts he definitely hadn't stolen from abandoned machinery. It wasn't pretty.

But it was his.

He admired it for several seconds.

"...Look at that."

A passing stalker stopped.

"What is it?"

"My mechanic table."

"...It's leaning."

"It's got personality."

The stalker walked away.

"Philistine..."

Next came the refrigerator.

Mutant meat spoiled quickly, and after hauling half the ecosystem across the Zone, Reverb had finally managed to build a working cold storage unit.

Well... "Working" was perhaps generous.

It hummed. Sometimes.

It occasionally sparked.

But it was cold. That was enough.

He carefully arranged the mutant meat inside like priceless treasure. Blind dog, Boar, Flesh, Chimera.

"Beautiful."

For the first time in what felt like forever, everything seemed... normal.

The stash was organized.

The ammunition sorted.

The workbench finished.

The refrigerator stocked.

Nobody was shooting at him.

Reverb lit a cigarette.

"I think I'm finally figuring this place out."

The Zone heard him. Naturally.

Gunfire erupted outside. He didn't even look up.

"Hm."

Another burst.

Somebody screamed.

A grenade detonated somewhere near the entrance.

"Nope, not reacting."

He leaned back in his chair.

"Not my problem, not today."

The Zone disagreed.

Several bullets punched clean through the wall directly above his head. Splinters showered his shoulders.

"...Okay, that might actually be my problem."

He cautiously peeked through a gap in the wall.

Duty. Lots of Duty.

Not two. Not three.

Seven.

Seven extremely motivated Duty soldiers. Reverb sighed.

"...They're still upset."

Apparently, the unfortunate misunderstanding at the hangar had remained fresh in their memories.

Very fresh.

The Duty squad poured into the Flea Market with military precision, rifles barking in controlled bursts. Every few seconds another bullet ricocheted off rusted steel somewhere alarmingly close to Reverb's face.

One of them shouted,

"CONTACT INSIDE!"

"Oh, don't point!"

The Flea Market exploded into chaos.

Fortunately... Clear Sky happened to be visiting. Several blue-armored stalkers immediately joined the fight without asking too many questions.

Whether they were defending Reverb or simply disliked people shooting inside the market remained unclear. Either way...

Reverb wasn't about to complain.

The scrapyard transformed into a battlefield.

Bullets sparked from steel beams. Rusted cars became cover. Old buses became fortresses.

Reverb leaned around a shipping container and fired his silenced PM.

One Duty soldier dropped.

Another spotted him.

"Oh."

Reverb immediately disappeared behind cover again as a full magazine turned the container into modern art.

"That was rude."

A Clear Sky stalker beside him calmly worked the bolt of his rifle.

"You started this?"

"...Technically?"

The stalker sighed.

"I hate helping you."

"Appreciated."

The firefight dragged on.

One Duty officer attempted to flank them through an old warehouse, but he didn't get very far.

Because two Lurkers chose that exact moment to appear.

Nobody knew where they came from. Nobody had invited them.

The Lurkers apparently looked at the battlefield and collectively decided,

"Yes. We should absolutely become involved."

One launched itself directly into a Duty fireteam.

The second jumped across the roof before crashing through a hole in said roof like an oversized homicidal cat.

For approximately thirty seconds...

Nobody shot each other.

Everybody shot the Lurkers.

Duty, Clear Sky, Reverb.

Even one terrified loner who'd been hiding behind a pile of washing machines somehow joined in.

The Zone, for one beautiful moment, had united everyone through shared panic.

The first Lurker died halfway through a leap, slamming into one of the house's support columns so hard it remained hanging there by its own claws.

The second met a similar fate after misjudging another jump and impaling itself across the rusted roof rebar.

Reverb blinked.

"...You know..."

He pointed upward.

"...I don't think they're supposed to do that."

Nobody answered. They were busy trying not to die.

Eventually...

Silence returned.

The last Duty soldier collapsed face-first into the mud. The final echoes of gunfire rolled away into Garbage.

Smoke drifted lazily between the ruined buildings.

Reverb looked around. Seven Duty corpses.

Two dead Lurkers decorating the ceiling.

Several Clear Sky stalkers reloading in complete silence.

His workbench...

Miraculously untouched.

He smiled.

"My table survived."

One of the Clear Sky stalkers looked around at the absolute devastation.

"...That's your priority?"

"It took me an hour."

The man slowly nodded.

"...Fair."

Reverb lit another cigarette.

Finally... peace.

The Zone wasn't finished.

The PDA shrieked.

WARNING. EMISSION IMMINENT.

Reverb stared at the screen.

The screen stared back.

"...You're kidding."

Nobody waited for confirmation.

Every stalker in the Flea Market simultaneously abandoned whatever they were doing and sprinted toward the nearest shelter.

Reverb followed.

Mostly because glowing red skies generally led to unpleasant life expectancy statistics.

The old Flea Market building wasn't much to look at.

Half the roof had collapsed, most of the walls had more holes than metal, the staircase existed mostly out of optimism.

It looked incapable of protecting anyone from heavy rain. Let alone an Emission.

"You sure this counts as shelter?" Reverb asked.

An old loner shrugged.

"It did last time."

"That's... not reassuring."

Outside, the sky tore itself apart. Scarlet light spilled across Garbage. The wind began screaming through broken steel. Reality bent.

Several stalkers sat against the walls with their heads between their knees.

One rookie emptied the contents of his stomach onto the concrete.

Another quietly whispered prayers to every god he'd ever heard of.

Someone farther back was crying.

Nobody judged him.

Reverb simply leaned against a rusted support beam, cigarette in hand.

"If this building survives..."

Thunder answered.

"...I'll stop complaining."

The building survived, and so did everyone inside.

More or less.

When the Emission finally passed, the silence felt almost unnatural.

The sky returned to grey and the wind settled.

The Flea Market remained standing.

Against all logic.

Against all engineering.

Against all common sense.

Reverb stepped outside.

Seven Duty soldiers still lay where they'd fallen.

Two Lurkers still hung from the rafters like grotesque hunting trophies.

His mechanic table was still there.

His refrigerator still hummed.

He looked around slowly. Then nodded once.

"...Home sweet home."

Somewhere in the distance...

The Zone laughed.

reddit.com
u/demboy19xx — 2 months ago

Ashes of the Zone, Chapter 26.5 - Before the Zone

"There are nights that change your life.

And there are nights that mean nothing at all.

Years later, you can never remember which was which."

Ljubljana, Slovenia - Six Years Earlier

The city was sleeping.

Or pretending to.

Mantis stood alone on the narrow concrete balcony of a tired apartment block on the edge of Ljubljana, one hand tucked into the pocket of a worn hoodie, the other holding a cigarette that had long since burned itself into a crooked line of ash.

Rain threatened somewhere beyond the horizon.

He could smell it.

The air carried that strange heaviness that came before a storm. Not rain itself. The promise of it.

Below him, the parking lot sat almost empty. A single yellow streetlamp buzzed weakly near a dumpster overflowing with cardboard and broken furniture. Somewhere farther away, a dog barked once.

Then silence again.

The city breathed.

Mantis took a drag from the cigarette. The ember glowed bright orange in the darkness.

For a moment he watched it.

Then exhaled.

The smoke drifted upward and disappeared into the night. Just like every thought he had these days. Half-finished. Forgotten before they reached the end.

He wasn't sad.

That would have been easier.

Sadness had shape.

This felt different.

Like standing in an empty room long after everyone else had gone home.

Like waiting for something without knowing what it was.

Or if it was coming at all.

His eyes wandered across the distant lights of Ljubljana.

Thousands of windows.

Thousands of people.

Some sleeping.

Some fighting.

Some falling in love.

Some crying where nobody could see them.

Entire lives unfolding behind those tiny squares of yellow light.

And somehow he had never felt more alone.

Funny.

You could be surrounded by people every day and still feel like a ghost.

He flicked ash over the balcony railing. The wind caught it immediately.

Gone.

Just like that.

His gaze drifted toward the clouds gathering beyond the city.

Dark.

Heavy.

Restless.

He liked storms.

Not because they were beautiful, but because they were honest.

When a storm arrived, it didn't pretend to be anything else. It didn't smile when it was angry. Didn't laugh when it was breaking apart. Didn't tell you everything was fine.

It simply arrived.

And the world adjusted.

People hid.

Roads emptied.

Windows closed.

Everyone admitted what they really were.

Small.

Temporary.

Human.

Mantis took another drag.

The cigarette was almost finished.

He barely noticed.

His thoughts wandered somewhere familiar.

Work, money, the future.

That invisible thing everyone kept talking about.

The future.

As if it was a place, as if there was some destination waiting at the end of all this.

He never understood how other people seemed so certain. They spoke about five-year plans. Careers. Families. Dreams.

Meanwhile he stood here at two in the morning wondering why the city looked so much bigger at night.

Wondering why he felt calmer when everyone else was asleep.

Wondering why silence felt more like home than people did.

The wind picked up.

A faint rumble rolled somewhere across the horizon.

Thunder.

Far away.

Not here yet, but coming.

Mantis smiled faintly, the first genuine expression he'd worn all day.

"There you are."

The words disappeared into the dark.

No audience, no reason.

Just him and the approaching storm.

For a while he simply stood there, watching. Thinking. Not thinking. Letting the minutes pass.

Below, a car moved through the empty street, headlights sweeping across the apartment block before vanishing around a corner.

The city swallowed the sound.

Silence returned.

The cigarette finally reached the filter.

He crushed it against the railing.

For a moment he considered going back inside.

Instead he stayed.

The thunder sounded again.

Closer now.

The clouds moved slowly over Ljubljana.

And for reasons he couldn't explain, standing there beneath the approaching storm, alone on a forgotten balcony in a forgotten corner of the city, was the most at peace he had felt in months.

The thunder rolled again. Closer now.

Mantis rested both forearms against the cold balcony railing and stared at the city lights below.

He had lived here his entire life, yet somehow it never felt like home. That thought bothered him more than he liked to admit. Most people belonged somewhere.

To someone.

They had circles. Groups. Places where they fit naturally, where conversations flowed without effort, where silence wasn't awkward because everyone already understood each other.

Mantis had never found that. Not in school, not with his old friends, not even in the police force... epecially not there.

He remembered standing in crowded locker rooms after shifts, surrounded by laughter and stories and plans for the weekend.

Someone always talking.

Someone always smiling.

Someone always belonging.

And him...

Standing there among them feeling like an observer watching a life that wasn't his.

Nobody disliked him.

And that was the strange part.

People generally liked him., Respected him. But there was always distance.

An invisible pane of glass between him and everyone else.

He could see them., hear them, work with them- but never quite reach them. Never quite become one of them. Maybe something was wrong with him. The thought crossed his mind more often than he cared to admit. Maybe everyone else received some instruction manual at birth. Something explaining how to connect, how to belong. How to build a life that felt solid.

And somehow his copy got lost.

The city lights blurred slightly.

For a moment he thought it was the wind.

Then he realized his eyes had drifted elsewhere.

To another time.

Another place.

Another person.

His grandmother.

A faint smile touched his lips,but not enough to become happiness. Just enough to hurt.

He could still remember her house.

The smell of coffee in the morning, fresh soup simmering on the stove, the old television always running too loud, the way she used to complain about everything and everyone while secretly caring more than anybody else he had ever known. She had never been particularly affectionate.

Not openly.

She wasn't the type.

But she was always there.

And when you grow up without parents around...

There is a difference between someone loving you and someone choosing you.

His parents had come later.

Years later.

Complicated explanations, complicated apologies, complicated attempts to rebuild something that had never really existed in the first place, but his grandmother had been there from the beginning.

School meetings.

Doctor appointments.

Birthdays.

Bad grades.

Nightmares.

All the small moments nobody remembers until they're gone... she carried them all. And she carried him too. For longer than she should have had to.

Another distant rumble rolled across the sky.

Mantis looked upward. The storm was almost here now. The clouds moved slowly over the city, swallowing stars one by one.

He remembered sitting at his grandmother's kitchen table as a child during nights like this.

Thunder outside. Rain hammering the windows. The smell of chamomile tea filling the room. And her voice- always calm, always certain. As though nothing in the world could truly go wrong while she was nearby.

Funny how children believe that. That some people are permanent, that some doors will always open, that some voices will always answer.

Then one day they don't.

And the world never feels quite as solid afterward.

Mantis swallowed hard.

The cigarette between his fingers had burned almost to the filter again. He hadn't noticed.

"You would've liked this storm, nona."

The words slipped out before he could stop them.

The balcony remained silent, the city remained silent. But for a moment...

He could almost imagine her sitting behind him inside the apartment, complaining that he was smoking again, telling him he worked too much, asking if he'd eaten. Simple things, normal things. Things he would have given anything to hear one more time.

The first drops of rain finally began to fall.

Slow.

Gentle.

Almost careful.

Mantis closed his eyes, and for the first time that night, he admitted something to himself.

The reason he never felt like he belonged wasn't because Ljubljana was the wrong city.

Or because the police force was the wrong job, or because his old friends had drifted away.

It was because the last place that had ever truly felt like home...

Had died with her.


The rain finally came.

Mantis remained on the balcony long after the city disappeared behind a curtain of water. Long after the thunder moved overhead. Long after the last light vanished from the apartment windows around him.

He simply stood there.

Listening.

Breathing.

Existing.

For the first time in a long while, he felt at peace.

Years later, he would walk through radioactive forests beneath blackened skies. He would survive anomalies, mutants, wars, and things no human mind was meant to understand.

He would lose people.

He would find others.

And somewhere along the way, he would discover a place that felt more like home than any city ever could.

But that night...

He knew none of that.

He was simply a young man standing alone on a balcony in Ljubljana, watching a storm roll across the horizon.

And yet...

Mantis didn't know about the Zone then.

But something deep within him missed it.

reddit.com
u/demboy19xx — 2 months ago

Ash Chronicles #2 - Unexpected Complications

"Every stalker believes they have a plan. The Zone considers this adorable."


The situation in Garbage eventually cooled down.

Not because Duty forgave him. Not because anyone suddenly became reasonable.

Mostly because Reverb stopped being physically present for them to shoot at.

That seemed to help.

Great Swamps sounded considerably safer than Garbage at the moment, which admittedly wasn't saying much. Still, Sidorovich had insisted he visit Cold, and experience had taught Reverb that arguing with Sidorovich was about as productive as arguing with an Emission.

So off he went.

The Clear Sky base appeared through the morning fog, wooden walkways stretching over murky water and rusted structures standing stubbornly against the swamp.

For the first time in days, nobody immediately tried to kill him.

Things were looking up.

Naturally, that didn't last.

After speaking with Cold and collecting several assignments from various stalkers who apparently viewed him as free labor, Reverb set off toward his first destination.

The haunted house near Fishing Hamlet.

The name alone should have been enough warning.

The building leaned sideways over the swamp like it was actively trying to collapse. Every board creaked. Every shadow looked suspicious.

Reverb stepped inside.

Nothing happened.

One room. Two rooms. Still nothing.

"Huh."

Then he noticed the corpse hanging from the ceiling.

"...yeah that's normal."

He approached cautiously.

The corpse exploded.

Reverb screamed.

The house screamed.

Reality itself seemed briefly concerned.

Then an overgrown blind dog appeared directly behind him. Of course it did.

Reverb spun around just in time to discover the exit was now barricaded.

"What do you mean barricaded?"

As if things weren't bad enough, something else materialized deeper inside the building.

A ghost.

Or a zombie.

Or a zombie ghost.

Whatever it was, Reverb wanted absolutely no part of it. Unfortunately it wanted very much to be part of his day.

The dog charged.

Reverb fired. Missed.

Fired again. Missed again.

The third shot finally connected and dropped the mutant.

The ghost proved considerably more annoying.

Several minutes and an embarrassing amount of ammunition later, the thing finally dissolved into nothing. Immediately afterward, the barricade vanished. Reverb stood in the doorway for several seconds.

"...I hate this swamp."

The swamp didn't care.

His next assignment led him toward the Pumping Station.

Clear Sky wanted the Renegades removed.

Reverb had recently acquired a Mosin.

Reverb was therefore feeling confident.

These two facts would soon become related.

He spotted the first Renegade through the scope. Perfect shot. Directly on the head.

He fired.

The man continued patrolling.

Reverb blinked.

He chambered another round and fired again.

Nothing.

The Renegade remained completely unbothered by the concept of mortality.

A third shot followed. Still nothing.

"Are these blanks?"

The fourth round finally landed and the Renegade collapsed.

The remaining nine immediately discovered Reverb's location.

"Oh, God"

The swamp exploded into gunfire.

Bullets snapped through reeds and splintered wooden platforms. Reverb dove behind cover while every Renegade in existence seemed to develop a personal interest in his continued suffering.

The situation deteriorated rapidly. Fortunately for Reverb, the Clear Sky squad finally arrived.

Together they pushed through the station, methodically clearing room after room until the last Renegade dropped.

When it was over, Reverb searched the bodies and nodded approvingly.

"Not bad. Not bad at all."

The next assignment sounded simple.

Which should have worried him.

A large mutant had reportedly slaughtered several Clear Sky patrols near an observation tower.

Reverb immediately volunteered.

Because poor decision-making was becoming a recurring theme.

On the way there he discovered a stash hidden inside an anomaly field. Inside sat a heavy metal container secured with several locks.

A note was attached.

PROPERTY OF FREEDOM

RETURN TO THE FIRST FREEDOM MEMBER YOU SEE

"Fair enough."

He picked it up.

The container weighed seven kilograms.

Seven.

"Why?"

Now carrying what felt like an entire apartment building on his back, Reverb continued toward the tower. He stopped at the edge of the swamp and scanned the area through his scope.

Nothing.

Nothing.

Then...

Chimera.

Reverb lowered the rifle.

Raised it again.

Still Chimera.

"Okay."

He adjusted his grip on the Mosin.

"Okay. We can do this."

Then the Chimera climbed the observation tower.

Reverb stared.

The Chimera stared back.

"Are you a scout?"

The Chimera offered no explanation.

Reverb fired once.

The mutant immediately vanished.

Several minutes later he was cautiously crossing the swamp when something flew over his head. Not near him, over him. The Chimera landed behind him and disappeared into a nearby shack.

Reverb nearly experienced a religious awakening.

What followed could only be described as a game of cat and mouse.

Except the mouse was armed. And the cat weighed several hundred kilograms.

Reverb ran circles around the tower and the shack while the Chimera attempted to turn him into a cautionary tale. Every so often he managed to land a shot before sprinting away again.

Ten minutes later the mutant finally collapsed.

Reverb stood over the corpse, breathing heavily.

"Never again."

The Zone immediately ignored that promise.

The Chimera yielded half a kilogram of meat and two claws.

Radioactive lion meat. Delicious... probably.

Later, while passing another anomaly field, Reverb remembered something the Clear Sky merchant had mentioned.

A measurement device that obody wanted to retrieve... which usually translated to: everyone who tried died.

Reverb found it surprisingly quickly.

The device survived. More importantly, so did he. The assignment completed without incident.

A suspicious development.

Back at the Clear Sky base he handed everything in, collected his rewards, and prepared for his final task of the day.

Cold wanted assistance near one of the villages in the southeastern swamps. More Renegades. More gunfire. More opportunities for poor life choices.

Standard Zone business.

Unfortunately, another emergency appeared first.

A biological one.

Reverb suddenly realized he needed to take a shit.

Immediately.

Not soon.

Not eventually.

Now.

He spotted a large drainage pipe and sprinted toward it. Perfect, private, sheltered.

Safe.

Several seconds later he discovered the pipe contained a pyro anomaly.

The resulting experience permanently altered his understanding of personal hygiene.

On the bright side, the bikini area was now completely hairless.

The Zone, as always, found creative ways to solve problems.

reddit.com
u/demboy19xx — 2 months ago

Ash Chronicles - Administrative Error

"Every stalker has a story about becoming a legend. Mine started because I couldn't read a PDA."


Several Months Before the Events of Ashes of the Zone

The Zone hated Reverb.

Not metaphorically. Not spiritually. Not in the vague, mystical way old stalkers liked to talk about around campfires. No. The Zone hated him personally.

At least that was the only explanation he could come up with as he sat beside a campfire in Cordon, staring at everything he owned spread across a filthy sleeping bag.

A handful of rubles. A rusty knife. A PDA that only worked when it felt like working. And a detector that looked like somebody had assembled it during a drunken argument and immediately regretted it.

Reverb took a drag from his cigarette and looked over his little empire.

"Peak human achievement."

The rookie sitting beside him glanced down.

"That's trash."

"That's why you're still a rookie," Reverb replied. "No vision."

The rookie shook his head and wandered off toward another campfire. Reverb watched him go. Honestly, the kid wasn't entirely wrong.

Three days in the Zone and he'd already slept inside an abandoned bus, eaten canned meat that probably remembered the Soviet Union, and nearly died because he'd accidentally stepped into a Whirligig anomaly while taking a piss.

Things were going surprisingly well.

A few days later he found himself crossing Meadow with considerably more confidence than experience. The detector hung proudly from his belt. The PDA mostly functioned. The knife was still terrible, but nobody could have everything.

The area looked quiet.

That should have worried him immediately.

Instead, Reverb made the mistake of relaxing.

The poltergeist announced itself by throwing a refrigerator at his head.

For a brief moment he simply stared at the flying appliance, trying to understand why a refrigerator was airborne. Then survival instincts finally kicked in.

"Absolutely not."

He dove behind a crumbling concrete wall as the refrigerator exploded against it in a shower of metal fragments and dust. Something else immediately ripped free from the ground nearby and launched itself toward him.

"What kind of mutant learns home appliances?"

Another object rose into the air. Then another.

Reverb leaned around the corner and fired several shots toward the shimmering distortion hovering above the road. The invisible creature shrieked, a sound that felt like nails scraping against the inside of his skull.

A few moments later it exploded.

Silence returned.

Reverb blinked.

"Huh..."

He had exactly enough time to feel proud of himself before three bandits appeared.

The resulting firefight was loud, chaotic, and involved considerably more screaming than Reverb would later admit. Most of the screaming came from him.

When it was over, all three bandits were dead.

Reverb wasn't.

That counted as success.

Dark Valley was where things truly began going wrong.

Which was impressive because things had already been going wrong for several days.

He spotted a squad of bandits moving through the trees ahead. Some of them were experienced bandits. Veterans. The sort of men who looked like they had murdered people before breakfast and considered it productive.

Reverb immediately turned around.

"Nope."

Then a Lurker attacked them.

Gunfire erupted through the forest. Men shouted. The mutant screamed.

The entire situation dissolved into complete chaos.

Reverb smiled.

Excellent. Somebody else's problem.

Then one of the rookie bandits spotted him.

Their eyes met across the trees.

The rookie pointed.

Reverb sighed.

"Oh come on-"

Suddenly it became his problem.

Twenty minutes later the Lurker was dead, the bandits were dead, half the local wildlife had probably relocated, and Reverb was somehow still alive.

He entered Garbage looking like a man who had survived a natural disaster through sheer administrative error. That was when he met the zombies.

In theory, zombies should have been easy targets; Slow, predictable. Barely aware of their surroundings.

In practice, Reverb missed almost every shot.

The first zombie kept walking. The second zombie kept walking. Reverb kept missing.

By the time he finally landed a hit, he had nearly emptied the magazine.

"Oh, now you work?"

The zombies answered by opening fire.

Chunks of stone exploded from the boulder he was hiding behind. Dust filled the air. Within seconds the entire rock looked like Swiss cheese.

Reverb shouted several things that would have gotten him slapped by every grandmother in the Zone and finally managed to put both zombies down. Afterward he spent a solid five minutes pretending the encounter had gone according to plan.

It hadn't. Not even remotely.

Still, he was alive.

Not because of exceptional marksmanship. Not because of superior tactics. Mostly because they were slower than he was.

Reverb left the encounter with significantly less ammunition and significantly less dignity than he'd started with, but alive was alive. In the Zone you learned to appreciate small victories.

His next objective waited near the hangar.

Two bounty targets.

A kidnapped rookie stalker.

Simple enough.

At least it sounded simple enough.

The problem with the Zone was that every plan remained simple right until the moment reality got involved.

The hangar came into view sometime later, rusted walls glowing orange beneath the afternoon sun. Reverb slowed his pace, checking corners, scanning windows, trying to look like somebody who knew what he was doing.

Then he spotted a Duty patrol. Two soldiers. Armed. Alert.

Immediately his brain supplied the only piece of information it thought was relevant.

*Duty hates Loners*

A perfectly reasonable assumption. Unfortunately it was also wrong. Reverb raised his pistol. The suppressor coughed once. One of the Duty soldiers dropped instantly.

A notification appeared on his PDA.

ALLY KILLED

Reverb froze.

For several seconds he simply stared at the message. Then he opened the PDA. Then he checked faction relations. Then he stared some more. The reputation value that should have been sitting comfortably at negative two thousand wasn't there.

Instead it read negative eight hundred.

Negative eight hundred.

Not enemies.

Not allies exactly.

But definitely not enemies.

"Oh."

The surviving Duty soldier opened fire.

Concrete exploded beside Reverb's head.

"...oh no."

At that point diplomacy had unfortunately become difficult.

Several minutes later both Duty soldiers were dead and Reverb was jogging away from the hangar while trying very hard not to think about the consequences. That sounded like a future problem, future Reverb could deal with it. Present Reverb had work to do.

The bandits occupied the old railway tunnel farther north. Six of them, plus the hostage.

The fight was short, violent and considerably more successful than the previous one.

Which honestly wasn't saying much.

The first bandit died before he knew the fight had started. The second and third died trying to find cover. The remaining three put up enough resistance to convince Reverb that he was absolutely going to die before promptly proving themselves wrong.

A few minutes later the rookie stalker was free, the bandits were dead, and Reverb found himself walking back toward Garbage with fresh loot and an increasingly dangerous amount of confidence. That confidence lasted all the way to Butcher.

The mutant parts sold well enough.

The ammunition purchase felt even better.

Fresh 9x18 hollow points sat neatly inside his pockets, ready for the silenced PM he'd painstakingly repaired back in Cordon. For the first time all day things actually seemed to be improving.

Which should have worried him.

Outside the hangar a group of scientists were busy losing an argument with several blind dogs.

Reverb sighed.

Helping people was rarely profitable. Unfortunately he wasn't entirely heartless.

The dogs died quickly. The scientists survived. Everybody seemed happy with the arrangement.

Reverb crouched beside the corpses and began collecting mutant parts.

Then the world turned yellow. The change happened instantly. One moment he was looting dogs. The next his vision blurred beneath a sickly amber haze. A high-pitched ringing filled his ears.

The air thickened.

His thoughts suddenly felt slower.

He froze.

Slowly.

Very slowly.

He turned around.

And saw the reason.

A Controller stood in the distance.

Watching him.

Reverb felt every survival instinct he possessed activate simultaneously.

"Nope."

The Controller raised a hand. Reverb was already running. Not retreating. Not repositioning.

Running. Fast.

Faster than he had ever run before. The bus stop appeared ahead and he practically threw himself behind it.

The ringing intensified.

Something brushed against his thoughts.

A pressure. An invitation.

The Controller wanted inside his head.

Reverb wanted absolutely none of that.

He leaned around the edge of the bus stop and fired twice.

One round missed completely.

The second hit.

The Controller barely reacted.

Unfortunately for it, one of the scientists had apparently decided he wasn't interested in becoming brainwashed either. The fight shifted.

Psychic pressure collided with gunfire.

Several nervous minutes later the mutant finally collapsed dead.

Reverb approached cautiously.

Very cautiously.

The sort of cautious normally reserved for unexploded artillery shells.

When the Controller failed to get back up, he finally searched the body. The legendary psychic horror of the Zone possessed:

A bandage, and a handful of rubles.

Reverb stared at the loot. Then at the corpse.

Then back at the loot.

"That's it?"

The Controller offered no explanation.

Eventually Reverb returned to Cordon.

Contracts were completed. Rewards were collected. Life moved on. One of the quest givers handed him coordinates for a yellow stash.

His expectations were low.

The Zone occasionally rewarded optimism with suffering.

This time, somehow, it didn't.

Inside the stash sat a Light Toolkit.

For several seconds Reverb simply stared at it. Then he laughed.

Not because it was funny.But because after everything that had happened that day, it felt statistically impossible. The toolkit immediately became his most valuable possession. Naturally he decided this meant it was time to establish a permanent stash.

Maybe even a small base. The Flea Market in Garbage seemed perfect. Reasonably safe. Good location. Plenty of traffic.

For almost ten whole minutes the plan worked perfectly. Reverb organized supplies, stored spare equipment, sorted ammunition.

For the first time all day, nobody was actively trying to kill him.

Then somebody opened fire.

A bullet cracked past his head.

Reverb dropped behind cover.

"What now?"

Another burst followed.

Duty colors. Duty rifle. Duty soldier. Reverb shot back on instinct. The soldier dropped.

Silence returned.

Then memory caught up.

The hangar. The patrol. The unfortunate misunderstanding involving faction relations.

"Oh."

His PDA updated.

Several hostile contacts appeared. Then several more. Reverb slowly lowered the PDA.

Stared into the distance. And realized that a surprisingly large percentage of Duty personnel in Garbage had apparently taken his earlier mistake personally.

Very personally.

The sound of approaching gunfire echoed through the scrapyards.

Reverb sighed.

The Zone, it seemed, had finally remembered he was having a good day.

And was determined to correct the error.

reddit.com
u/demboy19xx — 2 months ago

Ashes of the Zone, Chapter 26 - After the Fire

"Between life and death, the Zone whispers.

Not to comfort.

Not to guide.

But to remind you: you are never free.”

​

**July 7th, 15:01 - Lab-X23, Collapsing Sector**

​

Darkness pressed in. Not the kind of dark that came from absence of light, but the kind that suffocated, heavy, alive.

​

Mantis drifted inside it, weightless, his body a ruined shell. His chest still rose, shallow and unsteady, but he felt no blood, no wounds. Only heat. Heat that glowed beneath his skin like smoldering coals.

​

“…stay with me...”

​

A flash of light: Widow’s visor inches from his own, her hands braced under his shoulders, dragging his dead weight. Her voice cracked, ragged, desperate.

​

“…burning up, he’s still burning...”

​

Reverb, panicked but holding him under the other arm, a cigarette clutched stupidly in his teeth. Its ember smeared into a comet trail in Mantis’ flickering vision.

​

They’re carrying me, Mantis thought. Or maybe he dreamed it.

​

Then came the claws.

​

From the dark: yellow eyes, lunging, jaws snapping for Widow’s throat. She turned on instinct, rifle barking. Sparks burst against its hide, ichor spraying Mantis’ cheek like molten tar. The burn should have blistered. Instead, the wound sealed as soon as it opened, light leaking faintly from beneath the skin.

​

Widow flinched, but didn’t falter. “Move!” she screamed. “They’re closing!”

​

​

---

​

​

Ribbon led the push, a lumbering wreck in a bleeding exosuit. Sparks trailed from his shoulders, pistons shrieked with each step, but he didn’t stop. His pistol thundered, each shot cracking a Fang soldier backward. “Clear the way!” he bellowed.

​

Red stumbled behind, her Duty SEVA smoking from acid scars, one arm locked around Reverb’s waist for balance as she fired bursts with the other. Every shot echoed like a plea, her eyes always flicking back toward him, making sure he still stood.

​

“Keep moving, keep moving!” Ribbon roared again, smashing through a barricade of steel plating, shoving the path open.

​

But the Zone was pouring everything at them. Broken Fang soldiers rounded corners in disciplined squads, rifles flashing. Mutants pressed from the dark: blind dogs, twisted forms with too many limbs, snapping, shrieking. And somewhere behind them, deeper in the dark, something bigger roared, the kind of roar that bent in the air like metal torn apart.

​

​

---

​

​

He faded. The noise dulled. His vision smeared like oil on water.

​

Then... Hollow. Pale eyes, patient, standing in the silence. Not real. Not there. But watching.

“You think you're friends are carrying you,” the voice threaded into his skull. “But you are carried by the Zone. And it does not let go.”

​

Mantis tried to lift his head, to reach, but his body refused him. Only the heat inside answered, pulsing.

​

The vision broke.

​

​

---

​

Widow’s arms trembled, dragging Mantis with every step. “He’s getting heavier,” she rasped.

​

Reverb spat his cigarette out, grabbing Mantis tighter under the other arm. “Yeah, well, maybe stop feeding him protein shakes, huh? Guy’s built like a tank.” His laugh cracked, raw fear behind it, but it kept him moving.

​

Red snapped her AN-94 up, cutting down a Fang soldier rushing them from a side corridor. She staggered as the recoil jarred her wound, but didn’t let go of Reverb. “Eyes front!” she barked.

​

Octane stumbled at the rear, half-dragging his rifle, his abdomen a bloody ruin. He tried to cover them, shots wild but enough to slow a pack of dogs nipping at their heels. “Keep… going…” His grin was still there, crooked, as if defiance alone could keep him alive.

Ribbon turned, exo hissing, slamming a steel boot into the face of a mutant that leapt from the wall. Its skull cracked like glass, body folding under the weight. “Door ahead!” he shouted, voice breaking with strain. “Push through!”

​

​

---

​

The hall stretched like it was alive. Too long. Too dark. Every step stretched into forever.

Widow’s grip felt distant. Her breath rasped in his ear. He tried to tell her he was still here, still alive. The words wouldn’t come.

Light bled from his palms. He saw it. Flickers, weak but there, dripping like liquid fire. Widow didn’t see. Reverb didn’t. But Hollow did.

​

Hollow stood at the far end of the corridor, silent, his pale eyes burning brighter.

“You burn with it now,” he whispered into Mantis’ mind. “But burn is not the same as control. Do not mistake one for the other.”

​

The vision cracked apart.

​

Gunfire. Screams. Widow crying his name.

​

​

---

​

The squad stumbled into a wider chamber, ceiling collapsed into jagged teeth of rebar and concrete. It should have been safe. It wasn’t.

​

Dozens of Broken Fang soldiers were waiting.

Their rifles rose in unison.

​

Ribbon’s pistol clicked empty. He lowered his head, servos shrieking, and roared. “CHARGE!”

And the squad threw themselves into the fire, dragging Mantis with them.

​

​

---

​

Mantis didn’t hear the gunfire the way he should have.

​

He knew it was there, he felt it, vibrations rolling through the floor, sharp concussions punching through the air. But the sound itself arrived late, muffled, as if filtered through water. Each shot was a distant thud instead of a crack. Each scream a smear instead of a voice.

​

**Why is it so quiet?** he wondered.

The world tilted. The ceiling slid sideways. For a heartbeat, gravity forgot what it was supposed to do.

​

Then Widow stumbled, and the jolt snapped him half-back into himself.

​

​

---

​

Ribbon hit the Fang line like a wrecking ram.

His exosuit screamed in protest, servos grinding, sparks vomiting from ruptured joints as he plowed into the first soldier. The impact lifted the man off his feet and hurled him backward into his own squad. Ribbon didn’t slow. He couldn’t. Momentum was all he had left.

​

“MOVE!” he bellowed, voice distorted through damage and rage.

​

Red and Reverb broke off to either side, a desperate pincer. Red’s AN-94 hammered in brutal, disciplined bursts, each recoil shuddering through her battered SEVA. She was breathing hard now, every inhale sharp with pain, but her eyes stayed locked forward.

Reverb fired while running, shotgun booming, shells ejecting in a blur. He wasn’t joking anymore. No quips. No laughs. Just teeth clenched around empty air where a cigarette should’ve been, eyes wide and feral.

​

Behind them, something howled.

​

Not human. Not even mutant in the usual sense. A sound like metal being torn open from the inside.

​

​

---

​

Mantis drifted again.

​

The Fang soldiers blurred into silhouettes, their movements too slow, too jerky. He watched one raise his rifle, watched the moment stretch, elongate, then watched Red’s bullet punch through the man’s helmet before the trigger finished moving.

​

Time felt wrong.

​

His hands twitched. Light seeped out between his fingers, faint but undeniable. It pulsed in time with his heartbeat.

​

Stop, he thought. Or maybe he prayed.

Hollow stood beside the chaos, untouched by it.

​

Not in front of him. Not behind. Just there.

“You are slipping,” Hollow said calmly, as if stating the weather. “You hear less because you are already elsewhere.”

​

Mantis tried to scream at him, to demand answers, but his mouth wouldn’t open.

​

“You want clarity,” Hollow continued. “But clarity comes after collapse. Not before.”

​

The corridor folded in on itself.

​

​

---

​

Ribbon intercepted a rushing Fang soldier, crushing the man’s chest with a single piston-driven punch.

​

Octane staggered, vision tunneling, blood slicking his hands. He leaned against a broken column long enough to steady his rifle and fired into the oncoming shapes behind them; mutants pouring through the smoke, eyes glowing, mouths open too wide.

One of them leapt.

​

Widow spun and shot it midair, the body slamming into the floor inches from Octane’s boots.

​

“Don’t stop!” she yelled. “DON’T YOU DARE STOP!”

​

Her voice cracked on the last word.

​

​

---

​

Mantis felt her fear like it was his own.

​

It washed through him, hot and sharp, cutting through the fog. Widow’s panic. Reverb’s terror barely held together by momentum. Red’s stubborn refusal to fall. Ribbon’s fury, burning itself out faster than his exosuit could keep up.

​

They’re going to die, the thought came unbidden.

​

Something inside him recoiled at that.

The heat surged.

​

For a moment, the corridor lit. not with fire, but with presence. The light from his palms flared brighter, bleeding through his gloves, casting warped shadows along the walls.

​

Hollow watched, expression unreadable.

“Careful,” he murmured. “Instinct is the doorway. Once you step through, there is no return to ignorance.”

​

​

---

​

The Fang line broke.

​

Not cleanly. Not decisively. But enough.

Ribbon smashed through the last of them and slammed his shoulder into a blast door control. Red threw herself into cover, reloading with shaking hands.

​

The mutants were closer now. Too close.

Widow hauled Mantis through the threshold just as the first claw scraped across the floor where his head had been.

​

“GO! GO!” Ribbon roared.

​

The door began to close.

​

Something slammed into it from the other side, hard enough to dent the steel inward.

​

Again.

​

Again.

​

Octane collapsed just inside the doorway, gasping, vision dimming. Widow slid down beside him, one hand on his chest, the other still gripping her rifle.

​

“Stay with me,” she begged. “Please. Just... stay.”

​

The door sealed with a deafening clang.

Silence fell like a dropped blade.

​

​

---

​

Mantis didn’t hear it.

​

He floated above the moment, watching the squad through a haze of light and shadow. Their breaths were loud now. Ragged. Real.

Widow’s hands were shaking as she checked him, her visor almost touching his face. Reverb leaned against the wall, dry-heaving, laughter threatening to spill out and collapse into sobs instead.

​

Red slid down beside him, armor hissing, eyes squeezed shut for just a second too long.

​

Ribbon slumped against the sealed door, exosuit finally giving out, servos dying one by one until he was just a man again inside broken metal.

​

Hollow stepped closer.

“You feel it now,” he said quietly. “The pull. The widening.”

​

Mantis wanted to say no.

​

Instead, the light pulsed again, brighter this time, and somewhere deep in the lab, something answered.

​

Far away, metal screamed.

Closer, something scratched at the other side of the door.

​

The squad didn’t move.

​

They couldn’t.

​

They were still alive, but only just.

And Mantis, suspended between breaths, understood with terrifying clarity:

​

The fight hadn’t ended...

It had only changed shape.

​

​

---

​

They moved without speaking.

​

Not because there was nothing to say, but because any sound louder than breath felt like an invitation.

​

Ribbon went first, or what passed for first now. His exosuit was dead weight, joints locked, servos burned out. He dragged himself forward with grim determination, one hand on the wall, the other still wrapped around his pistol even though the slide was cracked and useless. Duty habit. Duty instinct. Even broken, he refused to be last.

​

Red followed, limping, her SEVA scorched and half-melted where acid and anomalies had kissed it. She stayed close to Reverb, one arm ready to grab him if his legs gave out again. Her eyes never stopped moving. Left. Right. Ceiling. Corners. Anywhere something else might decide to crawl out of.

​

Widow carried Mantis.

Not fully. Not cleanly. She dragged him more than held him, his arm slung over her shoulder, his boots scraping the floor. Every few steps his weight shifted wrong, like gravity forgot how to treat him. Once, for half a second, his feet lifted entirely off the ground.

​

She didn’t comment on it.

She refused to.

​

Behind them, Octane stumbled along the wall, one hand pressed hard to his abdomen, the other gripping his rifle more out of muscle memory than hope. His breathing was wet now. Shallow. Each inhale sounded like it scraped something raw inside his chest.

No one told him to stop.

​

The corridors were wrong.

​

Not collapsing, but listening.

Metal groaned in places it shouldn’t. Pipes ticked with uneven rhythm. The lights overhead flickered, not failing, but dimming just enough to stretch shadows longer than the walls could justify.

​

And beneath it all… sound.

Not footsteps.

Not claws.

​

Something like breathing, dragged through steel ducts. Slow. Measured. Curious.

Reverb swallowed hard. “Tell me you hear that too,” he whispered.

​

Widow nodded once.

​

Ribbon didn’t answer. His jaw was clenched so tight it looked like it might crack.

They turned a corner and froze.

The hallway ahead was empty.

​

Too empty.

​

No debris. No bodies. No signs of the firefights that should’ve scarred this place. The walls were clean. Untouched. As if the Zone itself had erased the evidence.

​

Red’s voice came out barely louder than a thought. “This wasn’t like this before.”

Reverb forced a breathy half-laugh that died immediately. “Yeah… well… Zone’s got a hell of a cleanup crew.”

​

Something moved in the ceiling.

Not fast. Not aggressive.

Just a ripple, like a shape adjusting itself behind layers of metal.

​

Octane stumbled, caught himself, hissed in pain. Widow tightened her grip on Mantis as his body jerked suddenly, light flaring faintly beneath his skin before dimming again.

“Mantis,” she whispered. “Hey. Stay with me. We’re almost out.”

​

His eyes fluttered open for a fraction of a second.

​

They didn’t focus on her.

They looked through her.

Then they rolled back, breath hitching, heat radiating off him in waves.

​

Reverb took a step back. “Widow…” He didn’t finish the sentence.

She knew what he meant.

She just wasn’t ready to hear it said.

​

They moved again.

Every step toward the exit gate felt longer than the last. The air grew thicker, charged, prickling against exposed skin. Radios crackled with static, then went dead altogether.

​

The sounds followed them.

Always just out of sight.

A scrape behind a wall. A low vibration underfoot. Once, just once, a whisper that sounded almost like language, but slipped away before it could be understood.

Red stopped abruptly, raising a fist.

​

They all froze.

​

Ahead, the exit gate loomed through the haze. The same massive structure they’d breached hours ago. Floodlights flickered weakly above it, illuminating dust and drifting ash.

​

Between them and it, nothing.

No enemies.

No obstacles.

Just open space.

​

“That’s bad,” Reverb muttered.

Ribbon nodded grimly. “Means we’re expected.”

​

They crossed anyway.

Halfway through the open stretch, something shifted in the darkness above the gate. Not descending. Not attacking.

​

Watching.

​

Widow felt it crawl across her spine like ice.

Mantis groaned softly, head lolling. Light leaked again from his palms, brighter now, pulsing in uneven rhythm. The air around him bent, just slightly, like heat haze over asphalt.

Octane stared at it, awe and fear mixing behind bloodshot eyes. “He’s… not bleeding anymore.”

​

No one replied.

They didn’t need to.

​

The gate controls came into view. Manual override. Rusted. Bent. Still functional.

Ribbon reached it and paused.

​

For the first time since the throne chamber, his voice wavered. “Once this opens… whatever’s been following us-”

​

A sound cut him off.

Not loud.

Close.

Right behind the walls.

​

A deep, resonant thrum, like something massive shifting its weight.

Reverb whispered, “That’s not a mutant.”

Red shook her head slowly. “That’s not anything.”

​

Widow tightened her hold on Mantis, pressing her forehead briefly against his temple. “Please,” she breathed, not sure who she was begging anymore. “Just get us out.”

Ribbon slammed the lever down.

​

The gate began to rise.

Slow.

Too slow.

​

The sound behind them grew louder. Not approaching, not retreating, but aligning, as if the structure itself was tuning to whatever waited in the dark.

​

Mantis gasped sharply.

His eyes snapped open.

For a heartbeat, pure white light burned behind them.

​

Widow cried out his name.

Then the light vanished, his body going limp again, breath shallow but steady.

​

The gate creaked higher.

​

Cold air rushed in from outside, carrying the smell of the Zone proper; ozone, rot, freedom.

​

None of them looked back.

​

Because none of them wanted to know what would be standing there if they did.

They slipped through the opening as soon as it was wide enough, dragging, stumbling, half-carrying the broken pieces of themselves into the open.

​

Behind them, deep within Lab-X23, something exhaled.

​

​

---

​

Cold air hit Mantis first.

​

Not wind, weight. The Zone proper pressing in, heavy with ozone and rot, the kind of air that tasted like metal and old rain. It burned his lungs even as it grounded him, tugging him half out of the dark.

​

Boots scraped stone. Voices overlapped, blurred, stretched thin.

​

“…easy, easy, don’t drop him-”

Something brushed his cheek. Fabric. Widow’s sleeve, torn and stiff with dried blood. Her grip was iron, desperate, as if letting go would let him fall through the world entirely.

​

They were outside.

He knew that much.

​

The sky above the lab entrance was wrong, too pale, washed-out, like someone had overexposed reality. Clouds hung low and motionless, smeared across the horizon like bruises that refused to heal. The concrete apron outside Lab-X23 was chewed to rubble, cratered and blackened, as if the ground itself had been punished.

​

Gunfire ghosts lingered in the air.

Mantis didn’t hear shots, he felt where they had been. Residual violence clinging to the stones, the way heat clings after a fire dies.

He tried to lift his head.

Failed.

​

Someone cursed softly. Reverb. He recognized the cadence even through the fog. No jokes this time. Just strain.

“…Christ, look at this place…”

Red’s voice followed, hoarse, scanning. “Spread out. Slow. If something’s still here, I want eyes on it before it wants eyes on us.”

​

Mantis’ vision slipped.

​

For a moment, the sky fractured into overlapping images: trees from Zaton, the Duga silhouette in the distance, Hollow standing where the clouds should be, watching without judgment.

​

Where is Sentinel?

​

The thought surfaced unbidden, sharp enough to cut through the haze.

Then darkness rolled back in, gentle but relentless.

​

​

---

​

They set him down behind a slab of fallen concrete, half-cover at best.

​

Widow knelt immediately, hands on Mantis’ chest, checking breath, pulse, anything to reassure herself he was still tethered to the same world she was. His skin was too warm. Not fever-warm. Active.

​

“Still breathing,” she said, more to herself than anyone else.

​

Ribbon stood a few meters out, shoulders slumped, exosuit nothing more than a carcass of scorched metal hanging off him. He scanned the perimeter on instinct alone, pistol raised though the weapon was little more than a symbol now.

​

The outside told a story.

Shell casings littered the ground in wide arcs. Heavy calibers. Belt-fed fire, judging by the pattern. Impact scars chewed across concrete barricades that hadn’t been there when they’d gone in. Burn marks climbed the lab’s outer wall in long black streaks, and one of the floodlight towers had collapsed entirely, twisted like a broken limb.

​

“What the fuck happened here,” Reverb muttered.

Ribbon grunted. “This was a stand.”

​

Red crouched near a crater, fingers brushing a smear of dark blood dried into the dust. Too much of it. Too wide a spray. “And not a short one.”

​

Widow looked up. “Sentinel.”

The name settled heavy between them.

They spread out further now, slow and methodical despite exhaustion. No one wanted to say it out loud, but the question gnawed at all of them.

​

What happened to him?

Reverb kicked aside a chunk of debris and froze.

​

“…guys.”

He bent slowly, carefully, like the ground might punish sudden movement.

Half-buried beneath a collapsed section of concrete lay a familiar shape.

​

A helmet.

The Nosorog exo-helmet.

​

Its heavy visor was spider-webbed outward from a single, precise hole dead center. The impact had blown inward. Clean. Deliberate. There was blood... dark, tacky, pooled inside the helmet and streaked down its rim.

​

But there was no body.

No armor. No limbs. No drag marks.

Just the helmet.

​

Reverb swallowed. Hard. “That’s… that’s Sentinel’s.”

No one contradicted him.

​

Red closed her eyes for a second, then opened them, jaw set. “No body.”

Ribbon stared at the helmet for a long moment, then slowly lowered his pistol. “Sentinel doesn’t go down without taking someone with him.”

​

Widow’s voice was quiet, fragile in a way it rarely was. “Or something.”

They all felt it then, that familiar itch at the base of the skull. The sense that this wasn’t an ending. Just another unanswered door.

​

​

---

​

​

Mantis surfaced again.

​

This time, the world stayed long enough to hurt.

​

The pain wasn’t localized, it was everywhere, a dull pressure under his skin like his body no longer belonged solely to him. He heard Widow’s breathing close to his ear, felt her hand tighten when he stirred.

​

“Easy,” she whispered. “You’re out. You’re safe.”

Safe.

The word felt… inaccurate.

​

His eyes cracked open just enough to catch the helmet in Reverb’s hands. Recognition hit him harder than the pain.

​

Sentinel.

The name echoed, hollow.

​

Where are you? Mantis wondered, not aloud.

Something shifted at the edge of his awareness, like a presence withdrawing its attention. He felt no answer, only distance. The same distance Hollow always kept.

The sky dimmed. Or maybe his vision did.

​

Zaton.

​

The word surfaced with purpose this time. Not memory. Direction.

Then the world slipped again.

​

​

---

​

​

They didn’t linger.

​

Not after the helmet. Not after the silence stretched too long.

​

Red secured the helmet to her pack without ceremony. Reverb said nothing, his usual chatter completely absent. Ribbon took point despite the limp in his step, Duty instincts dragging him forward even as his body protested.

​

Widow and Reverb lifted Mantis between them again, careful, practiced now. He felt lighter, too light... as if the Zone itself was helping carry him.

​

Octane followed last, stubborn and pale, leaning on his rifle like a crutch. Every step was a negotiation with pain, but he didn’t fall behind.

​

The lab loomed behind them, quiet now.

Too quiet.

​

As they moved away, the clouds above Lab-X23 shifted for the first time, rolling inward, swallowing the structure inch by inch. Whatever had exhaled inside did not follow, at least not in any way they could see.

​

Zaton lay ahead.

​

Rough ground. Open skies. A place to breathe. A place to regroup.

​

“A few klicks,” Ribbon muttered. “We move slow. Keep him alive long enough to get to Skadovsk.”

Widow nodded, eyes never leaving Mantis’ face. “He’ll make it.”

Reverb glanced back once at the lab, then forced himself to turn away. “Yeah,” he said quietly. “He better.”

​

They walked on, silhouettes cutting through the ash-stained light, carrying wounds, questions, and one man who no longer quite belonged to the ground beneath his feet.

Behind them, Lab-X23 vanished into cloud and silence.

reddit.com
u/demboy19xx — 2 months ago