u/Flamevian

Turned a 9 pg script into my debut feature film. It’s a found footage horror film about a woman trapped in a liminal room, regressing into an animal. Would love any and all critical feedback on my formal choices, meaning escalation, repetition, pacing, etc.

Screenplay

Animal Trap Found Footage Horror Film

Hello, I’m looking for feedback on my debut feature film. It’s a found footage horror film about a woman trapped in a liminal room where she regresses into an animal. Would love feedback on the formal choices, acting, writing, pacing, escalation, reversals, etc. I welcome brutal and confrontational reviews, please just try and engage with the work.

Screenplay

Animal Trap Found Footage Horror Film

Hello, I’ve recently released my debut feature film. It’s a found footage horror film, about a woman trapped in a liminal room, trained to regress into an animal. I welcome any and all critical engagement with my work and am seeking aspiring critics to leave brutal and confrontational reviews on IMDb.

ANIMAL TRAP FULL MOVIE

Hello, I recently completed my 10th feature screenplay, a 9 page psychological horror film. I shot the film on a $27 budget and have released it. Would love to hear any hostile or brutal criticism. Not a request for feedback, seeking formal critical engagement on my choices as a filmmaker/writer.

Animal Trap Script

Animal Trap Feature Film (Found Footage Horror)

If you have a chance, feel free to review on IMDb.

Shot on a $27 budget. Hostile and negative reviews welcome.

Hello, I’m a writer-director developing my first feature film. I know it’s early in the process and don’t need 2000 people to tell that I’m doing things the wrong way. I’m looking for a colorist to help me color the final film and work my DPs on a “pre-grade” to possibly have while shooting, but not necessary. Really just looking for a very talented colorist who’s easy to work with. Yes you will be paid, though it won’t be as much as you’re used to and we’d negotiate. If 1k or less and a profit share opportunity is fine with you, please dm me ASAP. I’m not looking for the “best” colorist, again, just someone I can work with. Thanks.

Film is meant to be similar to KIDS, HEAVEN KNOWS WHAT, GOOD TIME, FLORIDA PROJECT, GUMMO, MID90s, WAVES, MOONLIGHT, Dazed and Confused. My intention for the grade is for it look like a shitty home video, juiced up on Mountain Dew and amphetamines, that you stumble upon on adult swim 2am and know you shouldn’t watch, but do. I’m really trying to carry the torch on the way HARMONY KORINE, RICHARD LINKLATER, LARRY CLARK, JOSH SAFDIE and SEAN BAKER make films.

If this sounds cool to you, please reach out. Cheers!