This is my first attempt at writing a story. I want feedback and want to know where my main weaknesses are, and if there's any strengths.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1WDGnXpGm8-HOWD4fBh4MiiRzrRfUgZc1G3dTY4fyPkY/edit?usp=drivesdk
Started my fantasy story a couple days ago. This is something I have always wanted to do. Instead of spending all my time world building, I decided to just start writing. I have realised it's quite hard. Anyway here is basically my first attempt. I would really like some feedback, to know if I am going in the right direction., and what clear mistakes I am making, as I know there are many.
Please use link below:
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1WDGnXpGm8-HOWD4fBh4MiiRzrRfUgZc1G3dTY4fyPkY/edit?usp=sharing