r/DeadlockSapphic

i wan learn celeste but dealing damage feels rly esoteric so i wan learn how to actually kill people.

I was inspired to write an adaptation of Snow White where Paige was Snow and stumbles upon and joins a lesbian polycue and tried to write it. But as a got futher and further, I couldn’t figure out how to spice up the descriptions and it just didn't felt good to read.

I did thought one paragraph i wrote was good. It may have no sapphic content but I hope it's still decent. Originally it was Geist but then I thought Mina might fit the villain role better.

"Meanwhile, the vampire queen, Mina Ha, strutting around her luscious room of bearskinned rugs and chandeliers and the smell of champagne and conversing with a magic mirror to see if she was the most beautiful woman in all the land. And the answer today was Paige. Why? Why can’t she be the most beautiful woman ever? She’s got the looks. She owns a kingdom and everyone in it. She’s been killing off her competition and the people who are asking questions. What is she doing wrong? Now normal people might take this as a time to reflect and maybe realise there’s something inside that makes people beautiful. But Mina is a rich person or owns a kingdom, they don’t understand how to be human. So like any rich person, she organises the death of this Paige."