u/Capital_Lynx_3382

I am writing a book in which the fl goes on to become an actress. Basically she is a nepokid. I am planning to show the dark side of bollywood in my book like I have lurked on reddit a lot. And I found some things that I would like to add in the book.

The problem is that I have planned the name as Yaahvi Kapoor. The thing is you can draw some parelells between her family and the already existing Kapoor family. It is very subtle though. Should I change the surname or keep it as it is? Also suggest some options for the the surname.

Thank youu

I am a writer and I have a habit of putting some songs before I start the chapter. Now I have taken the decision to rewrite my book from scratch for some reasons. So I have been thinking should I add like a couplet or quatrain before the chapter. Or should I just stick with songs?

I am writing a story where a girl gets cheated on. Turns out the guy did not actually cheat, it was a manipulation. The thing is the girl's response is like very dumb. And I want to rewrite it. Moreover, I am thinking of making the guy actually cheat. That would mean I will have to rewrite the entire thing and I have written 13 or 14 chapter on which I cringe badly. So should I rewrite or move on to another idea I have in my mind? Even if I move on, it would feel like a betrayal to the characters I spent hours on. Help me out.

The story continues like this. Then the girl falls for her bestfriend. Not going much into this detail. It's not important.

And this guy's story will be continued where he fake dates an actress. Sub consciously, he compares the actress to his ex. The actress feels like a second choice and breaks their fake dating thing. Her parents arrange her marriage with an older guy who is willing to help her out. The guy realises his feelings for the actress and confronts her. Right now I am just stuck here so help me out.

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