r/MusicFeedback

https://open.spotify.com/track/5YNsgncL4N52hCU3gUSCxI?si=o-WKh35IRPeLwEOZZvvubg&utm\_source=copy-link

Been discovering a lot of independent artists lately through The Cauldron community.

Opening submissions up again for new Spotify releases.

https://thecauldron.rocks/submit

I normally do orchestra based music for film, but my second favorite genre is country/rock so I decided to write a song. I’ve only recorded the intro, first verse, and chorus. Haven’t been able to finish the rest because my electric guitar strings broke and I’m waiting for new ones.

Posted an earlier version a while ago looking for feedback on the guitar tone. I'm still not happy with it, but I'll come back to it. Looking for general feedback about the entire track: mixing, arrangement, performance, whatever. Thanks!

is this the correct structure? and thoughts on the song/lyrics/vocals

verse one
the fear of falling apart, losing friends, being alone
the urge to have a good heart but knowing that i have flaws to show
ihave flaws that show

pre chorus
i feel it day and night
convinced that my intrusive thoughts are right
in their perspective i am such a difficulty
such a difficulty

chorus
im imperfect, so am i undeserving
am i worth it, or emotionally draining
don't even feel like trying
yeah i don't feel like trying anymore
i wish that i wasnt a difficulty
why do i have to be a difficulty

verse two
The fear of slipping up, making mistakes
The need to prove I’m here for the love of the game
For the love of the game

prechorus 2
i hear it in my mind
seeking validation for a piece of mind
in my perspective i am such a difficulty
such a difficulty

chorus
im imperfect, so am i undeserving
am i worth it, or emotionally draining
don't even feel like trying
yeah i don't feel like trying anymore
i wish that i wasnt a difficulty
why do i have to be a difficulty

A song about a dead star whose light still reaches us, like someone who has already left without us knowing.

Hey everyone! I'm finishing up the final details of my first single, and since I've been working on it alone for so long, I'm looking for some external feedback.

I started singing 8 months ago and recorded all the instruments myself. I used to compose film music, so I incorporated that influence into my style. Any feedback would be greatly appreciated, whether it's about the mix, the performance, or the overall vibe!

(Also, this isn't the official cover art.)

Thanks everyone for your time!

Made the beat and wrote the lyrics yestermorn. Need feedback, plz!

I could finally find the notes so I can finally export the midi for chatgpt to give me feedback, since the original .flp is long gone (deleted in like 2013 when I formated my computer)
The 5th to 8th bar (the variation part in the second half of the song) doesnt have the exact correct notes just yet but... Ill fix later, and for now it gives a good impression of the track what it sounds like. ALSO I would like to add and invent a break beat for this track so this is gonna be a complete remake project, which will be theraputic for me.

Feedback on the composition would be appreciated, do note it is aimed at being harder electronic music sooo.. Thanks in advance for proper feedback. I want to compose more melodies but IDK if I am any good at it... so... feedback would be appreciated a bunch!

I want to get back into music... but IDK I thought I left a pretty high bar for myself. Havent made music since I was 17 and I am 31 now. Except for 2 song that are meh I made in 2025. And one song I made in 2021

It still needs some work but I think Ive got a pretty big beat. I just love the bassline. Any feedback on what to change is appreciated, or also interested in knowing if it doesnt resonate with you.

When I listened to the original MP3, I wanted to hear the bass notes better, they are burried by a brass like thing, and that was a major mistake when I did the song. But I didint have the same understanding or perspective of the beat then that I have now.

I started working on an idea that floated into my head today and this was the rough product. If it had some airy vocals in it do you think this song has potential? My aim was to make a nostalgic sort of dreamy song. I recommend listening in headphones for the full experience and thank you for all feedback.

A short but intense track.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=j8RQUNOFquU

Hey Y'all. Hoping to share and get you feedback on my work. Thanks in advance.

This is purely a passion project for me.

https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=IFVFTlw8UdY&list=RDIFVFTlw8UdY&start_radio=1&pp=ygUZVGhlIGVuZGxlc3MgdW5rbm93biB1bmRlcqAHAQ%3D%3D&ra=m