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Is this a good idea for a story?

So I was sitting down and staring at my ideas doc when this came to mind. I have this kind of mini universe already in mind with telekinetic mafia families? The idea is that a detective is looking into a string of unusual incidents that he has been explicitly told not to, and finds himself digging into centuries of cover-ups for two warring families in his city. Unfortunately, he has put a target on his back from both families and must use his wit and quick thinking to successfully not get killed, at least not until he reveals the truth. Is this a good idea? Because I think I feel really into it. Feel free to give honest thoughts or even contribute ideas that could enhance the plot.

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u/AdHead3664 — 11 days ago