
Leaving to cross hatch
Can someone pls help me and point out my mistakes 🙏

Can someone pls help me and point out my mistakes 🙏
Hello everyone I've uploaded 2 posts yesterday 1 to know if my boxers are real and the second to know what they worth
After a positive feedback with people telling me the boxes are legit I've made a second post to find a buyer but today I've wanted to double check that the boxes are real I did a crosse reference with lots of boxes that are for sure real and I've come to a conclusion that my boxes may be counterfeits although i can't tell for a 100 present
Any way I'm saying all of this just to warn people to look at the color of the boxes and the way the logos of the company are spread across the boxs as to not make the mistake i almost did
Thank you 🙏
I know the drawings themselves have problems but i want to focus on why my lines are so bad with the pen if anyone could help me I'll appreciate it 🙏