r/OC_Building

(Firstly I greyscaled the image because even though there isn’t gore I thought it could pass as gore and… yeah.)

So… normally I don’t ask for help like this but I’m a little desperate. I’m creating a verse with its own versions of heaven and hell. Currently I’m struggling with expanding hell.

I’m trying to stray away from Dante’s inferno and stuff (and failing). But at least it’ll be somewhat my own in the end.

So like every sin has an its own layer and blah blah. You can give me your thoughts but I’ll probably end up rewriting it all to fit better (no offence).

Anyway, currently I have:

Insatiability

Despair

Exploitation

Oppression (THEY’RE DIFFERENT THINGS)

And Violence

And I might need more.

Ok soo, I tried to do a lineless thing for the first time. I would like to get some feedback on it and if I could improve anything about it.

(Idk if this post will be allowed, as i am being a bit lazy)

So i made this aurc(bloodied race, aka red) as an example for a aurc thingy i'll post to r/OC_Building

But i really like his design and wanna use it for something, but idk what! Currently i'm calling his Rir but i am open to suggestions. All i really got is his peoplee culture and the fact he's my barbarian class, who uses emotions(usually but not always rage) to empower themselves.

From the nation of Feralos, the savage land, Rir is one of the nomadic bloody aurcs. A race of aurcs who evolved from verdants aurcs during the age of expansion, as the elves already claimed their usual forest home(sylvia) making aurcs move into the savannahs of feralos and mountains of (insert undecided country name here). My aurcs all care about hunting and foraging due to their god(the boar wearing raksha)

So what i want you lot to do is suggest ideas for Rir. From backstory ideas, to personality and even story ideas who knows maybe i'll write a oneshot with rir or a quick story. I'll provide any info of my world etheria you want, as long as you ask.

So this is an Original Species I created for my World called "Cloud Jellyfish"! And if there's one thing that I tend to struggle with, it's picking out colors, so I wanted to ask you folks if you by chance had any suggestions or Ideas that I could use!

A lot of my inspirations came from of course, Jellyfish, but I also drew a lot of inspiration from Blimps and Steampunk Airships, just something I thought I should Mention- if you also want a fair bit more Lore, I'd be happy to oblige!

>“Tell me Asteria: if I know nothing about love, then could you… no, who am I kidding. You’ll never bother to. And for good reason—I probably can’t understand it anyway.”

Nihil and Asteria's breakup in 4K ultra HD (Nihil is the one trying to rizz, and Asteria is ashamed of Nihil)

Feel free to ask questions about these two as well! I love them and their dynamic :))

I'm thinking of making another post here soon, maybe an introduction to an AU or a new OC idk

Last images color isnt final!Final colors are on first image.Ill be answering question in character if you comment any!

First two images are some references i used and ill explain a little about the lore i came up with...but i need suggestions since i wanna make a design as cool as bastians.She was a dragon warrior in the draconic war,one of the best out of them,one of her comrades had killed bastian and after he revived she was the first one to fight what would become known as "the scorched" she died at that point and now i needed a reason to make bastians story move forward since hes retired after 50 years of fighting dragons and my lore explanation for her revival is the same as bastians:An undefeatable will to go back to battle.After the death of EVERY SINGLE DRAGON,all the souls of her people made a pledge to the eternal flame,to revive one warrior to avenge them all!And after the extinction of the dragon empire,one blue flame rises again...seeking vengeance like the one bastian had...I think this is a fun character to do,since one has completed their vengeful goals and realised its not worth it and the other just started,their powers are also identical,two warriors from old times that use fire to stay alive after death.

• Name: Hamiel
• Age: 27 years
• Gender: Male
• Occupation: Military scout.
• Height: 5'2ft(157cm)
• Weight: 103 pounds(45kg)
• Nationality: ???
• Likes: The cold
• Dislikes: Burning
• Sexuality: Straight

Almost nothing is known about Hamiel other he just one day volunteered to do military work and passed with flying colors. He was then assigned as scout in a scouting squad.

He isn't very talkative and would randomly and intensely stare at other people as if he was trying to observe them.

One day on mission with his squad was ambushed by an unknown creature and killed everyone in the squad except Hamiel but he was heavily injured and passed out

Right after this, he woke up in an unfamiliar path and that leads to a strange manor. Then leads to the start of my game.

Picture 1, Deadly Sin form. Picture 2, Primordial Sin Form

Deadly Sin of Madness was the result of Bright Shade of Diligence Silvie's grief stricken actions. As these events hapened in a reality paralel to ours (which is a concept that exists also thanks to these events.) we lack full context, but the gist of it is when Silvie's her daughter, Lilith faded out of world, heaven and hell she tried to revind the events of that day to potentially save her.

In our reality this resulted in her almost dying too and running out of magic.

In the reality of Madness she resulted in stealing essence from slothfull souls to keep her attempts going. Then she started to steal essence from her lesser shades. Potentially due to her mental state her form started to fracture. As her actions started to threaten the flow of time itself rest of the Bright Shades atempted to stop her. We failed, well that version of us failed. The "single thread of fate" became not so single as branches of reality from that day forward started to form. That Silvie was left traped in the red void outside of space, time and reality. What, none of us has expected was multiple versions of that Silvie starting to overlap. I am not sure if it was a ritual they did but, they started to become entangled. Many threads startred to wrap around them and a single being was formed. It fit every description we had to clasify her as a deadly sin now.

As a Primordial Sin, her form is comprimised of her own bodies with shatered heads. I counted 6 but... most likely the overlapping bodies are in the counts of bilions. There are 3 magic circles with of course 12 lines around them, perhaps these circles are kepeing them together. Their tendrills are... intertvined in shape of a knot with a broken clock also stuck in there. Their bodies are covered with threads covering around them and the magic circles. They merge around where the knot is, creating a structure very similar to Silvie's halo.

In their Deadly Sin form the threads have entierly consumed them. There is one 12 lined magic circle around hsr torso. On there face where her eye was is only void. Her monocle is broken but, its still where ir always was. Her clock-like halo is shatered.

I am... incredibly glad that our Silvie is... well, not a part of that thing. Its, no longer her. So many minds pulling the strings, locked into the memory of that day Lilith vanished to oblivion. Ever repeating, she is too far gone for use to help. Feiro tried to give them a therapy sesion I think but, its been decades with no impruvement on her state.

Report over. If questions remain I will give answers. Argo out.

Soo, I was rewamping Luxuriae (Lux fır short) and idk I feel like an outfit of sorts would be good to reduce empty space.

But I am not sure what. I know she already have a witch hat looking cap but a witch outfit would be too on the nose maybe, idk.

Here's some examples of the Yumites, the main species of my apocalypse world (basically Yuma's equivalent to humans). I'm slowly working on populating my world with characters, and I wanted to show off a few of the designs I've got. I'm still figuring out how I draw these guys and what sort of features they have, but I like what I've got so far. Enjoy a few colored doodles of some characters I've developed so far.

Yumites are vaguely human, vaguely animal, really leaning more into being weird goblin-esque creatures. Ear and tail shapes can vary from person to person. It tends to be a tradition, especially for folks living in the apocalyptic wastelands, to decorate their tails with trinkets and keepsakes (so looking at that can tell a lot about a person's interests). They have an excellent sense of hearing, with that being the primary sense of this species. Some folks are naturally gifted with magic, but it's not traditional spellcasting magic. Instead it's a deeper connection with the natural world (for example, the character Maryn has a sixth sense for scrap metal). The folks we're looking at here live in a scrubland/arid environment, I'm taking inspiration from a bit of the American Southwest deserts but also Eastern Washington and Oregon.

Main inspirations for the species include some book I read as a kid that I have very vague memories of (no idea what book, I just have a super vague memory I'm going off of) and the Zonai from Tears of the Kingdom.

I'm still working out how this species looks and functions, but I wanted to do something different from humans, so here we are. Funky goblin creatures is what I've got, and I really like them. Any feedback is greatly appreciated!

I feel like I could have made this better, but I wanted to throw something together before I went to class today. Originally my Eldritch deity that caused the apocalypse was the sun itself, but I think I'm changing it to a nearby star that ultimately hatches (or awakens?) into our apocalypse causing deity.

I might make a better version of this later on, but for now here you go! One star-egg and one deity about to wreck a world. Here's how my apocalypse begins, when an eldritch space deity hatches out of a star and awakens. This causes massive solar flares that wipes out technology, large amounts of radiation that results in mutations in people and animals, and the general incomprehensible appearance of this being results in mass insanity and hysteria.