
2666 - Week Two Discussion: The Part About The Critics, Part 2
Edward Hopper - Western Motel (1957)
>“Archimboldi is here,” said Pelletier, “and we’re here, and this is the closest we’ll ever be to him.”
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Summary
Back with our critics. Post break-up / cab driver beating, Pelletier and Espinoza fill their sex life with prostitutes instead, with Pelletier fixating on one named Vanessa briefly. At the end of the chapter, Espinoza will similarly fixate on a teenaged Mexican girl named Rebeca.
Our four critics meet a Mexican writing student Alatorre at a conference who gives them a new lead on Archimboldi: that he's in a Mexican town called Santa Teresa (!!). And off to Mexico 3 of our 4 critics go, where they find he may be checking into hotels as Hans Reiter. Morini opts to stay behind in Turin due to his health issues.
In Santa Teresa, they meet Professor Amalfitano and are plagued by nightmares, bad hotel rooms, depleted hopes, but notably no Archimboldi. The threesome we've been waiting for comes and goes with barely time for a cigarette after, all that built up sexual tension culminating in a single sentence (a long sentence, but still) and barely mentioned again.
Norton leaves Mexico first, and the back half of our reading is threaded with a long Dear John letter to Pelletier and Espinoza, informing them she and Morini are in love. We leave our last two critics in Santa Teresa, accepting they'll never find Archimboldi, but seemingly content they are at least as close as they'll ever be to him.
As with last week there are more tangents, more puzzle pieces that don't feel like they quite fit so neatly into the main narrative. Last week u/7_Types and u/John-Kale discussed "the secret story" and how these vignettes may operate as a key to what the novel is really about. Here are a few:
- Lots of dream sequences in this one
- Espinoza dreams about a Mexican prostitute reading graffiti on a wall in a hallway
- There's two parallel dream sequence where all three have a nightmare. In the first, Pelletier dreams of blood and shit smears in his hotel bathroom, Espinoza dreams about his hotel room painting moving and speaking, and Norton dreams of seeing her reflection and realizing it's not her.
- In the second, Pelletier dreams of a page he can't read, Norton dreams of a tree she's tasked with carrying around, Espinoza dreams of a girl selling rugs he can't rescue.
- Espinoza dreams about a Mexican prostitute reading graffiti on a wall in a hallway
- After reuniting with Norton, Espinoza and Pelletier tell her about a trip the three men took to visit Edwin Johns in a Swiss sanitarium. We later learn from Norton's letter that he died in a fall at his sanitarium.
- A man known as "El Cerdo" (The Pig) is Archimboldi(?)'s host in Mexico City and describes his eyes like "a blind man's"
- Amalfitano, Pelletier, and Espinoza go to the circus because there's a German, who turns out to an American with a disappearing act
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Prompts
Some ideas for discussion (suggestions only, post about whatever you want and feel free to post your own prompts):
So the same broad question up front: did you like this section about the critics? It appears to be polarizing based on the feedback we've gotten so far. Happy to be moving on or will you miss this foursome?
- We see Pelletier and Espinoza perhaps begin to move on with other women, Vanessa and Rebeca respectively. Espinoza also briefly gets hung up on a prostitute pre-Rebeca only known as "The Mexican." Did you think the matching nationality of the mystery prostitute and Rebeca is meaningful? How did you interpret these relationships and what they say about our two male critics?
- What did you make of the anticlimactic resolution to the love ~triangle rectangle?
- We get a lot more about Norton in this back half, gaining access to more of her thoughts (which turn out to be mostly about Morini, awww), but she's still primarily filtered through a long letter to our gruesome twosome. She's also decidedly less passive this week, initiating the threesome and then leaving on her own accord. What did you think of Norton in this part? What did you think of Bolano's decision to have her be so passive until she isn't? What did you think of the James Crawford information?
- In the Edwin Johns vignette, Morini directly asks him why he cut off his hand and Johns whispers something to him. BUT, when recounting the reason to Norton, Morini says "he thinks he knows the reason" and that reason is money, indicating perhaps this doesn't align with what Johns whispered or his misrepresenting it to Norton. What's going on here, do you think? And do you think "money" being the reason is Bolano saying something about the art world? And why do you think Johns didn't shake Morini's hand?
- What did you make of the parallel between the Pakistani cab driver attack and the doormen vs cab driver warfare?
- Amalfitano gives an explanation of how intellectuals work in Mexico where they are overseen by the state, and it starts off sounding a bit like Plato's The Cave mixed with performing for an audience before dwindling further and further into nonsense and confusion. By the time it ended, I was right there with Norton saying "I didn't understand any of that" - Any thoughts on this?
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For those who have read the book before or have read ahead, please keep the comments focused on The Part about the Critics and use spoiler tags when in doubt. We're concerned more about major, purposeful spoilers than minor slip ups.
Thanks for reading along with me. Last week we had, by far, our biggest turnout ever for a read-along discussion, so I hope the momentum continues. Please share what you thought, even if it's just to say you did the reading but don't have anything to add.
We'll have a shorter reading this week with The Part about Amalfitano and then move into longer readings for the rest of the read-along.
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Remaining Schedule
Special thanks to rarelybeagle for providing the Spanish sentences.
August 17: Pages 80-163, through the end of "The Part about the Critics."
August 24: Pages 163-231, the entirety of "The Part about Amalfitano."
August 31: Pages 231-353, the entirety of "The Part about Fate."
September 7: Pages 353-449, The Part about the Crimes begins, through "coming down the hallway." / es: "que avanzaban por el pasillo."
September 14: Pages 449-545, through "according to witnesses, was indescribable." / es: "fue, según los testigos, indescriptible."
September 21: Pages 545-637, through the end of "The Part about the Crimes."
September 28: Pages 637-770, through "Then he remembered who she was." / es: / "rostro dormido. Entonces la recordó."
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October 5: Pages 770-898, through the end of "The Part about Archimboldi" and the end of the book.
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Playlist Recommendations
These were sent to me by u/Dengru, moody dark jazz and ambient instrumentals that fit the mood so far
Bohren and club of gore - Constant Fear
Peter Brontzmann - This Word Love
Dirty Beaches - Floating Underwater Watching Waves
Mal Waldron - A Flower Is A Lovesome Thing
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