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"Iberjutlin", a dark comedy TV pilot.

"Iberjutlin", a dark comedy TV pilot.

I finished this pilot draft week or two ago. My prospects for ever getting this produced are practically nil, but I thought I'd share it for feedback anyway.

It's about a naive children's show mascot who tries to apply preschool logic to solve her friends' serious adult problems, in pursuit of wish-granting "virtue stars". Largely inspired by things like Wonder Showzen, Avenue Q and Robot Chicken.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1IIx1gdi3h6qM6O80VPGPJS7p8OwTs4LOVkxlK1h4Cm4/edit?usp=sharing

u/Mutant_Llama1 — 2 days ago

Is this screenplay idea hollywood worthy?

I have a serie idea that is absolute cinema but I feel like it is never gonna get into screen for people to see. I mean I like writing but is it imbossible dream to get into the hollywood world?

I have worked on this for over a year now and I am still exited to write it but I feel like my dreams are impossible.

The story follows two best friends whose bond feels deeper than family. In 2030, Clara returns to search for her lost friend Madison while being haunted by the choices that made her extremely wealthy. At the same time, the story shows their teenage years in 2020, when Clara rose to popularity beside the stereotypical blonde “mean girl” and slowly became obsessed with status, perfection, and money.

As Clara builds a glamorous empire through unethical choices, Madison struggles with severe insecurity and the pressure to become “perfect.” The series explores wealth, obsession, guilt, beauty standards, and friendship behind a world that looks flawless on the outside.

In the end, just when Madison finally achieves the appearance she always dreamed of, she dies unexpectedly in a car accident moments before reuniting with Clara for the first time in ten years. Even after finding success and someone who accepts her, Clara cannot escape the guilt of the past.

I built this story in a way, where it is enjoyable to watch even though you already knew the ending plot from spoilers.

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u/Zealousideal_Mud5218 — 3 days ago
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Portfolio Tessa.pdf

Title: Tessia Cross
Logline: A young Denizen of a now marginalized Mt. Olympus is chased from her home and goes on a quest to find her missing mother
Length:23
Genre: Fantasy/Adventure

Anyone willing to read and give feedback please feel free to do so. Im wanting to enter it into a contest if possible

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u/Pinapussy — 3 days ago