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Sakura Trees(my first poem ever)

If I could see
the flowers blossom on a sakura tree
How would they appear to me?

My books all say it’s pink in hue
but what if they were really blue

Nonetheless, until my eyes see
how the flowers bloom on a sakura tree

I shall wonder with glee
How would they appear to me?

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My first poem of what is hopefully many🙏,
Please give any honest criticisms and tell me what you think

https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/s/LxIW85MGZ5

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