u/yoruko_zerda

My MC’s world was reshaped by a "passive god" she can't even perceive. Would you be scared of an entity like this?

So for context, this being exists in the story's world. She's like a fill-in god, but she doesn't actively help anyone.

Her presence itself, not mana or aura, is so vast that it created mana-like particles. Those particles act as an anchor for her and have spread across all universes.

She grants extra mana to anexes and some mutants, but she cannot give it to humans. Human bodies aren't suitable. Because of this, she single-handedly created the race of mages. She is also the reason the subrace of witches exists.

She is essentially the embodiment of a man-made atom.

Would you be afraid of this being? Even though she wasn't physically present, her presence was so massive that it caused mana-like particles to roam like air.

The greatest minds from ages past built labs trying to find the truth of who had such powers. Although she isn't directly connected to their wondering, she indirectly sewed the seed that led to the end of the Ancient Era.

So, how do you all feel about this concept?

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u/yoruko_zerda — 1 day ago

Does the logic of a man-made atom creating mages but not humans work?

Her presence itself, not mana or aura, is so vast that it created mana-like particles. Those particles act as an anchor for her and have spread across all universes.

She grants extra mana to anexes and some mutants, but she cannot give it to humans. Human bodies aren't suitable. Because of this, she single-handedly created the race of mages. She is also the reason the subrace of witches exists.

She is essentially the embodiment of a man-made atom.

Would you be afraid of this being? Even though she wasn't physically present, her presence was so massive that it caused mana-like particles to roam like air.

The greatest minds from ages past built labs trying to find the truth of who had such powers. Although she isn't directly connected to their wondering, she indirectly sewed the seed that led to the end of the Ancient Era.

So, how do you all feel about this concept?

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u/yoruko_zerda — 1 day ago

What abilities would let witches sense higher beings but never fully understand them in my world

lore- they have many different classes in my series the witches,mages superhuman anexes humans arkanz and the mutated fyi.
In my universe, witches are like priests. They have a feel for higher beings but don't understand everything.

The witch race is very hard to populate. You need specific genes, and they don't have many resources to fund their search for knowledge.

So here's what I'm trying to figure out. They can sense deeper layers of individual abilities, but doesnt understand where they were originated from. They feel something is there but not exactly what it is

What kind of specific abilities would let them perform feats of this understanding? What powers fit a race that is rare, underfunded, and forever guessing?

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u/yoruko_zerda — 1 day ago

my upcoming webnovel closet's premise

this is to see yalls opinion on the story
Inside Pandora's Box exists a cluster of worlds. Planet 508 is one of five keys needed to open the Box. During the Ancient Era, something happened that erased most of recorded history. What remains are fragments — scattered artifacts, conflicting accounts, and a world shaped by the aftermath.

Present day: Nixo, a laid-back young man, gets fired from his corporate job and recruited by Geo to recover lost artifacts across 23 wards. He's joined by Kiwi, a sharp researcher with her own theories about the past. Meanwhile, Jaydem searches for his kidnapped sister, Ulan.

Their paths cross with dangerous beings called anexes — entities, deities, and stranger things that roam the wards. Some help. Most don't. And somewhere in the ruins of the Ancient Era, the truth of what happened is waiting to be found.-yoruko_zerda

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u/yoruko_zerda — 4 days ago