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So for starters. I used to love writing while I was young that I even tried to write a book (which was kinda like the walking dead but in my own view), I’m not gonna lie and say that it was creative or that it was even good. Anyways, I recently got back to writing a little but I’m having lots of trouble in a way.
Problems such as:
1- creativity
2- characters’ names, design, and characteristics.
3- editing
4- English needs improvement
5- busy
6- I don’t know how to even make, write, or publish a book, like I don’t know the pages’ length and width or how to make it look appealing, or how to even structure it.
7- foreshadowing or anything else in a deep way

I know stuff like these can make or break your book and it helps that I did read a lot of books and mangas, watched anime and tv shows or movies, which I’m sure made me dive in-depth with character development and scenes and whatnot. I just need directions and help. I’m currently in the process of writing and I’m saving the editing like grammatical and spelling mistakes for later.

It’s very random ngl, but anyways, ever since I started playing OMORI, I just couldn’t get the fact that OMORI is very similar to an Arabic word that means “my age” which doesn’t make sense translated to exact English, but the overall meaning of it is “my love” or “my darling” and whatnot. Kinda random icl, but yh.

So umm I’ll just jump straight to the point, I’m currently playing Omori, I finished the normal route but I’m just replaying cuz of some achievements, doesn’t matter, honestly.

Anyways, while playing I noticed something, like how did EVERYONE, think that Mari committed suicide? Like genuinely? Weren’t there police and paramedics and such? The surely could identify bodily injuries such as bruising, broken bones, fractures, blunt trauma. And don’t go on saying that these would show cause you can’t tell me that those stairs were enough to kill her but didn’t leave any marks. It doesn’t add up. I’m not saying the game is bad or poorly made, it’s quite the opposite, this game is one of my favorites, the graphics, play style, story, emotional impact ;trust me on this one lol), and etc, is just over the moon.

Oh, btw I searched and the game is based in the US. And the paramedics and police get notified of suicide cases. So I’m guessing the developers just skipped this part and just made the police and authorities just accept it as a suicide just for the sake of the game itself.

Edit:
I also searched, only TWO living people knew of what happened, SUNNY and BASIL obviously, and MARI if you count who knew overall.

Some players believed that the parents knew because of some dialogues like:

The dad saying this as he cuts down the tree, “you are not my son”

And

His mother saying “we will protect you… everything will be ok”

Plus like I said, if the paramedics and police were notified (which they probably were cuz they’re in the US and the take suicide cases seriously), they would’ve easily noticed such injures AND SUNNY and BASIL are kids so obviously so may clues would’ve been leftover.

Other players believed that the parents didn’t know, that black space memories aren’t real and just manifestations of SUNNY’s deep, irrational guilt and fear. They believe that the father cut down the tree and left because of guilt, plus many families fall apart after losing a child.

(Btw I’m still playing, and haven’t played hikikomori route so maybe I’ll find answers their but I doubt it)