u/Adventurous_Song_800

we got conclusion to everyone except the main one 😭.

I have been watching and following black clover for years and this series has soft spot in my heart . This is also my first time interacting in this sub 😊.

i liked the ending it was decent enough and glad it ended on good note with my boi asta becoming wizard king but one thing i wanted is some kind of conclusion on noelle . her having lunch with her sibling was wholesome but i didnt like tabata leaving her feelings for asta at an open ending .

i know that asta never showed any kind romantic feeling towards noelle so i had no problem even if they didn't got together towards the end of series . but i just wanted noelle to confront asta regarding her feeling toward him no matter the answer .

her one of the major development during megicula fight was her accepting that she loves asta but that development ended there and never picked again 😞. there was timeskip after fight with lucifero and than again timeskip after final fight with lucius and then another two year timeskip after asta defeats yuno . in all this years nothing happened and noelle just ended up becoming typical love rival with mimosa .

you are telling me she can have lunch with her siblings who bullied her since she was child but cant confront asta 😭about her feeling . even dense head like yami got her charlotte ( happy for both of them ) .

i guess thats it . i just wanted a conclusion than a open ending like this one . i glad that noelle got a nice ending with her siblings though .

u/Adventurous_Song_800 — 9 days ago

what makes a character "well written" ?

I am sure this question has been asked here hundreds of time already but still I want to ask it again . I am trying to write a fantasy novel so I want your advice on what makes a character well written or which part of the character writing should I focus more ? I want to try and make my mc as well written as possible .

Their are many important facets of character writing in fantasy or any novel like a character's chemistry with other characters , parallels between characters , symbolism , depth , complexity development and growth , character being flawed , consistency in character

there are so many things that I am confused where to focus . so I will appreciate on any help I could get cause i am still a beginner 😓.

edit : a bonus question , hope you would answer it too . when you compare writing of two characters , all of this facets I mentioned are important to consider and to find out which one is better written , right?

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u/Adventurous_Song_800 — 11 days ago

bro what 😭 [ spoiler chapter 2986 ]

>Cassie finally spoke, barely preventing her voice from shaking:

>"She is alive."

>As the echo of his hoarse, unpleasant voice resounded in the darkness, the darkness seemed to resonate and shroud him like a harrowing mantle.

>His subtle presence suddenly grew, filling the vast hall — it was so overwhelming, in fact, that its pressure felt like a physical force, pushing Cassie back and making the ancient stones groan.

>A moment later, he was already upon Asterion, the white blade of his graceful sword moving with the speed of lightning, with the weight of a mountain.

>Cassie lowered her stance, but was still thrown back by the shockwave of their clash.

>‘I... must hurry...'

dawg how is mad prince presence pushing and throwing back supreme cassie 😭 . and why is cassie voice shaking while just talking to madprince .

insane aura ngl .

u/Adventurous_Song_800 — 14 days ago

bro not only vtb took 5th legacy aspect relic but she also stole the sacred memory of her own death 😭 . citadel , abundance and rat are also gone🥀 now someone will come and say all of this is not a major loss .but i am glad wolf still seems to be alive .

>He lingered for a long while, and then finally read the next string of runes.

>They read:

>...Master: Changing Star.

i am both happy and sad while reading this man . such mixed emotion 🥺 my boi became a slave again .

so all those theory that his true name will change are also proven wrong and he is still goat "lost from light"

u/Adventurous_Song_800 — 17 days ago

>[You have lost a Memory.]

>[You have lost a Memory.]

>[You have lost a shade.]

>[You have lost a shade.]

>[You have lost a shade...]

>[You have lost a Memory.]

>[You have lost a shade.]

>[...You have lost a Citadel.]

>The Vile Thieving Bird had already absconded, taking whatever it pleased with it. There was no trace of it — or of its ill-gotten gains — left.

damn you fated 🥀

u/Adventurous_Song_800 — 18 days ago