u/Buckth3weasel

So I made these cards. I want to clarify that, yes they are OP, yes it was intentional because it fits the story I am using them in. I thought I’d share and if you have any suggestions, feel free to give them! I am open to criticism!

Here are the ideas behind the cards effects, just so you know the goal:
Lucifer- Being more powerful than any monster on the field, becoming even stronger when it is “peerless” (it is alone on your field)
Beelzebub-Gaining strength through amassing XYZ material and card advantage
Satan-Obliterating the field as much as possible
Asmoedeus-Taking control of opponent’s monsters
Mammon-Stealing resources from your opponent (I thought the monster zones worked best for this concept because they could actually be put to use by you instead of stealing cards they add to their hand that would be useless to you)
Leviathan-Copying effects
Belphegor- floodgate central for little effort

Their card type and monster types were chosen intentionally by me, so those are not changing. However, I am more than open if you have critiques on their effects

Based off the normal monster “Blackland Fire dragon”, I created this archetype. The only other thing is an Xyz monster I couldn’t fit, so I’ll put it in the comments. It’s probably kinda OP so I’d appreciate some suggestions and advice, but do keep in mind I plan on using it in a fanfic. Tell me what you think!

EDIT: couldn’t put the photo in the comments, so I’ll put the Xyz card’s info here:

Blackland Void dragon
Rank:4
ATK:0
DEF:0
Requirements: 2+ level 4 DARK monsters
Effect: This card cannot be targeted for attacks or card effects. When this card is the only monster you control: Dettach all overlay units from this card; negate all other monster effects on the field and make all monsters on the Field DARK. Then, use this card and any amount of your opponent’s DARK monsters to fusion summon a ‘Blackland’ monster. The fusion summoned monster summoned by this effect gains 500 ATK for wvery material dettached to activate this effect. This card can substitute for any specifically named fusion material on the fusion monster. You can only activate this effect of ‘Blackland Void Dragon’ once per duel. If this card is destroyed: reduce the ATK of all non-DARK monsters on the field to 0.

(Thanks to my buddy for the art cause I can’t draw 🥲)

Age: 15 (Entrance exams-> AFO incident) 16 (post AFO incident->end)
Quirk: Enchantment- Ikidori’s quirk allows him to enchant items to have unique abilities. In order to enchant an item, Ikidori needs something connected to how he wants to enchant the item (E.G. if he wants to enchant something with wind, he’ll need a wind quirk user or a strong wind). The situation in which he enchants his items also affects their potency, the more intense situation equals a stronger enchantment (E.G a light breeze= Weak wind enchantment. A storm =Strong wind enchantment). The enchantments only work when Ikidori is using them.
**Hero name:**Enchantment hero, Icarus
Personality: Very positive, sorta like a puppy with how he goes from high energy to sleeping like he’s dead, pretty smart (becomes known as 1-A’s handyman), Very nerdy, hyper-obsessive over his favourite stuff, massive foodie, very caring, clingy, likes physical contact, protective, has self-worth problems
Hero costume: a mix between Samurai and ninja but entirely scrap based (colours are a mix of purple white and classic scrap colours), his purple Fanny pack on his right hip
Backstory: Ikidori was born into a unique family. Their business was entirely based around collecting things, like broken parts of vehicles and old systems and weapons and old cars and stuff like that, and reforging and repurposing them for the modern world. His parents called it a “Revitalisation scrapyard”. And it was surprisingly successful, with them being a large exporter of modern devices, vehicles, or metal art pieces/collectibles across Japan, even getting an international order from time to time. Ikidori was taught that everything had worth if you looked at it from the right angle. But as Ikidori grew up, he found it hard to have his own worth. He only saw himself as needing other things to be useful to have worth, that he was nothing when he was by himself. So he worked hard, tried to help all the time even when he was tired or hurting. He was able to make good use of his quirk with all the stuff that came in to the scrapyard and get a good selection of scrap based equipment that he’d take into UA. He always smiles and always remains positive and he always helps others, because that’s the only way he finds real worth in himself, which is why he wants to become a hero. His father, Tsuyoi, has a quirk that lets him absorb energy and use it later (he doubles as the hero Daedalus), his mother, Chisei, has a quirk that lets her analyse objects and examine all their properties, and his brother, Kengen, has a quirk that allows him to absorb the properties of objects. The family has eight different pets: An eagle named Zeus, two ferrets Named Loki and Hermes, a dog named Anubis, a cat named Ama, a pig named Ares, a snake named Boros, and a moose named Drasil. They have gotten express permission from the government to own these pets after having rescued all of them and these animals growing attached to them.
Likes: video games, hugs, weapons, blankets, food, other people, sleeping, animals
Dislikes: Studying (he doesn’t enjoy it, he just knows he has to do it), sitting around doing nothing, being in a large crowd, food prepared badly (Boiled vegetables), himself, being sick
Blood type: O+
Favourite food: Anything Italian

Ikidori’s (main) enchanted items:
•His Fanny pack- Ikidori’s most important magic item, it’s used for storage. It’s enchanted with a high tech storage unit so its space is incredibly large and Ikidori can hold a very large variety of items in it.
•Ikidori’s sword- Enchanted while he was in the middle of an intense storm, this sword is infused with the power of wind and lightning
•Ikidori’s Shield- This shield is enchanted with a jet turbine, and is infused with the power of a flaming spin. On command, the shield can spin and emit a sparking flame that can be used for defence and offence
•Ikidori’s bow- This bow is Enchanted with parts of a missile, fireworks and eagle feathers. Therefore, the arrows it shoots become tracking projectiles that cause explosions on impact, both damaging and disorientating
•Ikidori’s Glaive- This Glaive is enchanted with the power of waves and Ikidori enchanted it in quite a vicious river rapids, finishing up any gaps in the enchants with old wave systems from water parks. Therefore, this glaive emits waves when it’s swung, resulting in powerful swings excellent for crowd control

Tell me what you think of him! From your or your OC’s perspective! (Btw, I don’t have any other art of him in case you were curious)