u/pharnan3

Hi everyone! I’m looking for beta readers for my completed young adult fantasy novel, The Road That Remembered, about 72k words.

Blurb: Rook only wants to pass through Dunmere unnoticed, but when a talking raven, a baker’s daughter, and a stolen name pull him into a hidden road beneath the city, he discovers someone is rewriting people out of their own lives. To stop it, Rook has to decide whether staying forgotten is safer than being known.

Feedback: I’m mainly looking for big-picture reader reactions: where the story drags, where it gets confusing, which characters work best, and whether the ending feels satisfying.

Feel free to comment or DM if interested. Thanks!