Title: PARMIGIANO
Genre: Commedia all’ Italiana flair. Drama. Comedy.
Pages: 22
Format: Short film
Logline: A reluctant appointed heiress to an Italian Parmigiano legacy is faced with losing it to a rival family.
Looking for constructive feedback on storyline, characters/arc, pacing and scene development.
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Title: PARMIGIANO
Genre: Commedia all’Italian
Pages: 20
Format: Short Film
Logline:
A heiress to an Italian Parmigiano legacy is faced with losing it to a rival family.
An Italian story laced with family rivalry, Parmigiano tradition and a touch of commedia all’italiana flair.
Comparable: Vittorio De Sica’s witty family clashes
Constructive feedback on theme, tone, characters, dialogue, story arch, and settings.
Note: I was inspired with creative freedom to introduce this world while adhering to the Italian elements drawn from the Consortium’s Parmigiano Reggiano’s protected legacy.