r/design_critiques

A few questions:

Would you actually buy or wear something like this?

What would you realistically pay for it?

Does the graphic feel premium or too generic?

What would you change to make it look more like a high-end streetwear piece?

Please be brutally honest. I'd rather hear the hard truth now than after launching.

Thanks

My dad and my mom built something called LifeChapter, and I wanted to share it here in case it resonates with anyone.
It’s a personal journaling and family legacy platform where you can document your life story over time, build a timeline from your earliest memories to today, save photos and important documents, and preserve stories from family members. You can also create a “Time Capsule” to leave something meaningful for someone to open in the future.
A lot of it is focused on keeping memories from getting lost — whether that’s your own life, your parents’, grandparents’, or even just things you’ve always meant to write down but never got around to.
They’re offering a 30-day free trial (no credit card needed) right now while they’re getting it off the ground and looking for feedback.
If you’re into family history, journaling, or just want a simple way to preserve memories, it might be worth checking out.

https://lifechapter.io

Either way, I appreciate you taking a look and supporting a small family project.

Atualizei a landing page do meu primeiro livro e gostaria de críticas para melhorá-la ainda mais. O link é esse: https://www.tdvadilho.com/hqtvnopae/

Looking for your feedback to improve my skills.

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Following the theme of trying to learn some design in the sport space. I'm self taught and fundamentally still very much a beginner.

I've tried to create a graffiti style of poster. Keen for any constructive criticism!

I know not so good I don't why it feels empty quite a bit not felt like a magazine cover though..

Hi, I would love to share my link to my website and get feedback! As a mid-weight designer I feel I need to show "everything" while I am still waiting on some key highlight projects. I am currently applying to new roles but having troubles getting an interview so I would love some feedback. Thank you!

My Portfolio

Hi guys, I have been working on building this agency website and I am trying to boost conversion through it. Currently it feels a bit too AI. Would love some suggestions and feedback on this. https://www.samas.digital

Thanks 💖

Velrix is a tool that helps website owners identify where visitors may be hesitating, getting confused, or dropping off.

Over the last week I've made a lot of changes based on user behaviour, including:

• Simplifying the homepage
• Reducing onboarding friction
• Improving the mobile experience
• Showing value before requiring signup
• Making the audit process clearer

I'm now at the point where I've looked at it so many times that I'm probably blind to the obvious problems.

I'd love honest feedback on:

• First impressions
• Clarity of the value proposition
• Whether you'd actually try the audit
• Anything confusing or frustrating
• Mobile experience (especially)

Don't hold back — brutal feedback is welcome.

--> [Velrix.app](http://Velrix.app)

Hi everyone,

I've spent the last year rebuilding a marketplace from the ground up, and before we invest more into marketing, I'd love some brutally honest design feedback.

Website: https://racoon.gg

I'd really appreciate your thoughts on:

• First impression (within the first 5 seconds)
• Visual hierarchy
• Typography
• Colors and branding
• Trustworthiness
• Call-to-actions
• Overall polish
• Anything that feels dated or out of place

Please don't hold back. If something looks amateur or confusing, I'd rather know now than after we've spent money driving traffic.

Thanks for taking the time to help!

Running a small AI art direction studio and currently building my portfolio. This set is my take on the Gucci by Tom Ford era.

For me that era has a very specific grammar - it's not just "dark luxury." It's the contrast, the skin, the way shadow works almost like a structural element. Sensual but precise. So I tried to reverse-engineer that before touching any tool - references, textures, the emotional temperature, and built the prompt last.

Curious if it actually reads as that specific moment or just falls into generic luxury territory. Be honest, that's the only useful feedback.

Also open to tools, references I might be missing, what you'd do differently

I got engaged last year! And naturally I went to tech to figure out how to organize the chaos leading up to the wedding.

Everything I tried either wanted a monthly subscription for a thing that happens once, suffocated me with vendor ads, or had a seating chart so bad I actually enjoyed making a diagram with ink again. So instead of planning for the wedding, I went into making an app to plan my wedding — you know, logic.

It’s called Vows HQ — a shared workspace for all the wedding madness

✅ Tasks & budget

👥 Guest list + RSVPs

🪑 Drag-and-drop seating chart (even 3D rendering!)

⏱️ Day-of timeline

💌 A public wedding website with RSVP built in — so you’re not funneling everyone through The Knot

There’s also a cute little AI advisor called “Lovebird” (I know, original) that looks at where you’re at and tells you what to actually do next. It’ll even draft your vendor emails — because typing “hi, do you have our date available?” for the 40th time made me want to lie down.

The nerdy bit: I’m not a real developer, I do this after work after seeing my patients. It’s Flutter web + Firebase, with the Claude API running the advisor and the email drafting. The seating chart nearly broke me — it’s one shared doc two people can drag tables around in at the same time, and getting their edits to merge instead of stomp on each other took embarrassingly long. There’s also a little 3D walkthrough of the reception room that’s completely unnecessary and my favorite part — you get to jump around on the tables 😏**.**

What I’d love from you: tear it apart. Especially the onboarding and the website builder — tell me where you got confused, bored, or where it felt like too much.

It’s live at vowshq.com if you want to poke at it.

🎁 First 100 couples get everything free forever — no card, no subscription. My little gift to the world, since weddings somehow get more insane (and expensive) every year.

Happy to answer whatever about how it’s built!