u/oneshotround

Image 1 — Can I get some feedback on this? I feel like it needs some editing in the composition but I also want story feedback.
Image 2 — Can I get some feedback on this? I feel like it needs some editing in the composition but I also want story feedback.
Image 3 — Can I get some feedback on this? I feel like it needs some editing in the composition but I also want story feedback.
Image 4 — Can I get some feedback on this? I feel like it needs some editing in the composition but I also want story feedback.
Image 5 — Can I get some feedback on this? I feel like it needs some editing in the composition but I also want story feedback.
Image 6 — Can I get some feedback on this? I feel like it needs some editing in the composition but I also want story feedback.

Can I get some feedback on this? I feel like it needs some editing in the composition but I also want story feedback.

u/oneshotround — 3 days ago