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Feedback for my first 5 pages
[Title - Frame
Genre - Thriller
Format - Short
Pages - 5 /12
Logline - A rookie thief between a job discovers a seasoned intruder was already there before him.
Any feedback. Thanks! ](https://drive.google.com/file/d/1wgsqdCTDDGRsEOgGGMo1kXGHPC4guK_C/view?usp=drivesdk)
u/Adorable_Article4670 — 1 day ago