What do you think of my first song? It's about my time at university and how my friends really pulled me through it.
https://on.soundcloud.com/jmGGOWQmKo9yoO49pV
This is my first original song, which I have followed through with to what I would call 'finished', to the level of production I am capable of. I tried to just lean into it being my own kind of quirky with some pitched-up vocals at the start. My main influence right now is definitely Frank Ocean, this song, specifically, is quite inspired by Futura Free. I'd like to make some less introspective and more boppable songs soon, maybe move towards more Tame Impala sonic influence. Perhaps you have advice for moving in that direction?
My DAW is Logic Pro X and Ive been learning music production / making for just a couple months now. I'd love any feedback, whether its on the production side of things or more the lyrical content or arrangement of the song.