Feedback Request: Please Roast My App Store Page

Feedback Request: Please Roast My App Store Page

Hi everyone! I made a workout tracker called Shugyo, but I’m now working on ASO before going too crazy with marketing. I know there are improvements I can make, I’m just hoping the good people in this subreddit may be willing to help me learn. It’s my second app, but one that I have a clearer vision for.

There isn’t a whole lot I’ve done so far since I have a day job as well, but I put much of what little free time I have. There are plans for additional localization and eventually a subscription piece with some premium features, but it’s largely a freemium app supported by ads. I don’t store anyone’s data and I have non-personalized ads by default for privacy.

I’d be happy to learn from any real examples you’ve got from your own work as well. All feedback is appreciated, so please brutally roast when you have a moment 🤗

https://apps.apple.com/us/app/shugyo-by-cascadia-software/id6769858957

u/wheresteddy1989 — 9 days ago

Tenta Missile Targets

Not sure who the hell needs to hear this, but DO NOT run towards your teammates if you are having tenta missiles coming your way…

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u/wheresteddy1989 — 3 months ago

Zones Challenge

Not sure who needs to hear this, but you HAVE to take over the zone in order to win. You don’t gain any “power” in the game if you’re off in the enemy’s base while they’re in control. Also: Switch up your routes and don’t become predictable or else you wind up being a predictable target.

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u/wheresteddy1989 — 4 months ago

Pokopia’s “power point” viagra

Even if they didn’t know in Japan, Nintendo of America should have known. It’s clear Gen Z was involved in some of the English translations haha

u/wheresteddy1989 — 4 months ago