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Would you keep reading after this dark epic fantasy prologue? (1,967 words)
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Would you keep reading after this dark epic fantasy prologue? (1,967 words)

Hi everyone,

I recently revised the prologue of my dark epic fantasy novel after receiving direct feedback about the rhythm, repeated imagery, frequent em dashes, and prose that sometimes felt overly cinematic.

The scene follows an aging shepherd who witnesses the arrival of something ancient and inhuman beneath a wounded sky. It introduces the larger threat of the series—and a glimpse of the man still trapped inside the monster.

The prologue is 1,967 words.

I would especially appreciate feedback on:

• Did the opening hold your attention?

• Did the POV transitions feel clear and intentional?

• Did the prose feel natural or overly written?

• Was the memory sequence emotionally effective?

• Were there any phrases that sounded unnatural in American English?

• Would you continue to Chapter One?

I’m not looking for praise, so direct criticism is welcome. English is not my first language, and comments about rhythm or unnatural wording are especially useful.

Here is the prologue:

https://drive.google.com/file/d/10-Cfxk-JbDXxsCw4tgQ84-FJNW933vMR/view?usp=drivesdk

Thank you for reading.

u/Krum_A_At — 2 hours ago

Will Joe Abercrombie's The First Law Trilogy fill the void after having finished Game of Thrones?

I finished the Game of Thrones series recently and feel like I need more. I've heard that The First Law can come close. What do you think? Are the dialogue, political intrigue and characters on par or not?

u/Reasonable_Double273 — 8 hours ago

How is the Bloodsworn Saga?

Looking to see how people felt about this trilogy, I’ve had it on my TBR list for years.

For reference, I’ve read the First Law trilogy and loved it. I’m a big fan of fantasy and darker fantasy all around, but I’ve yet to see anyone dive deep into this series and give some comparisons to other works.

How’s Gwynne’s writing style? What’s the world building like? Are the magic systems and lore in the books fleshed out and deep, but not convoluted? Are the characters well developed and thought out?

u/jakellerVi — 9 hours ago

Sword of Truth?

I’m halfway through book 2 of Terry Goodkinds Sword of Truth series. This dude seems like he has a pretty sadistic mind. Lots of domination and an uncomfortable amount of rape followed by murder…not sure if I’m going to continue reading. Just wondered what other people thought and if the series gets better or worse.

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u/deez_en_u_teez — 7 hours ago

In a reading slump and need something to absolutely shock me out of it.

I like all kinds of fantasy, I am absolutely in love with the stormlight archive, it’s one of my favourites, generally all his work is incredible. Ever since reading it I feel like I can’t find anything quite like it.

I am looking for niche recommendations that aren’t your go to usual recs, particularly I am not interested/have already tried - wheel of time, dune, farseer trilogy, GOT and a few other of the popular recs. I have thought about picking up the name of the wind if it’s worth it? even tho the series is unfinished I believe

These are some of my most loved reads that aren’t all necessarily fantasy - anything Sanderson especially stormlight and mistborn, first law trilogy, count of monte cristo, lies of Locke lamora, the poppy war, six of crows, secret history, red rising and kings of the wyld.

I know I am quite basic and also quite picky unfortunately, i appreciate any of your recommendations, series or standalone are completely fine!

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u/Opposite_Quote_9565 — 11 hours ago

So im facing stormlight/Cosmere burnout. Help me decide my next read.

So i was very dissapointed with wind and truth and i need help narrowing my next read. I tried to find some series + standalones that are 1500 pages or less. Feel free to add any suggestions on. I have a tendency to lean towards darker fantasy and grimdark.

Some clarification

Locke lamora, Name of the wind, Sword of shanara, ACOTAR just those ones 4th wing. (Just those books Idk if imma like them)

Fourth wing and ACOTAR (Dont ask)

City watch and farseer. (Just those subseries) None of the wider ROTE and Discworld.

u/tgrady28 — 15 hours ago

anyone convince me to give The Will of the Many another shot?

So I dnf'd this around the colosseum escape part. Most people here loves this book, great plot, tight pacing, and normally I trust your taste on this stuff. but something about the prose just didn't click for me? like every single sentence felt like it was only there to move the plot along. no moments where a character just gets to exist as a person, nothing about the world that's there just because, nothing that felt like the author wanted to show me something for its own sake. honestly felt more like reading a really well organized outline than an actual novel.

For context on what I mean, I just read The Devils by Abercrombie, messy team of monsters escorting a fake princess to a throne. plot's pretty simple, kind of repetitive even before it picks up, but the prose and the characters bouncing off each other were so good I didn't care. same with Blood Over Bright Haven, simple plot, kinda moralistic/black and white, but the magic system and the writing itself were just fun to read.

Will of the Many felt like the opposite of both those. great plot but nothing in the actual writing made me care beyond wanting to know what happens next.

People keep saying it gets better once he's at the academy, is that actually true? does the prose loosen up or is it just that the payoff is worth pushing through? trying to decide if it's worth picking back up

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u/Quimeraecd — 10 hours ago

I’m French, and even though I read a lot of books in English, there are many French fantasy books I read that haven’t been translated into other languages. Would you be interested in me doing a list of my favorite French fantasy books anyway?

The title is super long, sorry about that but I’m asking this partly to give certain books some visibility, since I’m sure they’d interest people, and also just in case there are people who read books in French.

Sorry in advance if I can't reply to everyone. :(

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u/mimi43098 — 12 hours ago

When the Author of a Series Takes a Detour

I’m aware that this isn’t uncommon in the least…..but it sure can be annoying.

The author of a given fantasy series states that their book series will be, say, 6 books long. They go through 1-3 in a timely manner, MAYBE 4. But, during the books’ release schedule - side story! Prequel! Sonething in that world that ISN’T ‘the next book.’

It’s something I noticed before (Robert Jordan, George R. R. Martin, heck even Patrick Rothfuss. One would argue if it’s ‘fantasy’ or not but even Diana Gabaldon has done this!). And now (say what will you about the quality but the logic applies) Yaaros is doing the same thing between books 3 and 4 (out of 5) for HER series.

Why do writers do this??

Me, as a reader, would prefer the author to do books A-Z first, and then once the last one’s out, focus on other stories AFTER.

Call me a spoiled brat. Call me entitled. I’m just curious why some writers, at some point during their respective series, do other ‘in world’ projects. The part I don’t get is the ‘timing’. I understand if it’s like ‘book 1, side story, book 2, side story’ and etc until book 6 of my scenario is out and done. It seems that once they become ‘popular’ before the next book in the series is when they go ‘Enh, not yet.’

This is one of the primary reasons why I try and wait for a book series to be completed before investing time, money, and energy into it.

I’m curious what others think about these ‘side quests’ before primary series is completed.

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u/RedWizard78 — 10 hours ago

Help me pick my next read

I've read The Devils by Abercombie and greatly enjoyed it, but I've heard that Jade City has more of an urban fantasy setting which sounds appealing

u/storiedroom52 — 1 day ago

Escape The 📚 Rut = Pitch a lesser-known fantasy book you love?

Twice a month, we invite everyone to share the fantasy books they love that are lesser known. We get so many discussions about the big names; let's talk about the books that need to be talked about more.

What do we ask that you post? 📚

  • The title/author.
  • Why you loved the book, the most important part so readers can connect with it :)
  • If you are feeling generous, throw in a book cover image.

May this post damage your book budget 😅

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u/AutoModerator — 16 hours ago

Suggestions for my next read?

Just finishing the echos saga and wondering what I should read next, any advice or other recommendations would be welcome :) I really enjoyed the bound and broken, red rising, sun eater, the burning

u/Rileychief — 23 hours ago

Picked up some random books from the thrift

Never read it but I kinda liked the art so I picked it up.(by kinda I’m really debating it hard I like old fantasy Covers but not like this).

Also I have a strong hatred for how the books are two seperate sizes

u/Guilty-Coffee-9968 — 24 hours ago

2026 Tier List (warning; not all Fantasy)

(my first attempt at a tier list- sorry for the format)

Thirty-seven books in for 2026, with some serious thicboyz on the list.
Next on my TBR is Words of Radiance, Dungeon Crawler Carl (everyone can't be wrong, can they?), and 11/22/63.

Count of Monte Cristo is a great classic thicboy to impress your friends.
Grant was great if you like US history.
Facing the Mountain also great true WW2 story.
Morning Star was a great ending to the trilogy.
Way of Kings didn't disappoint. On to the next.
No Country for Old Men was great. McCarthy knows how to write dialog.
Crime and Punishment Dostoevsky > Tolstoy
Extreme Ownership is good leadership book.
Red Seas and Republic of Thieves- I liked Lies of Lock La Mora and didn't even know there were more. Enjoyed these.
Light Bringer is a great setup for what should be a solid ending.
Grapes of wrath was good. That ending had me... WTF
Strong til the End- personal connection to a tragic recent event.
Dark Age- Felt like a middle book. Good.
How to Fail- I've failed a lot at life. Thought I'd see what the second part was all about.
Golden Son. Good middle book.
Frankenstein- Stories aren't told like this anymore.
Jurassic Park- Book was good. Movie is better IMHO
Splendid and Vile. I like Larson. Churchill was surprisingly hilarious.
Red Rising. Great first book.
Up From Slavery. Good story of a man I knew little about.
All the pretty horses. Eh, the dialog made this one higher than the rest of the story.
Bird by bird- The driest sense of humor I've ever heard.
Chase the Lion- Motivational, repetitive. Wife gave it to me.
Butchers Crossing. OK.
Gates of Fire. If that moment in history excites, good. Just ok. It's short which makes it higher.
Iron Gold- Weakest of the bunch mostly cause there's so much lore to drop.
The Hunter- Went in blind. There are like 40 books. I'll skip the rest.
The Wolf Age- Good if you like that time in history.
Anna Karenina- better than War and Peace but that's isn't saying a lot. Tolstoy isn't for me.
Six of Crows- I'm not a 12 year old girl. Went in blind.

I have a lot of interests. Hope you don't mind seeing the non-fantasy. My TBR is mostly fantasy for the rest of the year.

Edit** Red Rising ranks might have been from memory while also having the events of the books blur together. The ending of Golden Son was brutal but I didn't feel it as bad as I immediately went on to Morning Star. So I get the baffled reaction.

u/Think_Inspector9278 — 23 hours ago

Fun adventure fantasy book recommendations??

I feel like i’ve been reading too many depressing and serious books lately. I would really like to read something fun or light-hearted for a change that isn’t set in modern day. I’m not picky, but I would really like an adventurous fantasy book with stuff like friends on an epic quest. For example, I read Carry On by Rainbow Rowell a few years ago and really liked it. It is a queer book about two rival wizards who get sent on a quest and are forced to work things out while simultaneously battling monsters and an evil force that has been wreaking havoc on the World of Mages for years. It’s a slightly silly, cliche chosen one book. But I liked it a lot! And, of course, I loved Percy Jackson and the Olympians. If you don’t know what that’s about, it’s basically about Greek demigod teenagers who go on tons of quests and adventures to defeat Cronos, an evil titan who wants to destroy Olympus, while dealing with other troublesome prophesies and gods (Sorry if my description is a little off, i haven’t read the books in a while.)

Basically, what I want is a fun fantasy book about friends going on a quest or adventure together. I also understand that the books I put for examples are pretty childish, but I would prefer something at least YA or more mature.

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u/ilovebatmanandrobin — 22 hours ago
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Where are all the good fantasy books

They really don’t make them like they used to anymore.

Hot take: if a novel can be cleanly adapted into an anime, or a ruleset for a roleplaying game, it is a bad book.

(I enjoy me a good anime and RPG as much as the next homosexual)

Not since Tolkien and GRRM has anyone written an epic fantasy that even approaches their worst drafts.

Tolkien gave us a fairytale for adults; reading it transports you into a world that is almost childlike in its mystic wonder, one dripping with magic not because our POVs cast Level 3 Shadow Clone Jutsu when the story demands but because it is lovingly crafted and layered with grand mysteries and marvels, where good and evil are simple and absolute and the characters (men) are emotionally honest and don't hesitate to spill their hearts out to each other at every opportunity without once bothering to hashtag-no-homo and \*that earnestness is as much part of the fantasy as the presence of orcs and elves and epic battles\*.

GRRM materially realizes his world by transporting the reader into the minds of a diverse cast of interesting multifaceted \*people\* with actual personalities and makes them captivating by challenging them with obstacles tailored to those personalities. He not only gives us a meticulously constructed world but also understands that it is the people in it that make it believable and ultimately make us care about the epic fantasy stuff in the first place.

These days every “adult epic fantasy” is only a barely-disguised YA carbon copy that actually wants to be a video game and I say this as derogatorily as I can, myself being an avid millennial gamer.

They all include at least most of the following:

* Teenage protagonist enrolls in a magical boarding school and must learn magic, survive deadly and logistically impractical games & trials, investigate a convoluted mystery, navigate an entirely redundant love triangle, overcome and ultimately befriend the school bully, and save the world as the star student

* Hundreds (often thousands) of pages of poorly edited, poorly paced, basic prose and clumsy exposition that not even remotely earn the page count (bonus points for MCU-style “he’s right behind me isn’t he” snark in scenes involving trauma, murder, dubiously consensual sexual encounters, or other tonally uneven, inappropriate bleakness)

* 90% setup, exposition and info dumps usually delivered by superfluous identical flat characters with no personality besides their function in the story, what would be called “living codex entry party members” in a BioWare RPG 15 years ago (that these books wish upon a star they could be instead of books)

* The story that the author actually wanted to tell all stumbling head over heels in its rush to occur in the last 10% of the book (which has, mindbogglingly, become affectionately known as a “Sanderlanche” when it would be better described as “terrible pacing”) including a Bombastic Final Plot Twist that does not provide closure or catharsis but does set up a sequel

* Some sort of post-apocalypse with too many proper nouns that could maybe have worked as the setting of a Final Fantasy game (charitably) or a weekly shounen for twelve year olds (soberly) but whose logic crumbles under the barest scrutiny as every level of the worldbuilding is riddled with holes and implausibilities since the setting merely exists as an excuse upon which to deliver the Bombastic Final Plot Twist

* Most egregiously to me: a text that is on the whole chiefly concerned with overexplaining the "magic system" and strip it of any sense of mystique (have we really learned nothing from midichlorians?)

You may have noticed that in my rant I have not mentioned the romantasy tropes, which I recognize as a distinct genre, for which I am not the target audience. To all you girls gays and theys out there who love yourself a good Court of Thing and Thing and soft erotica with monsters, good for you, I am glad you're having your moment in today's publishing climate and I am content to live and let live. My fighting words are directed at the Sanderson & Copycats Gang who dominate the capital-E capital-F Epic Fantasy genre I used to think I loved, who are also dominating the bookstores, and who somehow stand on an average 4.57 stars out of 278,237 reviews on Goodreads as of the writing of this post (the actual incomprehensible stats of The Will of the Many, possibly the worst book I have ever read).

This post was brought to you by my frustration 40% through the highly regarded The Fifth Season (N.K. Jemisin) as I’m finding it disappointingly boring.

I remember people used to say about GOT/ASOIAF that it is "fantasy for people who don't like fantasy" but I never expected to be one of those people, so lacking in imagination so as to be bored by the escapism. I now understand it is most contemporary fantasy books that are lacking not only in imagination but also in what sells the escapism in the first place: relatable human drama.

For the record I also enjoyed: Jonathan Strange & Mr Norrel (Susanna Clarke) with its very dense 800-some pages all focusing heavily on wizards and magic and fairies yet manages to never lose the mysticism (easily a 5 star read).

Why have we allowed the genre to devolve into "Superhero Cartoons For Children But As Clumsily Written Text"? (The answer is, obviously, that these "grown up" books are primarily read by children.)

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u/Caeg — 1 day ago

Today's delivery

I appreciate this sub and thank you all for the shares, tips, and reviews. I didn't read anything from Hobb, Abercrombie, or Dinniman yet.

u/chaoticEvilMango — 1 day ago

Recommendation needed

A want to read a book fantasy with magic, where main female character is tough with intrigues and doesn’t not afraid power. And her man also is the same. I red something like queen of roses it was good but MFC did not with for power and rule over her people, but she had an amazing personality tough and kind. So I want something more with court intrigues and maybe some witching powers.

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u/United-Specialist-58 — 21 hours ago
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[OFF TOPIC] Just finished The Blade Itself,and it was a 5/5 for me!

Sooooo, man, at first I was legit thinking of dnfing this book cuz I wasn't enjoying any of the pov characters, but then I switched to the audiobook halfway through the book, and holy shit! I absolutely LOVED the audiobook!

I just finished the book a couple of hours ago and I'm already 4 hours into the second book!

For now, the characters I find the most interesting are:

  1. Sand Dan Glokta 🥹

  2. Bayaz

  3. Ferro

  4. Dogman

  5. Jezal Dan Luthar

I know a lot of you love Logen but for now, I've not been able to enjoy his pov as much as I do for the other characters

I'm really excited to see where the story goes from here! 😤

u/AshamedArt4176 — 2 days ago