
Dialogue
I new writing, and this is my first time writing a scene like this I feel like it looks a bit out of place or seems too random Is there anything I can do to make this sound better or is it okay how it is?

I new writing, and this is my first time writing a scene like this I feel like it looks a bit out of place or seems too random Is there anything I can do to make this sound better or is it okay how it is?
I am three chapters in to what could possibly be a 200 chapter fic
I’ve got the perfect opportunity to add the POV of one of the “villain” groups
But I’m not sure, as I don’t want to accidentally establish them as not evil too early
The main character won’t meet them (although they will be the main main characters later on in the story) for at least another 20 chapters, I’m worried it’s too early and fast paced, but this is a worldbuilding chapter
is there any way to do the TikTok fall girl aesthetic while beinglow/0 waste? I really love the aesthetic but I also know how much waste it can produce
Is there any fics like bones in the ocean i really love the start and middle of it i don’t really care too much about the whole curse bit, but i love the conflict of navy captain befriending captured piret then Joining teams, is there any fics with the same vibes as the start
or any pirate fic preferably with navy in it!
(no nsfw pls)