Where I did wrong and how to correct it?
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Where I did wrong and how to correct it?

brief

So I did a design test from a company a few weeks ago but after the test I dont get any call anymore for the user test and this pattern keep repeating so I wonder if my technical skill need some evaluation. The brief said I just need to duplicate the picture, every asset is provided by the company except the logos. So below is how I execute it and I iniatiate to add the company logo I can find on the internet.

my work

the process

I'm assuming the shadow is not too similar with the example but what do you think guys, how should I improve this?

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u/31x019 — 9 hours ago