Could you check the pronunciation in my English song?

I’m not a native English speaker. I’ve always admired English-speaking rock bands, and I’d like to start writing and releasing songs in English in the future.
I’d really appreciate it if you could evaluate my English pronunciation and let me know whether it’s at a level where I can confidently release it as music.
I already know it isn’t perfect, and I’m not expecting it to be. What I’d really like to know is how it sounds to a native speaker. Is it so difficult to understand that it becomes distracting? Or is it good enough that I can keep improving as I continue making music?
Please don’t worry about being too harsh—I genuinely want your honest opinion. If you think I should spend more time studying English pronunciation before releasing more songs, I’d rather hear that than receive empty praise.

u/psychy_jpn — 1 day ago
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Psycho Dance

Befor the vocal recordin
This is probably the most hardcore track I’ve made so far. My favorite part starts around 1:20 — the way the song develops from there is something I’m really proud of. I’d love for you to give it a listen.

u/psychy_jpn — 1 day ago