u/grassgravel

As the title says above.

This is tak san itchyban?

Whst does it mean. Does it me great first? Does it mean chicken rice? I cant tell. Is it okay to like this?

I am struggling with referencing two characters lets say bob and jeff. It takes some time before bob and jeff come out with their names because bob and jeff are a little bit suspicious of other folks and they withold their personal information. You understand. I struggle to reference each of them in a way that feels clean to read. I know its poor to reference bob as the short haired one and jeff as the long haired one when they speak, for example, "I ain't falling for that pie in the pants trick again." Said the short haired one (which is Bob). I have to reference them because Bob and Jeff are communicating with more than jist each other in a few early scenes.

I suppose I could try using or inventing a more physically interesting characterstic but that doesnt seem right either.

Would love to hear some thoughts from the community.