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Writing about Complex Trauma and Childhood Neglect

Hello! I am writing a short story on my experience with complex trauma and childhood neglect. My brain is telling me that this is a waste of time, but I put a lot of energy into this introduction. Can you read and let me know if this would entice you to keep reading?

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I am twenty-four years old, which is the age my mother was when she had me, and that has been on my mind lately. 

The first thing you should know is that I cannot remember most of my childhood. I have tried to remember. I have sat with therapists and notebooks and other people’s photographs and stories, and I have pressed against the years the way you press a bruise to see if it's still there. Most of the time there is nothing. Not pain. Not memory. Just the soft place where something may have been before. Sometimes, if I press hard enough, a scene appears. 

The scenes are my memories. They float, untethered to any larger story. The baseball bat to the car windshield. The vase shattering against the wall above my head. My brother, four years old, crying in the back of a Ford Expedition, ice cream dripping down his hands, red and blue lights flashing around the vehicle. Razor blades hidden under my mattress. The thirty Tylenol in middle school I swallowed to find happiness. The grandfather I had never met, who I prayed to anyway. The pumpkin pie on that one Thanksgiving before Adam was born. The wasabi in the bathroom of the primary bedroom the five of us shared. The locks on the pantry and the bedrooms converted to prison cells, with only a mattress and pillow. The notebook I had to wear around my neck because my memory was bad, hanging there like a bell on a cat, so the household could hear me coming and know what I was. The cocaine as an excuse to escape. The cries and sobs. The screams and the silence. 

I am told that this is dissociation related to complex trauma. I am told that my brain does this on purpose, a kindness to fight for survival. I do not feel kind towards my brain. I do not know what to feel about it. It is the thing that does the feeling. 

I am twenty-four years old. I live in Arizona now, in a house with a yard my husband works on. The sky here is blue and clear, and at certain hours of the afternoon it turns a color I have no word for. I stand in my kitchen, holding a cup of coffee, and I think: I am alive. I am still here. Then I think: for what. 

That is the part I want to tell you about. Not the not-remembering, but the standing at the window. The for what. 

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u/Early-Wishbone-8809 — 6 days ago

The Butterfly Garden - Dot Hutchinson

The Butterfly Garden is the first book I've read by Dot Hutchison. I've since completed book two of the series and recently started book three. If you enjoy horror, these books are perfect and well worth reading.

Hutchison's writing style (alternating between the protagonist's first-person perspective and a third-person perspective) was captivating. The book centers on an interview between the FBI and a victim of a notorious serial killer, with memories woven in between.

>!Inara and Vic make a perfect storytelling duo. The way Inara's story unfolds genuinely reflects the voice of a survivor. Her life has never been easy; she was on her own from an early age and learned to be self-sufficient beyond her years. In many ways, Inara's trauma is the reason she survived the Garden. As a child, she learned to watch, read, and understand people and how they operate, so when she was taken by the Gardener, her toolbox was already full of survival skills, not only for herself, but for the other girls as well. Inara's relationship with Lyonette, the first "Garden Mother," was my favorite of the book. Lyonette set the stage for the girls to one day be free, and her final moments were crucial to understanding the true horror of what was happening in the Garden.!<

>!Hutchison does a beautiful job of describing the Garden itself, emphasizing its beauty while detailing all of the pain hidden behind its walls. The story is dark, sick, and twisted. It explores the tension between family loyalty and moral right and wrong, the disturbing concept of a victim manipulating her captor into loving her in order to be set free, and the heartbreak of realizing that, for some, family will always outweigh morality. Equally striking are the juxtaposed relief and horror of Avery's final moments, the shock of discovering Sophia's past, and the sobering realities of life after the Garden.!<

>!I've read several reviews from readers who were dismayed at the lack of escape attempts in the book, but I don't feel this indicates poor writing. If anything, I believe it reinforces the fear that these girls experienced. I could never imagine attempting escape given all of the passive deterrents the Gardener provides. Inara found the safest way (though still dangerous) to attempt escape, and luckily everything fell into place to allow it to happen. I've also seen reviews calling the relationship between Inara and Desmond "glossed over," and to those readers I'd recommend continuing with book two for more insight there. Overall, this book was a beautiful work of art that brings light to these fictional girls' experiences.!<

What are your thoughts on the book? Have you read the rest of the series? What popped out to you?

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u/Early-Wishbone-8809 — 9 days ago

The Butterfly Garden - Dot Hutchinson

The Butterfly Garden is the first book I've read by Dot Hutchison. I've since completed book two of the series and recently started book three. If you enjoy horror/thrillers, these books are perfect and well worth reading.

Hutchison's writing style (alternating between the protagonist's first-person perspective and a third-person perspective) was captivating. The book centers on an interview between the FBI and a victim of a notorious serial killer, with memories woven in between.

>!Inara and Vic make a perfect storytelling duo. The way Inara's story unfolds genuinely reflects the voice of a survivor. Her life has never been easy; she was on her own from an early age and learned to be self-sufficient beyond her years. In many ways, Inara's trauma is the reason she survived the Garden. As a child, she learned to watch, read, and understand people and how they operate, so when she was taken by the Gardener, her toolbox was already full of survival skills, not only for herself, but for the other girls as well. Inara's relationship with Lyonette, the first "Garden Mother," was my favorite of the book. Lyonette set the stage for the girls to one day be free, and her final moments were crucial to understanding the true horror of what was happening in the Garden.!<

>!Hutchison does a beautiful job of describing the Garden itself, emphasizing its beauty while detailing all of the pain hidden behind its walls. The story is dark, sick, and twisted. It explores the tension between family loyalty and moral right and wrong, the disturbing concept of a victim manipulating her captor into loving her in order to be set free, and the heartbreak of realizing that, for some, family will always outweigh morality. Equally striking are the juxtaposed relief and horror of Avery's final moments, the shock of discovering Sophia's past, and the sobering realities of life after the Garden.!<

>!I've read several reviews from readers who were dismayed at the lack of escape attempts in the book, but I don't feel this indicates poor writing. If anything, I believe it reinforces the fear that these!< >!girls!< >!experienced. I could never imagine attempting escape given all of the passive deterrents the Gardener provides. Inara found the safest way (though still dangerous) to attempt escape, and luckily everything fell into place to allow it to happen. I've also seen reviews calling the relationship between Inara and Desmond "glossed over," and to those readers I'd recommend continuing with book two for more insight there. Overall, this book was a beautiful work of art that brings light to these fictional girls' experiences.!<

What are your thoughts on the book? Have you read the rest of the series? What popped out to you?

u/Early-Wishbone-8809 — 9 days ago