u/D1mZ

Guys I wrote a story. Need your review.

I wrote this story and took Chatgpt's help to segregate it into chapters and add few details that help the reader to understand how I want to present it on screen.Here's the link

Edit: Some people get the feel that this is AI slop. I get your point. But it's not AI slop. The whole story is mine. It's a very complex story and can easily be misunderstood. I took AI's help to add details about the concepts being explored and what I want the audience to feel. I wrote the screenplay in such a manner that creates an impact but the opening scenes may mislead people into an erotic thriller which is not the case.

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u/D1mZ — 6 days ago

Tried cinthol after many years

I tried cinthol after many years just out of curiosity. I don't say it's a good soap but the smell made me nostalgic and transported me to a different era. It was used during my childhood at my granny's house. It's getting easily dissolved in water and may not last long like the gel bars I use daily. The smell was a bit similar to old phenyls, Dettol and lifebuoy.

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u/D1mZ — 8 days ago