
Refined Version of Personal coat of arms.
Here is the refined version of my personal coat of arms after the feedback I received on my previous post.
Changes I made:
*reduced the size of the crest charge
*reduced and repositioned the roses
*tried to simplify the overall composition and make it feel less crowded
Removing the roses entirely made the lower part of the shield feel too empty, so I kept them as smaller secondary elements to help balance the composition.
I would be interested to hear your thoughts. And maybe Help on english blazon.