u/ok_deylix

Hello po! Can someone read mine and give me an honest comment or suggestion?

Kinakabahan po kasi ako, especially kapag nakakabasa ako ng mga posts na “essay that got me into Ateneo.” I can’t help but compare my essay to the ones I see online, and sometimes I feel like mine isn’t as beautiful or flowery. 🥹

I feel like my essay is unique naman because of the experience I wrote about, pero I’m not sure if I was able to write it well or if the flow makes sense huhu. I’d really appreciate any honest feedback or suggestions po. Thank you! 🥹