u/Appropriate-Yam8863

• Title: In A Perfect World
• Format: Feature
• Page Length: 3
• Genres: Drama
• Logline: A nihilist who believes the human existence is meaningless is forced to survive out on his own after an economic apocalypse which leaves everyone to fend for themselves and no law enforcement
• Feedback Concerns: Only sharing the first 3 pages for now, but I need feedback on how to maybe improve this. It's my first true screenplay and spec script that I'm actively working on and I want to know if I'm doing this right or not

https://drive.google.com/file/d/1zkOF8EHDhPaQovK-cb3msT6m84zM2d78/view?usp=sharing

So i'm in the process of writing my first script, basically a synopsis of it is "A nihilist who believes the human existence is meaningless is forced to survive out on his own after a global economic apocalypse which leaves everyone to fend for themselves and no law enforcement"

I've just finished the opening scene and i was wondering if i could get some opinions on it and maybe some changes i need to make

https://drive.google.com/file/d/1kDee21hkUW3r3Q9aTGAXUowFNL2LsMl4/view?usp=sharing

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So i'm from Pakistan and i've always wanted to make a movie in Urdu. The problem comes with the script though, because I don't know how to write in Urdu, and i wanna write the script in english but only the dialogue in Urdu. How do i go about this? Do i just put (In Urdu) before all of my dialogue or can i just write a romanized version of my dialogue?

sorry if its a pretty stupid question but ive been thinking about this lately and i havent really seen many people talk about it

ive been thinking about the whole "if there is a hell then you dont wanna risk going there do you" thing and the entire concept sort of reminded me of the ludovico technique

the loss of free will, being forced into doing only good from this fear

yes i know what the entire theme is but i couldnt help but think about this, let me know what u guys think