u/spatt97

Once again I’m curious of the internets opinion on my lyrics lol. Leave a comment of any improvements I can make, your favorite or least favorite part, or what the song means to you :)

Btw I do use ai to put music to my lyrics like the cringe god I am lol (but I do, do the writing) maybe Spotify upload one day 🤔

Meant to be for a post hardcore/ Metalcore song

[verse]
Another train here another train gone
The homeless man is getting it on
Get back the crippled hands on a piece
Red alert cameras out calling the police

[verse]
Each sentence indecipherable
No wheels on a brand new bicycle
Hailing to an unborn god disciple
To bring fire to freeze a five inch icicle

[pre chorus]
They only know what I tell them
Sympathy exists on a spectrum
Of light rays casted from a prism
Containing the fragments of exposition

[chorus]
Educated in sickness but can’t feel the cancer
Sane questions misunderstand crazy answers
It can be mistaken, lost in translation
Guidance is taken with hesitation
Educated in sickness but can’t feel the cancer
Everyone thinks they have the answer
They only peel and reveal what I feel
But they never tasted my home cooked meal

[verse]
One mind knows the meaning
To feeling what’s for seeing
The true definition of seething
Is to wake up when you’re dreaming

[verse]
Stuck mumbling that you had it all
But then you had a great big fall
Made a big mess with your brains on the wall
Investigators think that they know it all

[pre chorus]
They only know what I tell them
Sympathy exists on a spectrum
Of light rays casted from a prism
Containing the fragments of exposition

[chorus]
Educated in sickness but can’t feel the cancer
Sane questions misunderstand crazy answers
It can be mistaken, lost in translation
Guidance is taken with hesitation
Educated in sickness but can’t feel the cancer
Everyone thinks they have the answer
They only peel and reveal what I feel
But they never tasted my home cooked meal

[verse]
Each sentence indecipherable
No wheels on a brand new bicycle
Hailing to an unborn god disciple
To bring fire to freeze a five inch icicle

[outro]
Weight so heavy when your stashing stones
To throw at glass houses when no one’s home
You think you feel me only through assumption?
But im just a hollowed out basic pumpkin
They’d never know
You’d never know
I’m dying inside
Until I’m just a pile of mush

First post here! I’ve been writing lyrics for years, use to write for my band but that was a while ago lol. Now I just do it as a hobby, just wanted to share one of my songs and see what yall think! The genre it’s intended for is post hardcore/ Metalcore so yeah :)

[verse]
The cells divide
Enter as we cry
Into the right of lies
Deprived of what’s supplied

[verse]
The drain feeds from the poke of a syringe
Injecting the liquid waste of what’s cringe
Eat the grease and drink the drain-o
You’re a joke to captain insane-o

[pre chorus]
Be a bland burrito ditch the cumin
It’s hard to be more than only human
Let your interest peak from another ad
The algorithm depletes mom and dad

[chorus]
Muzzle the only one that has a voice
Make them believe the lock is their choice
Flush the garbage down the drain
Limit the amount of access to their brain
Boomer or zoomer it’s all the same
They’ll all burn from the dying flame
Flush the garbage down the drain
Limit the amount of access to their brain

[verse]
Lost the beauty in a kite
In the day wishing for night
Your soul can find a way to burn so bright
You’ll never see it blinded by blue light

[pre chorus]
Be a bland burrito ditch the cumin
It’s hard to be more than only human
Let your interest peak from another ad
The algorithm depletes mom and dad

[chorus]
Muzzle the only one that has a voice
Make them believe the lock is their choice
Flush the garbage down the drain
Limit the amount of access to their brain
Boomer or zoomer it’s all the same
They’ll all burn from the dying flame
Flush the garbage down the drain
Limit the amount of access to their brain

[verse]
Overwhelmed in the low
Living in the elbow
Becoming a parasite
Losing its eyesight

[bridge]
Erase, cut, copy and paste
Try on your new face
Change your opinion by the taste
Your value is opinion based
Mama never said anything about the internet
Scroll the troll until you cut your finger web

[chorus]
Muzzle the only one that has a voice
Make them believe the lock is their choice
Flush the garbage down the drain
Limit the amount of access to their brain
Boomer or zoomer it’s all the same
They’ll all burn from the dying flame
Flush the garbage down the drain
Limit the amount of access to their brain

[outro]
The cells divide
Enter as we cry
Into the right of lies
Deprived of what’s supplied