u/oliver-Estevez

Hello! Thank you for taking the time to read my post.

I am in the process of applying to Harvard College as an international student from the Dominican Republic. I have completed my Common App Personal Essay (650 words) and all five Harvard supplemental essays.

I would love to find someone willing to read them with a critical and honest eye. I am not looking for someone to rewrite or correct them for me. What matters most to me is understanding:

What impression do I leave on you after you read them?
What specific aspects of my personality do you remember?
Does the essay truly allow you to get to know me as a person?
Are there parts that feel forced, confusing, or unauthentic?
What would you change or strengthen if you were in my shoes?

If you are a current Harvard student, have navigated a competitive admissions process, work with college application essays, or simply have experience reviewing Personal Statements, I would greatly appreciate your perspective.

I am happy to send the essays via direct message. Thank you so much in advance for any feedback!

Who can help me with my essays? I've already written my main Common App essay and all five Harvard supplementals, and I need someone to read them and give me their honest opinion.

Hola a todos. Soy estudiante de República Dominicana y estoy postulando a Harvard. Ya terminé mi ensayo principal de 650 palabras y mis cinco ensayos adicionales. Busco a un estudiante o alguien con experiencia en ensayos universitarios que pueda leerlos y darme una opinión sincera.