u/Character-Try-3914

▲ 5 r/Poems

I wrote this and need a thought..

I hide my wounds so the light in me won’t shake,
And smile at strangers while I quietly break.

I sit beside the night, not fearing dark,
But knowing there my truest features mark.
No enemy has carved a deeper scar,
No passing grief has wounded me so far.

I am the hand that tears my soul apart,
Then asks the ruined pieces where they are.
I run from one abyss unto the next,
As though I was conceived for ruin’s text.

I cradle my own heart like grieving mothers do,
And whisper, “Please hold on,” while breaking through.
Within my chest a thousand voices plead;
One begs for life while others choke the need.

No soul have I betrayed as much as mine,
For when I needed love, I left behind.
I thought the enemy a door to close,
Until I found him breathing in my bones.

I stand before the mirror, lost from view;
I do not know that girl, she hates me too.
Each night I gather fragments I have torn,
Then scatter them again before the morn.

There is a grave inside that speaks my name,
While my exhausted soul mourns what I became.
And if they ask what fear has come to be,
I’ll say: “It’s being left alone with me.”

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Been so long since I wrote something in English so I have no idea how good or bad this looks :) Any advice or thoughts on it are all welcomed 🫶🏻.

-Ward

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u/Character-Try-3914 — 9 hours ago

Between the OG and the Reboot

I just finished season one of the 2008 reboot, and it made me want to check out the original series. But now I’m confused. I know the character names are different, but I thought they were supposed to mirror each other in some way. Now I’m having trouble figuring out who’s who between the original series and the reboot.

Is there a chart or a website I can use as a reference? I came across another post saying the reboot storyline is different, and it feels like it could have been a completely different show if it had a different name.. now I’m not sure.

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u/Character-Try-3914 — 4 days ago

Flank pain

I have been experiencing back pain since Saturday, and ever since that day, it has gotten progressively worse. Laying on my back or my stomach hurts, even breathing in hurts, and I literally get dizzy from the pain. At first, I thought it had something to do with my kidneys or the fact that I crack my back. Today, it got so bad that I called 911, and they ruled out everything — pregnancy, kidney stones, and a UTI. Nothing came back positive, which is good, but I’m still not sure what caused it. It was very sudden, and although I suspect it might be from cracking my back, I’m still wondering if there could be another reason, because the pain is so bad. On a scale from 1 to 10, it’s between a 9 and 10, and around a 7 when I’m on medication. Other than that, I’m beginning to panic, thinking it could become permanent pain that may never heal.

The doctor in charge referred me to the back and spinal department, and I’m going to call them tomorrow to schedule an appointment. But for people who have experienced or gone through something similar, did it heal? How long did it take? What should I do? The pain is so bad that the only way I can really escape it is by sleeping, even while being on medication.

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u/Character-Try-3914 — 9 days ago
▲ 1 r/Lice

Im literally freaking out.. only had lice as a kid once and the only thing i have noticed is a crawling sensation + couple of what looks like pimples on my scalp.. no itching (i just do when i feel the crawling thing) though it was dandruff at first but now idk 😭.

u/Character-Try-3914 — 18 days ago