r/OC_Building

DEICIDE LORE

This story takes place in fantasy 1400s right after a decade or two after this world's equivalent to the Hundred Year War.

The Gods where chilling until one day, a mortal suddenly appeared out of no where and killed 5 out of the 10 Gods and claimed the throne as King of the Gods. Said gods where all each torn into 999 chunks of flesh and scattered all around the world. And with those gods dead, the concepts they hold domain over went wild; animals gone bloodthirsty, the weather become unpredictable, wars are being started etc.

But the most impactful outcome was the death of the Goddess of Lust, Love, and Female Fertility, and with her death came the inability for women to give birth meaning that the world will die only in a few centuries.

Mass panic occurred around the world but people found a solution, the flesh of the gods who the mortal killed and spread around the world(now deemed God's Flesh) were found and if a person where to consume a God's Flesh, they would inherited a bit of power from those gods meaning when a woman eats a God's Flesh of the Goddess of Female Fertility, they would regain the ability too birth, so nobles now hunt the God's Flesh of the Goddess and any woman who coincidentally ate who found a God's Flesh and ate it to be concubines(Consumers of God's Flesh will have their hair turn white)

But they ignore the source of the problem, that mortal is keeping the other Gods from choosing mortals to replace the dead Gods. So if he was to be killed for the world to be restored.

And that's what the main five characters who all have eaten God's Flesh will be doing and those characters are:

Caecilia Luxurie, a girl who dreams to the Queen of the World. She has ate the Goddess of Female Fertility's Flesh

Gautier Brasdefer, a man who wants to fight the strongest there is. Ate the God of War's Flesh.

Dominique Prévost, a woman who wishes to fix the world and avenge the Gods. Ate the Goddess of Hope and Faith's Flesh.

Yolande Leroux, a lady who just wants to have fun. Ate the God of Storms' Flesh.

Estienne Boutelievre, a man who wants the annihilation of all animals. Ate the Goddess of the Hunt's Flesh.

This is Philip, he is a 17 year old part time barista high on his product and an ametour supernatural investigator.

I have been unsatisfied with his current design for a while now, for reasons that I could never just put to words. (Maybe I just fucked up the art idk)

The "redesgin" is mostly just removing the coat and the hat entierly, making his hair extra bird nest degree unstyled and add an actual bird, his pet Percy.

Uhh, idk what else to add. How else could I impruve his design?