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General Edits:

• Heavenly Passage Pavilion, Heavenly Passage, & Heavenly Tower = Skyspire Tower (Based on the Yen Press Translations & the fandom)
  • Alternate Translation (Heaven's Tower, Heavenward Pavilion, Skyspire Tower)
    • Note: I went with Skyspire Tower due to recency bias as I just recently read the official Volume 20-22 translations
• Luminous (For chapter 4 & 5) = Luminus (Changed for the sake of Consistency)
• Dash = Canter (Yen Press Volume 22 - Prologue)
• Swim = Paddler (Yen Press Volume 22 - Prologue)
• Rain = Raine (Recency Bias)
• Misery = Mizery (Recency Bias)

Edit:

• Rudra = Ludora

Genesis Weapons are as follows: (Based on the Fandom)

• World = World｢”Universe"｣
• Tenma = Asura｢“Heavenly Demon”｣
• Hope = Elpis｢“Hope”｣
• Law = Dharma｢“Law”｣
• Memory = Memory｢“Recollection”｣
• Prosperity = Artha｢“Prosperity”｣
• Charity = Kama｢“Affection”｣

Edit

• Earth God = Deva｢“Earth God”｣

Edited:

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1-AdgE9lqrOLyV95FKIHFj-omqcwbtkDqaYygpZCYNEU/edit?usp=sharing