How can I improve my piece?

Would the piece sound too repetitive? Also, would the tempo be too quick especially for the bit towards the end? I'd be happy to listen to your advice :)

Edit: I forgot to add the key signature, sorry if it's difficult to read

u/fihrunner — 9 hours ago

how can I improve my unfinished composition

How should I develop this ABA form piece? And do you think I used the right tempo for the piece? Please share your ideas, thanks :)

Edit: I'll adjust the dynamics slightly afterwards

u/fihrunner — 18 days ago

what should i name this? :)

what should I name this piece and what does it make you think of? Also are there any other piano pieces (or composers) that have a similar style? please tell me areas that I can improve on, thanks :)

u/fihrunner — 1 month ago

unfinished piece for sax and piano, any advices? :)

first time posting my composition please give me some advice 🙏🏻

u/fihrunner — 2 months ago