Let's discuss songwriting
to start - I see Ian Curtis' work as one of the best examples of songwriting potential -
pure unconscious raw evocative force with powerfully hypnotic imagery - yet at the same time an enigmatic simplicity at its core
[Curtis himself said he wrote mostly unconsciously without giving the lyrics much of a second-thought [if my recall is right]
"to the center of the city in the night, waiting for you"
"in a room with a window in the corner I found truth"
I'm just interested in seeing what makes up a great song to the lot of you -
I'd give an example of a bad lyric to me as "I want a perfect body, I want a perfect soul"
since it feels overly needy to me - which leads me to cringe - and it also feels like a bit of a superficial wish - even if it seems otherwise - don't think anyone in a state of subsistence could even conceive of such a thought - and a perfect soul makes zero sense to me philosophically since life is imperfect it is impossible for me to even conceive of a perfect soul, since as I see it it would require the elimination of all of life's subtleties between good and evil - meaning, you can't have a perfect soul if you're willing to face life as it truly is - with all its noise and all its potential -
so for me good lyrics as opposed to bad lyrics are those which have philosophical grounding at its core - say I might've liked this line better if the song were simply a parody - so that it showed the silliness of such a line - and where it might lead - the wish for a perfect body also makes me think of a hyper-consumptive intensely self-absorbed state - which defeats the purpose of what a body is for - which is to find a way to connect, to create, to cross barriers - so I just find the line silly - it tells me nothing, and it just shows me this self-absorbed neediness to the extreme
so aye, I hope this is enough for you all to start some kind of discussion -