u/Nearby-Locksmith4228

What chains me down?
The task I’ve taken on—
No!

What holds me here?
The nest of friends I’ve drawn near—
No!

What binds my arms?
These broken wings from harm—
No!

The only thing that holds me down,
are thoughts of falling to the ground.

So let these chains break free,
that I may fly into the sea.
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My second one so far, I would like to think I listened to the responses from last time,
special thanks to u/Warfield_Ink for inspiring me to continue
share any criticisms you have

https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/s/xsQwAOT5km

https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/s/LxIW85MGZ5

If I could see
the flowers blossom on a sakura tree
How would they appear to me?

My books all say it’s pink in hue
but what if they were really blue

Nonetheless, until my eyes see
how the flowers bloom on a sakura tree

I shall wonder with glee
How would they appear to me?

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My first poem of what is hopefully many🙏,
Please give any honest criticisms and tell me what you think

https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/s/LxIW85MGZ5

https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/s/xsQwAOT5km

When you go to the hot springs with rise, it increases your all-out attack dmg with her, but it seems you could theoretically do this forever, so is there a limit?

After playing metaphor i think it would compliment the persona games perfectly, maybe instead of just giving weaknesses it could lower the resistance to an affinity for 3 turns, maybe even one for almighty so megidolion could actually be good?

And the order would be:

Absorb/reflect -> null -> resist-> normal -> weak (bosses could be immune to the weak part)

Just did dojima’s rank 9, and I thought voiced sl’s were for rank 10, so without spoilers, is there something I missed? Or is something gonna happen?

Do you think >!adachi!< had to grind golden hands, and how much do you think he hated them?

Rewriting this cuz og post got nuked, but I honestly hope they don’t, it would suck to buy the new game for $70-80 and then they rerelease it again for a definitive version. But if they do, what would they call it? P6 reborn?