u/ConcentrateNew8919

In A Free Country

Historical Romance

When his father's factory burns in the Luddite Riots, an army spy hunts down the vigilante behind it, the mysterious Mother of Panthers. But his pursuit of her becomes a courtship that threatens both their lives.

https://drive.google.com/file/d/1J3aVCuv5zAfHT1FW9IB0K8dvVmnM3WH3/view?usp=sharing

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I've started on this script for an enemies-to-lovers romance set during the Luddite Riots. Interested in any thoughts on if the opening (and the premise) catches your attention, and would make you want to read more.

Title: In A Free Country

Format: Feature

Genre: Historical Romance

Logline: When his father's factory burns in the Luddite Riots, an army spy hunts down the vigilante behind it, the mysterious Mother of Panthers. But his pursuit of her becomes a courtship that threatens both their lives.

https://drive.google.com/file/d/1J3aVCuv5zAfHT1FW9IB0K8dvVmnM3WH3/view?usp=sharing

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The opening, any thoughts welcome!

Genre: Horror, Historical

Logline: Laura, a young debutante, befriends a mysterious woman in her family’s remote Austrian castle, they share an intoxicating connection. But after she's revealed to be a centuries-old vampire yearning for her blood, Laura must fight to overcome her desire for her to destroy her.

https://drive.google.com/file/d/13DH0M0WXXJ4bhpsT2-tQhImKQ9MZZX93/view?usp=sharing

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I posted an earlier draft a while ago, after getting feedback I've tightened the middle to give it more action and plot.