i need help with vocals

so i made this really cool instrumental. right. it's inspired by locals girls like us by underscores, but it's my first time doing vocals, so when i try to put vocals over the instrumental it just sounds like im talking over the beat. does anyone have any advice for this sort of thing! cheers in advance! ^_^

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u/disreconnect — 27 days ago

song for an album im making

bpms kinda low for breakcore but i think the choppping is complex enough to warrant posting it here, i want your honest feedback =:*)

u/disreconnect — 1 month ago