u/Double-Example4744

The Mother Accepts Me

When I die plant a tree over my grave,

for my body is the earth's,

allow her, the mother of all,

to take me back into her womb.

 

Allow her to take my body,

all the hurt and pain in this meat and flesh,

blood and skin,

receive nourishment from me.

 

create from it, create from me.

 

The carbon, for the sugars,

to become the tree's sweetness,

it will be fetid

 

The nitrogen, for the leaves

To breathe the chlorophyll green

it will be fading

 

The calcium, for the bark,

To shape the ridges

it will be frail

 

The potassium, for the posture,

To keep the tree tall,

it will be flaccid

 

The phosphorus, for the beginning,

To spark new life,

it will be faltering

 

A wasted soul in life

 

I have taken from first breath from her

Ever thanking in life, her sacrifice to me,

I dedicate myself to her,

 

She will accept me,

 

The carbon will become sweet

The nitrogen will breathe Chlorophyll Green

The calcium will Shape Ridges

The potassium will fortify

The phosphorus will take hold

 

In death, life will continue through me

 

In death, I am enough for her

 

– T.S., June 2026

-- This is my first attempt at writing/posting poetry, more than happy to listen to advice or just hear thoughts and opinions on bettering my craft.

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u/Double-Example4744 — 7 days ago

My first butterfly photograph!

Recently started taking pictures and pushed into bug/arachnid/butterfly, just all small species has been the most fun for me so far. Here’s my first pic actually trying for a photograph. I was out on a hike and the butterfly was hanging around and landed on my hand.

Any tips I’m happy to take, I don’t have any proper equipment, but I do have the iPhone 17 pro max with whatever camera it has. If I stick with it for awhile I do eventually plan on getting equipment, I just don’t want to jump in head first on an impulse.

Edit: thank you for the award sweet stranger 🫶

u/Double-Example4744 — 1 month ago