I need harsh constructive criticism
My Youtube Channel is called 5ivy (It should be a circle with my name with a blue flame over the letter "I") feel free to take a look through any of the LONG FORM videos. What i'm trying to achive is feedback on what I can do to make my videos/thumbnails better. Feel free to be as harsh, bare-boned, down to earth to tell me what I need to do to start getting viewers, building a loyal audience and possibly start making an income.