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I feel stuck with this piece, I would appreciate some composition-related advice.
My thoughts on problems with it:
-I don't like the execution of the big black shape, I think it should fade out with soft edged but only stay sharp near the focal point
-The focal point doesn't pull me in, and this is my biggest issue. It's clearly the area with the biggest contrast but it doesn't look interesting enough
-The light part is too big perhaps.
I would love to hear your suggestions and critiques.
u/Dopamine473 — 18 days ago