u/f00err

Hi good people! I finally made it to my first page! I tried to incorporate the great feedback I received on my first panel. I've added line variation and also some more color and contrast fade as a function of the distance.
I'd love to know what anyone thinks, any feedback on readability, style or anything else is super welcome!
Thank you in advance

Hi all, I'm looking for criticism over this piece, mostly around stile and readability, but also anything else that comes to mind really. I'm working on a comic, I have already finished the full storyboard and I'm currently trying to settle for a style and a workflow that I like before committing. I'm trying to go for a limited palette and semi-flat colors, the subjects will be mostly mechanic and architectural so it will have tons of linework. Thanks in advance!